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Love Zinda hooN - 7th June 2015, 05:51 PM
Haal puche jo jaaN meri, to kah dena k zinda hooN
JaaN me jaaN nahi baki, lekin mar mar k zinda hooN

Kehna deedar k badle, chahe jaaN fir se jaaN lele
Chand sasooN ki moholat de, Aaah bhar bhar k zinda hooN

JaaN le gai jo jaaN meri, my yooN bejaaN sa zinda hooN
Ab aur na lo ye jaaN meri my sihar sihar k zinda hooN

Kushi itni to likhi hogi, farishtooN zara pukhta kar lo
Dedaar-e-yaar ka unse bahana kar k zinda hooN

Ise khate haiN majboori, jaaN se milo to kah dena
Dekho dariya-e-aag me pura utar k zinda hooN

Darwaaza...... ta'umr jo, band hai mere liye
BarahaaN us dar se my kehna guzar k zinda hooN

Bhushan aisA na kah dena k pagal ho gaya hooN my
BateeN khud se kah dena, my kar kar k zinda hooN

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hmm - 7th June 2015, 09:08 PM
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Haal puche jo jaaN meri, to kah dena k zinda hooN
JaaN me jaaN nahi baki, lekin mar mar k zinda hooN

Kehna deedar k badle, chahe jaaN fir se jaaN lele
Chand sasooN ki moholat de, Aaah bhar bhar k zinda hooN

JaaN le gai jo jaaN meri, my yooN bejaaN sa zinda hooN
Ab aur na lo ye jaaN meri my sihar sihar k zinda hooN

Kushi itni to likhi hogi, farishtooN zara pukhta kar lo
Dedaar-e-yaar ka unse bahana kar k zinda hooN

Ise khate haiN majboori, jaaN se milo to kah dena
Dekho dariya-e-aag me pura utar k zinda hooN

Darwaaza...... ta'umr jo, band hai mere liye
BarahaaN us dar se my kehna guzar k zinda hooN

Bhushan aisA na kah dena k pagal ho gaya hooN my
BateeN khud se kah dena, my kar kar k zinda hooN

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Bhushan ji

achchhi koshis hai.. likhate rahiye..

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7th June 2015, 09:16 PM
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Bhushan ji

achchhi koshis hai.. likhate rahiye..

Akant...
Akant ji namaste,

Aapne nacheez ki peshkash ko tavajjo di, tahe dil se shukriya

Aapka apna
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7th June 2015, 09:19 PM
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Haal puche jo jaaN meri, to kah dena k zinda hooN
JaaN me jaaN nahi baki, lekin mar mar k zinda hooN

Kehna deedar k badle, chahe jaaN fir se jaaN lele
Chand sasooN ki moholat de, Aaah bhar bhar k zinda hooN

JaaN le gai jo jaaN meri, my yooN bejaaN sa zinda hooN
Ab aur na lo ye jaaN meri my sihar sihar k zinda hooN

Kushi itni to likhi hogi, farishtooN zara pukhta kar lo
Dedaar-e-yaar ka unse bahana kar k zinda hooN

Ise khate haiN majboori, jaaN se milo to kah dena
Dekho dariya-e-aag me pura utar k zinda hooN

Darwaaza...... ta'umr jo, band hai mere liye
BarahaaN us dar se my kehna guzar k zinda hooN

Bhushan aisA na kah dena k pagal ho gaya hooN my
BateeN khud se kah dena, my kar kar k zinda hooN

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bahut khoobsurat peshkash Bhushan saahab..... behad dard bharaa likhaa hai aapne is baar to bas ke uffff kyaa kahne....

Allah kare ye soz o gham pe thodee kamii aaye aur aapko sukoon haasil ho....

likhte rahiye

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7th June 2015, 09:19 PM
Bhushan bhai bahut dard bhare ehsaas the.per ke aapki feelings ko mehsoos kiya..keep
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7th June 2015, 09:48 PM
Bahut dard hai aapke is kalaam me bhushan ji....mera dil bhar aaya padhkar....
dua hai khush rahein aap..
likhte rahein..hamse share karte rahein...


