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Sad Aansoo hi basTe hain.. mumkin nahi ki muskaan la sakun... - 16th February 2007, 01:18 AM

Kabhi iTni fursaT hi nahi milli ki Tujhe jii bhar ke pyar kar sakun..
VakT ke haaThon majboor rahe hum dono hi harsu..
Tujhse bichad ke is jism me ab jaan kahan hai...
Aansoo hi basTe hain.. mumkin nahi ki muskaan la sakun...

~Priya



"Dikha kar khawaab in aankhon ko, De gaye aansoon in mein Tum..
Kaise chalka doo yeh aansoon, In mein bhi To rehTe ho Tum.."

~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ Sirf Tanu Ki ChaahaT...... ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~


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16th February 2007, 02:26 AM

Tujhse bichad ke is jism me ab jaan kahan hai...
Aansoo hi basTe hain.. mumkin nahi ki muskaan la sakun...


what can I say....you have expressed your feelings so explicitly in just a few lines....


well written

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khwaabo.n ke par kabhii kaTne na denaa
inke sahaaron me raahai.n rahe.ngii

lage.nge ye lejaa rahe alag raste
un raston pe bhii kai seekhai.n to ho.ngii

ye seekhai.n hameshaa sameTe rakhnaa
inhii.n se to sabko manzil milai.ngii


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16th February 2007, 11:15 AM

namksaar priya di

maiN samajh sakta huN aapke halatoN ko bas itna hi kahunGa ki thoRa sa aur iNtezar kar lijiye khushiyaaN aapka iNtezar kar rahi hai ..aapne apne ehsaasoN ko sabdoN ke sahare bayaaN behot khub kiye haiN

hamesa khus raheN , apna khayal rakheN

duaoN ke sath ijaazaT

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Tujhse bichad ke is jism me ab jaan kahan hai...
Aansoo hi basTe hain.. mumkin nahi ki muskaan la sakun...


what can I say....you have expressed your feelings so explicitly in just a few lines....


well written

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Aap yahan aaye itna hi bahut hai.. kuch kehne ki zaroorat bhi nahi hai aapko..

Bahut bahut shukriya..

Take Care..

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"Dikha kar khawaab in aankhon ko, De gaye aansoon in mein Tum..
Kaise chalka doo yeh aansoon, In mein bhi To rehTe ho Tum.."

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Post 2nd March 2007, 09:25 AM

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Kabhi iTni fursaT hi nahi milli ki Tujhe jii bhar ke pyar kar sakun..
VakT ke haaThon majboor rahe hum dono hi harsu..
Tujhse bichad ke is jism me ab jaan kahan hai...
Aansoo hi basTe hain.. mumkin nahi ki muskaan la sakun...

~Priya
Priya ji ko shaan ka salam,
Aachi lagi aapki ye post. hum bas yahi kahege ki..
gulos dil me or honton pe muskaan rahene do,
Na khud udaas ho or na kisi ko udaas rahne do.

aap isee trah likhi rahe mujhe intezar rahega.
Khush rahe or muskurate rahe HAMESH.

take care
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Gamo ki kader karo or unke sath jiyu,
Gam kabi fareb na denge khushi ki tarah
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namksaar priya di

maiN samajh sakta huN aapke halatoN ko bas itna hi kahunGa ki thoRa sa aur iNtezar kar lijiye khushiyaaN aapka iNtezar kar rahi hai ..aapne apne ehsaasoN ko sabdoN ke sahare bayaaN behot khub kiye haiN

hamesa khus raheN , apna khayal rakheN

duaoN ke sath ijaazaT

aapke chhotey bhaiya
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Tumhe humesha saath dekh ke bahut khushi hoti hai...

Bahut bahut shukriya pyare bhai.. jo tum humesha apni behan ke har sukh dukh me saath hote ho....

Take Care..

~Priya



"Dikha kar khawaab in aankhon ko, De gaye aansoon in mein Tum..
Kaise chalka doo yeh aansoon, In mein bhi To rehTe ho Tum.."

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hi priya ji

priya ji aapne ye rachna mein jo dard jalkaya hai wo wakehi dad ke kabil hai , aapne jo likha hai ki
tujse bichhad ke is jism mein jan kahan hai
aansoo hi baste hai mumkin nahi ki muskaan la saku

wo hamare dil ko pasand aaya, aur zindagi mein kabhi khushi hai to kabhi gum hai aapke liye bhi khuda ne khushi ka bhandar rakha hoga,

ese hi likhte rehna
aapka dost
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Kabhi iTni fursaT hi nahi milli ki Tujhe jii bhar ke pyar kar sakun..
VakT ke haaThon majboor rahe hum dono hi harsu..
Tujhse bichad ke is jism me ab jaan kahan hai...
Aansoo hi basTe hain.. mumkin nahi ki muskaan la sakun...

