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WahiN Se Raat Paiham Jaagti hai -
12th August 2010, 05:27 AM
Haazreen e mehfil ek baar phir aap sabhi ki khidmat mai ek adna si paiskash, umeed hai apni qeemti aara se nawazenge
Mere lehje mai misri gholta hai wo aksar aa ke mujhme bolta hai wahiN se raat paiham jaagti hai JahaN se chaand palkeiN kholta hai Kabhi mujhme ana ka khoon ho jab lahoo meri ragoN mai khaulta hai hai shayd ghaav koi gehra uska wo meezaano mai baateiN tolta hai dia mai mujhko Allah ki amaaN mai magr maaii ka dil hai, haulta hai wo meri zaat mai mojood aslam mujhhi pe raaz mere kholta hai aslam behta dariya hu.n mujhy haath se choo kar daikho |
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12th August 2010, 01:33 PM
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aslam bhai radhe radhe bahut khoob dil se daad likhte rahiye duaon ke saath Aapka Apna Ishk 'इश्क' के बदले इश्क चाहना तिजारत है इज़हार किससे करें महबूब तो दिल में है email: rkm179@gmail.com 
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12th August 2010, 05:09 PM
[QUOTE=noor_noor;405700]Haazreen e mehfil ek baar phir aap sabhi ki khidmat mai ek adna si paiskash, umeed hai apni qeemti aara se nawazenge
Aslam sahab aadab o tasleemat .. apke Kalam eak alam ko apne hisaar me le rakha hai .. Mai mustafeed howa apki ghazal se .... Mere lehje mai misri gholta hai wo aksar aa ke mujhme bolta hai wah aslam bhai wahh kya hi bala ka sher kahe diya bhai ..abba jaan ki yaad dila di apne bhaijaan ankh namm ho gayi hain .. kitne hi asan labo laheje me kya badi baath rakh di apne..hazarh dad umid hai sher ussi pasmanzar me wazh howa gareeb pe jahan se apne kaha hai ? wahiN se raat paiham jaagti hai JahaN se chaand palkeiN kholta hai subhanallah..bhai yaar kya kaha jaye apki fikr ke mutaliq yaqeenan aisa sher sirf ap jaisa kuna mashq shaura kahe sakta ....Ye sifat to sirf allah ne Maa.N ko hi di hai bhai ..kya qoob sher kaheta ho sahab ... Kabhi mujhme ana ka khoon ho jab lahoo meri ragoN mai khaulta hai wahh...apni zaat pe mabni kahon to galat na hoga ..wahh kya kahene hain bhai dad hazir hai .. hai shayd ghaav koi gehra uska wo meezaano mai baateiN tolta hai ..aisa ho jata hai aksar mahubbat jub parwan charna lagti hai ...bahoth khoob sahab dad hazir hai.. dia mai mujhko Allah ki amaaN mai magr maaii ka dil hai, haulta hai ....mashallah kya kaha hai bhaijaan ..Maa.N to Khair maa.N taheri..kyun kar chain mila jub tak beta laut na aaye ..hazrah dad wo meri zaat mai mojood aslam mujhhi pe raaz mere kholta hai bhai zara khulke batane ki zahemat karenge app..ha ha ha ha..bhr kaff koi bhi ho bada haseen hoga ..dad eak baar fir apki is rawan dawan ghazal pe dad o mubarak baad .. allah apko aur bhi taraqiyun se nawaze .. khadim qadeertoopchi aslam |
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13th August 2010, 01:37 AM
Aslam Sahab AadaaB
Kaise hai Janab ...... bade dino bad aapki gazal nazar aayi..  Aur bahut jydaa umdaa lagi sahab kya kahuN bus bahut khoob...... Har Ashaar per dil se daad hazir hai....... Ishq sahab kya verification kiya hai bahut khoob..... Aise hi umdaa kalaamoN ke saath aate rahiye.... Khush rahiye..... Khuda Hafez..... 
