|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
Registered User
Offline
Posts: 554
Join Date: Nov 2014
Rep Power: 13
|
Zinda hooN -
7th June 2015, 05:51 PM
Haal puche jo jaaN meri, to kah dena k zinda hooN
JaaN me jaaN nahi baki, lekin mar mar k zinda hooN
Kehna deedar k badle, chahe jaaN fir se jaaN lele
Chand sasooN ki moholat de, Aaah bhar bhar k zinda hooN
JaaN le gai jo jaaN meri, my yooN bejaaN sa zinda hooN
Ab aur na lo ye jaaN meri my sihar sihar k zinda hooN
Kushi itni to likhi hogi, farishtooN zara pukhta kar lo
Dedaar-e-yaar ka unse bahana kar k zinda hooN
Ise khate haiN majboori, jaaN se milo to kah dena
Dekho dariya-e-aag me pura utar k zinda hooN
Darwaaza...... ta'umr jo, band hai mere liye
BarahaaN us dar se my kehna guzar k zinda hooN
Bhushan aisA na kah dena k pagal ho gaya hooN my
BateeN khud se kah dena, my kar kar k zinda hooN
Bhushan Joshi
Last edited by bhushan; 7th June 2015 at 06:06 PM..
|
|
|
|
|
Registered User
Offline
Posts: 1,774
Join Date: Apr 2003
Location: UP, India
Rep Power: 30
|
hmm -
7th June 2015, 09:08 PM
Quote:
Originally Posted by bhushan
Haal puche jo jaaN meri, to kah dena k zinda hooN
JaaN me jaaN nahi baki, lekin mar mar k zinda hooN
Kehna deedar k badle, chahe jaaN fir se jaaN lele
Chand sasooN ki moholat de, Aaah bhar bhar k zinda hooN
JaaN le gai jo jaaN meri, my yooN bejaaN sa zinda hooN
Ab aur na lo ye jaaN meri my sihar sihar k zinda hooN
Kushi itni to likhi hogi, farishtooN zara pukhta kar lo
Dedaar-e-yaar ka unse bahana kar k zinda hooN
Ise khate haiN majboori, jaaN se milo to kah dena
Dekho dariya-e-aag me pura utar k zinda hooN
Darwaaza...... ta'umr jo, band hai mere liye
BarahaaN us dar se my kehna guzar k zinda hooN
Bhushan aisA na kah dena k pagal ho gaya hooN my
BateeN khud se kah dena, my kar kar k zinda hooN
Bhushan Joshi
|
Bhushan ji
achchhi koshis hai.. likhate rahiye..
Akant...
*********
आहट सी कोइ आये तो समझ लेना कि तुम हो...
AahaT si koi aaye to samajh lena ki tum ho...
|
|
|
|
|
Registered User
Offline
Posts: 554
Join Date: Nov 2014
Rep Power: 13
|
7th June 2015, 09:16 PM
Quote:
Originally Posted by akant
Bhushan ji
achchhi koshis hai.. likhate rahiye..
Akant...
|
Akant ji namaste,
Aapne nacheez ki peshkash ko tavajjo di, tahe dil se shukriya
Aapka apna
Bhushan
|
|
|
|
|
~$uper M0der@tor~
Offline
Posts: 8,417
Join Date: Feb 2006
Rep Power: 61
|
7th June 2015, 09:19 PM
Quote:
Originally Posted by bhushan
Haal puche jo jaaN meri, to kah dena k zinda hooN
JaaN me jaaN nahi baki, lekin mar mar k zinda hooN
Kehna deedar k badle, chahe jaaN fir se jaaN lele
Chand sasooN ki moholat de, Aaah bhar bhar k zinda hooN
JaaN le gai jo jaaN meri, my yooN bejaaN sa zinda hooN
Ab aur na lo ye jaaN meri my sihar sihar k zinda hooN
Kushi itni to likhi hogi, farishtooN zara pukhta kar lo
Dedaar-e-yaar ka unse bahana kar k zinda hooN
Ise khate haiN majboori, jaaN se milo to kah dena
Dekho dariya-e-aag me pura utar k zinda hooN
Darwaaza...... ta'umr jo, band hai mere liye
BarahaaN us dar se my kehna guzar k zinda hooN
Bhushan aisA na kah dena k pagal ho gaya hooN my
BateeN khud se kah dena, my kar kar k zinda hooN
Bhushan Joshi
|
bahut khoobsurat peshkash Bhushan saahab..... behad dard bharaa likhaa hai aapne is baar to bas ke uffff kyaa kahne....