~Priya


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bhut khub - 7th March 2007, 09:58 AM

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Kabhi iTni fursaT hi nahi milli ki Tujhe jii bhar ke pyar kar sakun..
VakT ke haaThon majboor rahe hum dono hi harsu..
Tujhse bichad ke is jism me ab jaan kahan hai...
Aansoo hi basTe hain.. mumkin nahi ki muskaan la sakun...

~Priya
ek or khub surat khyaal par meri daad hazir hai......yun hii likhti rahiyega.......raj.........


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Priya ji ko shaan ka salam,
Aachi lagi aapki ye post. hum bas yahi kahege ki..
gulos dil me or honton pe muskaan rahene do,
Na khud udaas ho or na kisi ko udaas rahne do.

aap isee trah likhi rahe mujhe intezar rahega.
Khush rahe or muskurate rahe HAMESH.

take care
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Shaan ji..

Bahut khoob kaha aapne.... sach hi hai.. na udas raho na kisiko rehne do..

Bahut bahut shukriya aapka..

Take Care..

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"Dikha kar khawaab in aankhon ko, De gaye aansoon in mein Tum..
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Kabhi iTni fursaT hi nahi milli ki Tujhe jii bhar ke pyar kar sakun..
VakT ke haaThon majboor rahe hum dono hi harsu..
Tujhse bichad ke is jism me ab jaan kahan hai...
Aansoo hi basTe hain.. mumkin nahi ki muskaan la sakun...

~Priya

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hi priya,
kaisi ho?badi der se padi nazar tumhare is kalaa par.aur kya kahun,chan lafzon mai sab kuch kehjaana,haal-e-dil bayaan karjaana isi ko kehte hain.bahut khoob.bahut badiya.
yunhin likhti raho,khush raho.


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hi priya ji

priya ji aapne ye rachna mein jo dard jalkaya hai wo wakehi dad ke kabil hai , aapne jo likha hai ki
tujse bichhad ke is jism mein jan kahan hai
aansoo hi baste hai mumkin nahi ki muskaan la saku

wo hamare dil ko pasand aaya, aur zindagi mein kabhi khushi hai to kabhi gum hai aapke liye bhi khuda ne khushi ka bhandar rakha hoga,

ese hi likhte rehna
aapka dost
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Merul ji..

Khushi ka bhandaar to zaroor rakha hoga bhagwaan ne mere liye bhi, jaise woh apne har bachche ke liye rakhte hain... par haan abhi us bhandaar tak pohanchne me kaafi samay lagega mujhe..

khair..

Aapko yahan dekh ke bahut khushi hui.. bahut bahut shukriya!!

Take Care...

~Priya



"Dikha kar khawaab in aankhon ko, De gaye aansoon in mein Tum..
Kaise chalka doo yeh aansoon, In mein bhi To rehTe ho Tum.."

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ek or khub surat khyaal par meri daad hazir hai......yun hii likhti rahiyega.......raj.........
Bahut bahut shukriya Raj ji...

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Bahut bahut shukriya Mani ji..

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"Dikha kar khawaab in aankhon ko, De gaye aansoon in mein Tum..
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kaisi ho?badi der se padi nazar tumhare is kalaa par.aur kya kahun,chan lafzon mai sab kuch kehjaana,haal-e-dil bayaan karjaana isi ko kehte hain.bahut khoob.bahut badiya.
yunhin likhti raho,khush raho.
Pyari Sara..

Tumse to shaayad kaafi der baad baat ho rahi hai.. bahut bahut shukriya ise pasand karne ke liye aur ek baar phir mera hounsla badhaane ke liye..

Take Care..

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"Dikha kar khawaab in aankhon ko, De gaye aansoon in mein Tum..
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Kabhi iTni fursaT hi nahi milli ki Tujhe jii bhar ke pyar kar sakun..
VakT ke haaThon majboor rahe hum dono hi harsu..
Tujhse bichad ke is jism me ab jaan kahan hai...
Aansoo hi basTe hain.. mumkin nahi ki muskaan la sakun...

~Priya

priya.....en chand lafzo mein jo dard bayaan kiya hai tumne, main us dard ko mahsoos kar sakti hoon....!

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Aap humesha khush rahein..

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