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8th June 2015, 02:36 PM
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Haal puche jo jaaN meri, to kah dena k zinda hooN
JaaN me jaaN nahi baki, lekin mar mar k zinda hooN

Kehna deedar k badle, chahe jaaN fir se jaaN lele
Chand sasooN ki moholat de, Aaah bhar bhar k zinda hooN

JaaN le gai jo jaaN meri, my yooN bejaaN sa zinda hooN
Ab aur na lo ye jaaN meri my sihar sihar k zinda hooN

Kushi itni to likhi hogi, farishtooN zara pukhta kar lo
Dedaar-e-yaar ka unse bahana kar k zinda hooN

Ise khate haiN majboori, jaaN se milo to kah dena
Dekho dariya-e-aag me pura utar k zinda hooN

Darwaaza...... ta'umr jo, band hai mere liye
BarahaaN us dar se my kehna guzar k zinda hooN

Bhushan aisA na kah dena k pagal ho gaya hooN my
BateeN khud se kah dena, my kar kar k zinda hooN

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Khoob ehsaas-e-bayaan hua hai Bhushan bhai. Aapki alfaazon mein ek tadap ek baichaani nazar aayi, yunhi kalam-e-zor badhtaa rahe, isi dua meiN...


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8th June 2015, 04:32 PM
khoobsoorat ehsaas rahe bhushan jee aapke
likhte rahen
duaon ke saath

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9th June 2015, 10:50 PM
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bahut khoobsurat peshkash Bhushan saahab..... behad dard bharaa likhaa hai aapne is baar to bas ke uffff kyaa kahne....

Allah kare ye soz o gham pe thodee kamii aaye aur aapko sukoon haasil ho....

likhte rahiye

Shaad......
Sameer bhai adaab,

Aapko ye peshkash pasand aai uparwale ka karam hai...hausala afzahi k liye tahe dil se shukriya.....

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Bhushan bhai bahut dard bhare ehsaas the.per ke aapki feelings ko mehsoos kiya..keep
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Zarranawazi ka bohot bohot shukriya, peshkash jara jyada senti thi.....par jab tak hosh aata post ho chuki thi.....par aap rayshumari me hichkichane lage hain....hamen paraya to nahi kar diya

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Bahut dard hai aapke is kalaam me bhushan ji....mera dil bhar aaya padhkar....
dua hai khush rahein aap..
likhte rahein..hamse share karte rahein...
Madhu ji namaste,

Bohot achha laga apke comments padh kar, kabhi kabhi meri peshkash me ilm-o-hunar kam aur bhadas jiyada hoti hai......inayat banaye rakhiyega

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Khoob ehsaas-e-bayaan hua hai Bhushan bhai. Aapki alfaazon mein ek tadap ek baichaani nazar aayi, yunhi kalam-e-zor badhtaa rahe, isi dua meiN...

Mast ji namaste,

Aapko ehsaas pasand aaye uparwale ka karam hai.......Yoon hi inayat banaye rakhiyega
Bohot bohot shukriya

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khoobsoorat ehsaas rahe bhushan jee aapke
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Ishk ji namaste,

Aapko ehsaas pasand aaye, uparwale ka karam hai..hausala fazahi ka .bohot bohot shukriya.
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10th June 2015, 07:17 PM
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Haal puche jo jaaN meri, to kah dena k zinda hooN
JaaN me jaaN nahi baki, lekin mar mar k zinda hooN

Kehna deedar k badle, chahe jaaN fir se jaaN lele
Chand sasooN ki moholat de, Aaah bhar bhar k zinda hooN

JaaN le gai jo jaaN meri, my yooN bejaaN sa zinda hooN
Ab aur na lo ye jaaN meri my sihar sihar k zinda hooN

Kushi itni to likhi hogi, farishtooN zara pukhta kar lo
Dedaar-e-yaar ka unse bahana kar k zinda hooN

Ise khate haiN majboori, jaaN se milo to kah dena
Dekho dariya-e-aag me pura utar k zinda hooN

Darwaaza...... ta'umr jo, band hai mere liye
BarahaaN us dar se my kehna guzar k zinda hooN

Bhushan aisA na kah dena k pagal ho gaya hooN my
BateeN khud se kah dena, my kar kar k zinda hooN

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