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13th August 2010, 06:31 PM
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duaaon ke saath.....  YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ... Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ... ---Naresh Mehra---- |
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13th August 2010, 06:44 PM
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Aslam, wahhhhhhhhhh janab..kya baat hai... ehsaas dilkash rahe aur unki adaygi bahut hi khubsoorat... dil chhu liya aapne.... dil se daad hazir hai .... yuhi is mehfil ko roshan karte rahiye... khush rahiye... rep+++++++++++++++added.  "LAMHA"mujhko acchaa nahiiN lagtaa ko’ii hamnaam teraa , ko’ii tujhsaa ho to phir naam bhii tujhsaa rakhe.... |
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14th August 2010, 06:40 PM
Mere lehje mai misri gholta hai
wo aksar aa ke mujhme bolta hai apka andaaze bayaa alag hai sahab....... baat to sab shayri me ghum fir kar wahi rahti hai....shayad shayar kitna alag tarah se bole aur vo baat khubsurat lage ...shayad wahi shayar hai yaha ek ek lafz napa hua hai.....jaise murti tarasha ho bahut khoob sahab wahiN se raat paiham jaagti hai JahaN se chaand palkeiN kholta hai ye sher to aisa hai jaise murti tarashte huye aankh tarashna...jp ki murti tarashne ka sabse muskil kaam hai...... ek aam baat ko jin lafzo me aapne dhala hai.....is sher ki taareef bhi karna shayad zubaa ke bas ki baat nahi is sher ke liye koi daad nahi ...kuch nahi ...bus ye sher aur sannaTa jaise kahte hai ki ladki itni khubsurat thi ke manchale seeTee bajaana bhool gaye....... Kabhi mujhme ana ka khoon ho jab lahoo meri ragoN mai khaulta hai bahut khubsurat wordplay laaye hai aap........ daad haazir hai hai shayd ghaav koi gehra uska wo meezaano mai baateiN tolta hai bahut khoob... dia mai mujhko Allah ki amaaN mai magr maaii ka dil hai, haulta hai sahi baat hai bhai........maa hai ki kisi par bharosa nahi karti..... accha sher hai yaha ek typo ho gaya hai ....'hai' ka 'mai'...ho sake to correct karwa lijiyega wo meri zaat mai mojood aslam mujhhi pe raaz mere kholta hai waah ...bahut khoob.....is sher ko bhi describe karna muskil hai... paradox ki intehaa hai......jaise shayri ka hi imtihaan ho raha ho is ghazal ke baad aslam noor ho gaye......... ghazal share karne ka bahut bahut shukriya |
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16th August 2010, 05:53 AM
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Janaab bhut bhut shukriya aapki is hosla afzaaii ka................ aslam behta dariya hu.n mujhy haath se choo kar daikho |
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16th August 2010, 05:56 AM
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Qadeer sahab bhut nawaazish ghzal ki pazeeraaii ke liYn aapka tahe dil se mamnoon huN, ye aapka baDakpan hai jo aap is taraN se hosla baDhaate haiN aapne jis andaaz mai ghazal par apna qeemti tabsera farmaaya hai meiN uske liyN dil ki gehraaiyoN se aapka shukrya ada karna chahta huN, yuN hi apni mohbbatoN se nawaazte rahiye, khush rahiye aslam behta dariya hu.n mujhy haath se choo kar daikho |
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16th August 2010, 05:59 AM
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Sameer sahab meiN Allah ke karm se khair se huN bhut bhut shukriya zarranawaazi hai aapki, yuN hi hosla badhaate rahiye dua mai yaad rakhiyeaslam behta dariya hu.n mujhy haath se choo kar daikho |
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16th August 2010, 06:00 AM
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Naresh sahab aapki daad sar aankho par nawaazish hai aapki jo aapne ghazal ko yuN pasnd kia, yuN hi saath nibahaate rahiye shukriya aslam behta dariya hu.n mujhy haath se choo kar daikho |
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16th August 2010, 06:03 AM
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Lamha jii ghazal ki pazeeraii ke liyn aapka dil ki gehraaiyoN se mamnoon huN, aapne hamesha hi hosla badhaaya hai, reps ke liyN bhut bhut shukriya mujhay yaad padta hai ki mere khaate mai jo reps haiN unme sabse ziyada yogdaan aapka hi hai baDi nawaazish aslam behta dariya hu.n mujhy haath se choo kar daikho |