Allah kare ye soz o gham pe thodee kamii aaye aur aapko sukoon haasil ho....
likhte rahiye
Shaad......
|
|
|
|
|
Member
Offline
Posts: 1,477
Join Date: Oct 2012
Location: Delhi .. ovalswitches@gmail.com
Rep Power: 26
|
7th June 2015, 09:19 PM
Bhushan bhai bahut dard bhare ehsaas the.per ke aapki feelings ko mehsoos kiya..keep
it up
Sanjay Sehgal
khone Pane ki daur mein yun uljha hai har bashar ,
Isee kashmeqash mein kat raha Zindagee ka safar.
|
|
|
|
|
Moderator
Offline
Posts: 5,211
Join Date: Jul 2014
Rep Power: 28
|
7th June 2015, 09:48 PM
Bahut dard hai aapke is kalaam me bhushan ji....mera dil bhar aaya padhkar....
dua hai khush rahein aap..
likhte rahein..hamse share karte rahein...
अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी
आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे
madhu..
|
|
|
|
|
Super Mod
Offline
Posts: 3,901
Join Date: Aug 2001
Location: Mumbai
Rep Power: 45
|
8th June 2015, 02:36 PM
Quote:
Originally Posted by bhushan
Haal puche jo jaaN meri, to kah dena k zinda hooN
JaaN me jaaN nahi baki, lekin mar mar k zinda hooN
Kehna deedar k badle, chahe jaaN fir se jaaN lele
Chand sasooN ki moholat de, Aaah bhar bhar k zinda hooN
JaaN le gai jo jaaN meri, my yooN bejaaN sa zinda hooN
Ab aur na lo ye jaaN meri my sihar sihar k zinda hooN
Kushi itni to likhi hogi, farishtooN zara pukhta kar lo
Dedaar-e-yaar ka unse bahana kar k zinda hooN
Ise khate haiN majboori, jaaN se milo to kah dena
Dekho dariya-e-aag me pura utar k zinda hooN
Darwaaza...... ta'umr jo, band hai mere liye
BarahaaN us dar se my kehna guzar k zinda hooN
Bhushan aisA na kah dena k pagal ho gaya hooN my
BateeN khud se kah dena, my kar kar k zinda hooN
Bhushan Joshi
|
Khoob ehsaas-e-bayaan hua hai Bhushan bhai. Aapki alfaazon mein ek tadap ek baichaani nazar aayi, yunhi kalam-e-zor badhtaa rahe, isi dua meiN...
Qasid
___________________________________________
नाम-ए-वफ़ा की जफ़ा बताएं
क्या है ज़हन में क्या बोल जाएँ
रफ़्तार-ए-दिल अब थम सी गयी है
'क़ासिद' पर अब है टिकी निगाहें
|
|
|
|
|
RADHE RADHE
Offline
Posts: 4,115
Join Date: Oct 2009
Location: DELHI
Rep Power: 58
|
8th June 2015, 04:32 PM
khoobsoorat ehsaas rahe bhushan jee aapke
likhte rahen
duaon ke saath
Aapka Apna Ishk
'इश्क' के बदले इश्क चाहना तिजारत है
इज़हार किससे करें महबूब तो दिल में है
email: rkm179@gmail.com
|
|
|
|
|
Registered User
Offline
Posts: 554
Join Date: Nov 2014
Rep Power: 13
|
9th June 2015, 10:50 PM
Quote:
Originally Posted by sameer'shaad'
bahut khoobsurat peshkash Bhushan saahab..... behad dard bharaa likhaa hai aapne is baar to bas ke uffff kyaa kahne....
Allah kare ye soz o gham pe thodee kamii aaye aur aapko sukoon haasil ho....
likhte rahiye
Shaad......
|
Sameer bhai adaab,
Aapko ye peshkash pasand aai uparwale ka karam hai...hausala afzahi k liye tahe dil se shukriya.....