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16th August 2010, 06:11 AM
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Janaab Zidd sahab Tasleem, bhala mere liiyN isse fakr ki aur kya baat ho sakti hai ki aap meri hosla afzaaii is andaaz se kareiN, aapke saamne kaisa lehja kaisa wordplay sab dhare ke dhare haiN hamare liyN yahi bhut hai ki aap hame is qaabil samjhte haiN kahiN aapki ye soch is baat ki gawaahi daiti hai ki hame bhi sher kehna aata hai ya ke kabhi keh laite haiN, is khoosurat tabsare ke liyn aapka tahe dil se mamnoon huN yuN hi hosla badhaate rahiye bhut shukriya aslam behta dariya hu.n mujhy haath se choo kar daikho |
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16th August 2010, 10:17 PM
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aslam saheb ko nacheez ka salaam...! aapne takkhallus sahi chun ke rakha hai...noor_noor...waqai meiN aapke aane se mehfil meiN noor hi noor ho jaata hai... aapki ye ghazal padh kar maiN aapka fan ho gaya hu...is se zyada kuchh keh nahi sakta.... mujhe yaqeen hai ki aane wale waqt meiN, ye noor sdc se nikal poori qaynat meiN chha jayega...aur mujhe us din ka iNtzaar rahega... faqat..... Uss Rizk Se Tau Maut Bhali Jis Rizk Se Aatee Ho Tere Parwaaz MeiN Kotaahi.... vikramjethi@gmail.com |
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28th August 2010, 06:43 PM
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Bhai VIkaram aapki mohabbat hai ye jo aap yuN sochte haiN, meri adna si koshish ko yuN saraahne ke liyN aapka tahe dil se mamnoon huN, aapki dua aur daad sar aankho par bhut bhut shukriya yuN hi hosala baDhaate rahiye nawaazish aslam behta dariya hu.n mujhy haath se choo kar daikho |
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21st September 2010, 08:49 PM
Kabhi mujhme ana ka khoon ho jab
lahoo meri ragoN mai khaulta hai Zindabad mere bhai zindabad..............rep+++++ Par tujhe bevafa bhi kehna achcha nahi lagta... Mob.: +971 501297654
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28th September 2010, 10:41 PM
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Thnxxxxxxx so much Sajid sahab is hosla afzaaii, aur bhut bhut shukriya aapki qeemti reps ke liyN bhut nawaazish dear aslam behta dariya hu.n mujhy haath se choo kar daikho |
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3rd October 2010, 04:05 AM
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aaadaab aslam bhai bahot hi khoob jawaab nahi kaafi umdah ghazal se nawaaza hai aap ne is saadgee pe kaon na mar jaaye ai khodaa ladte hain aor haath me talwaar bhi nahi dher saari doaayen aor mobaarak baad qabool ho hassaas |
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6th October 2010, 07:41 AM
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aslam behta dariya hu.n mujhy haath se choo kar daikho |
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23rd October 2010, 12:48 PM
Hello,,,,,,,,,,,, sneha here, I like it........so so sweet ghazal,,,,,,, well done..
really very impressive it , i'm impressed it........ keep it up......   |
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24th October 2010, 01:10 PM
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path par kaante bahut hain tere par manjil par jaana too.ne dar na jatilata se jeewan ki isko saral banana too.ne pasat na hone paye honsle khud ka sahas khud hi juta le 
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29th October 2010, 05:13 AM
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Thnxxxxxxxx so much Sneha jii for compliments, thnxxxxx for being so kind, god bless u aslam behta dariya hu.n mujhy haath se choo kar daikho |
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30th October 2010, 05:04 AM
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Rashmi jii bhut bhut shukriyaH is hosla afzaii ka, yuN hi saath daiti rahiye aslam behta dariya hu.n mujhy haath se choo kar daikho |
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4th November 2010, 03:28 PM
Hello aslam (noor noor)Thank you very much you reply my post so i'm very happy........Thanks lot,
i like it.........you.n na samjhoge kinare pe khade rehkar tum behta dariya hu.n mujhy haath se choo kar daikho.......... Kya kahna aapke andaz ka........ |
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