Aapka apna
Bhushan
|
|
|
|
|
Registered User
Offline
Posts: 554
Join Date: Nov 2014
Rep Power: 13
|
9th June 2015, 11:00 PM
Quote:
Originally Posted by Hamdam
Bhushan bhai bahut dard bhare ehsaas the.per ke aapki feelings ko mehsoos kiya..keep
it up
Sanjay Sehgal
|
Sanjay ji namaste,
Zarranawazi ka bohot bohot shukriya, peshkash jara jyada senti thi.....par jab tak hosh aata post ho chuki thi.....par aap rayshumari me hichkichane lage hain....hamen paraya to nahi kar diya
Aapka apna
Bhushan
|
|
|
|
|
Registered User
Offline
Posts: 554
Join Date: Nov 2014
Rep Power: 13
|
9th June 2015, 11:10 PM
Quote:
Originally Posted by Madhu 14
Bahut dard hai aapke is kalaam me bhushan ji....mera dil bhar aaya padhkar....
dua hai khush rahein aap..
likhte rahein..hamse share karte rahein...
|
Madhu ji namaste,
Bohot achha laga apke comments padh kar, kabhi kabhi meri peshkash me ilm-o-hunar kam aur bhadas jiyada hoti hai......inayat banaye rakhiyega
Aapka apna
Bhushan
|
|
|
|
|
Registered User
Offline
Posts: 554
Join Date: Nov 2014
Rep Power: 13
|
9th June 2015, 11:26 PM
Quote:
Originally Posted by mast
Khoob ehsaas-e-bayaan hua hai Bhushan bhai. Aapki alfaazon mein ek tadap ek baichaani nazar aayi, yunhi kalam-e-zor badhtaa rahe, isi dua meiN...
|
Mast ji namaste,
Aapko ehsaas pasand aaye uparwale ka karam hai.......Yoon hi inayat banaye rakhiyega
Bohot bohot shukriya
Aapka apna
Bhushan
|
|
|
|
|
Registered User
Offline
Posts: 554
Join Date: Nov 2014
Rep Power: 13
|
9th June 2015, 11:28 PM
Quote:
Originally Posted by ISHK EK IBADAT
khoobsoorat ehsaas rahe bhushan jee aapke
likhte rahen
duaon ke saath
|
Ishk ji namaste,
Aapko ehsaas pasand aaye, uparwale ka karam hai..hausala fazahi ka .bohot bohot shukriya.
Aapka apna
Bhushan
|
|
|
|
|
Moderator
Offline
Posts: 1,113
Join Date: Jun 2003
Location: Mumbai
Rep Power: 38
|
10th June 2015, 06:25 PM
bohut khoob!
ishwar aapko humesha zinda rakhe aise khoobsurat kalaam likhne ke liye.
|
|
|
|
|
Registered User
Offline
Posts: 410
Join Date: Nov 2014
Location: Jammu, J&K.
Rep Power: 14
|
10th June 2015, 07:17 PM
Quote:
Originally Posted by bhushan
Haal puche jo jaaN meri, to kah dena k zinda hooN
JaaN me jaaN nahi baki, lekin mar mar k zinda hooN
Kehna deedar k badle, chahe jaaN fir se jaaN lele
Chand sasooN ki moholat de, Aaah bhar bhar k zinda hooN
JaaN le gai jo jaaN meri, my yooN bejaaN sa zinda hooN
Ab aur na lo ye jaaN meri my sihar sihar k zinda hooN
Kushi itni to likhi hogi, farishtooN zara pukhta kar lo
Dedaar-e-yaar ka unse bahana kar k zinda hooN
Ise khate haiN majboori, jaaN se milo to kah dena
Dekho dariya-e-aag me pura utar k zinda hooN
Darwaaza...... ta'umr jo, band hai mere liye
BarahaaN us dar se my kehna guzar k zinda hooN
Bhushan aisA na kah dena k pagal ho gaya hooN my
BateeN khud se kah dena, my kar kar k zinda hooN
Bhushan Joshi
|
Bohot din baad tashreef laaye haiN jenab SDC par, lekin der aayad, durust aayad.
Bohot khuub. Achhi ghazal keliye mubarakbaad.
Likhte raheiN.
Sagar Aashna
****************
Qaul thae ke 'Sagar' milengae kal magar
Taareeki musalsal hai, savera nahii hota
|
|
|
Thread Tools |
|
Display Modes |
Rate This Thread |
Linear Mode
|
|
Posting Rules
|
You may not post new threads
You may not post replies
You may not post attachments
You may not edit your posts
HTML code is Off
|
|
|
Powered by vBulletin® Version 3.8.5 Copyright ©2000 - 2024, Jelsoft Enterprises Ltd.
vBulletin Skin developed by: vBStyles.com
|
|