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rusvaa na kiijiye - 28th May 2015, 03:16 PM

rusvaa na kiijiye mere jazbaat ko liye
ab ro bhii diijiye mere haalaat ko liye

maqbuul ho sakaa na sahi aap kaa kabhii
mai.n yaad to rahunga mulaaqaat ko liye

dil aap ke hai naam zamaane se Gaib kyaa
aur aap ki khafaa ho isii baat ko liye

jab aap chal diye the tabhii nam nigaahe.n thii.n
par aap ko ki haal ye barsaat ko liye

martaa rahaa hai aadmii dharm-o-imaan se
rotaa rahaa Safiir magar zaat ko liye

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رسوا نہ کیجئے میرے جذبات کو لئے
اب رو بھی دیجئے میرے حالات کو لئے

مقبول ہو سکا نہ سہی آپ کا کبھی
میں یاد تو رہوںگا ملاقات کو لئے

دل آپ کے ہے نام زمانے سے گائب کیا
اور آپ ک خفا ہو اسی بات کو لئے

جب آپ چل دے تھے تبھی نم نگاہیں تھیں
پر آپ کو ک حال یہ برسات کو لئے

مرتا رہا ہے آدمی دھرمو امان سے
روتا رہا سفیر مگر ذات کو لئے

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rusvaa = disgraced
maqbuul = chosen, accepted
Gaib = concealed, hidden, mystery
zaat = caste, race (also means self)



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Waaaaah! Bahut khoob adeil ji....
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rusvaa na kiijiye mere jazbaat ko liye
ab ro bhii diijiye mere haalaat ko liye

maqbuul ho sakaa na sahi aap kaa kabhii
mai.n yaad to rahunga mulaaqaat ko liye

dil aap ke hai naam zamaane se Gaib kyaa
aur aap ki khafaa ho isii baat ko liye

jab aap chal diye the tabhii nam nigaahe.n thii.n
par aap ko ki haal ye barsaat ko liye

martaa rahaa hai aadmii dharm-o-imaan se
rotaa rahaa Safiir magar zaat ko liye

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رسوا نہ کیجئے میرے جذبات کو لئے
اب رو بھی دیجئے میرے حالات کو لئے

مقبول ہو سکا نہ سہی آپ کا کبھی
میں یاد تو رہوںگا ملاقات کو لئے

دل آپ کے ہے نام زمانے سے گائب کیا
اور آپ ک خفا ہو اسی بات کو لئے

جب آپ چل دے تھے تبھی نم نگاہیں تھیں
پر آپ کو ک حال یہ برسات کو لئے

مرتا رہا ہے آدمی دھرمو امان سے
روتا رہا سفیر مگر ذات کو لئے

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रुस्वा न कीजिये मेरे जज़्बात को लिए
अब रो भी दीजिये मेरे हालात को लिए

मक़बूल हो सका न सही आप का कभी
मैं याद तो रहूंगा मुलाक़ात को लिए

दिल आप के है नाम ज़माने से ग़ैब क्या
और आप कि ख़फ़ा हो इसी बात को लिए

जब आप चल दिए थे तभी नम निगाहें थीं
पर आप को कि हाल ये बरसात को लिए

मरता रहा है आदमी धर्म ओ ईमान से
रोता रहा सफ़ीर मगर ज़ात को लिए

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rusvaa = disgraced
maqbuul = chosen, accepted
Gaib = concealed, hidden, mystery
zaat = caste, race (also means self)

wah bahut khoob aadeil sahib
duaon ke saath

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Aadeil bhai...bazm meiN aapke aate hi ronak aa jati hai...aapki gazleN to kya kehne.....!

martaa rahaa hai aadmii dharm-o-imaan se
rotaa rahaa Safiir magar zaat ko liye

yoon to poori ki poori gazal la-jawaab hai par yeh sher mere dil ke khaas kareeb rha.

likhte rhiye aur bazm ko chaar chaand lagate rhiye.

duaoN ke saath
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Aadeil bhai...bazm meiN aapke aate hi ronak aa jati hai...aapki gazleN to kya kehne.....!

martaa rahaa hai aadmii dharm-o-imaan se
rotaa rahaa Safiir magar zaat ko liye

yoon to poori ki poori gazal la-jawaab hai par yeh sher mere dil ke khaas kareeb rha.

likhte rhiye aur bazm ko chaar chaand lagate rhiye.

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rusvaa na kiijiye mere jazbaat ko liye
ab ro bhii diijiye mere haalaat ko liye

maqbuul ho sakaa na sahi aap kaa kabhii
mai.n yaad to rahunga mulaaqaat ko liye

dil aap ke hai naam zamaane se Gaib kyaa
aur aap ki khafaa ho isii baat ko liye

jab aap chal diye the tabhii nam nigaahe.n thii.n
par aap ko ki haal ye barsaat ko liye

martaa rahaa hai aadmii dharm-o-imaan se
rotaa rahaa Safiir magar zaat ko liye

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رسوا نہ کیجئے میرے جذبات کو لئے
اب رو بھی دیجئے میرے حالات کو لئے

مقبول ہو سکا نہ سہی آپ کا کبھی
میں یاد تو رہوںگا ملاقات کو لئے

دل آپ کے ہے نام زمانے سے گائب کیا
اور آپ ک خفا ہو اسی بات کو لئے

جب آپ چل دے تھے تبھی نم نگاہیں تھیں
پر آپ کو ک حال یہ برسات کو لئے

مرتا رہا ہے آدمی دھرمو امان سے
روتا رہا سفیر مگر ذات کو لئے

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रुस्वा न कीजिये मेरे जज़्बात को लिए
अब रो भी दीजिये मेरे हालात को लिए

मक़बूल हो सका न सही आप का कभी
मैं याद तो रहूंगा मुलाक़ात को लिए

दिल आप के है नाम ज़माने से ग़ैब क्या
और आप कि ख़फ़ा हो इसी बात को लिए

जब आप चल दिए थे तभी नम निगाहें थीं
पर आप को कि हाल ये बरसात को लिए

मरता रहा है आदमी धर्म ओ ईमान से
रोता रहा सफ़ीर मगर ज़ात को लिए

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rusvaa = disgraced
maqbuul = chosen, accepted
Gaib = concealed, hidden, mystery
zaat = caste, race (also means self)
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~* tanhaai mein....*~ - 29th May 2015, 11:34 AM

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rusvaa na kiijiye mere jazbaat ko liye
ab ro bhii diijiye mere haalaat ko liye

maqbuul ho sakaa na sahi aap kaa kabhii
mai.n yaad to rahunga mulaaqaat ko liye

dil aap ke hai naam zamaane se Gaib kyaa
aur aap ki khafaa ho isii baat ko liye

jab aap chal diye the tabhii nam nigaahe.n thii.n
par aap ko ki haal ye barsaat ko liye

martaa rahaa hai aadmii dharm-o-imaan se
rotaa rahaa Safiir magar zaat ko liye

----------------- X -----------------
رسوا نہ کیجئے میرے جذبات کو لئے
اب رو بھی دیجئے میرے حالات کو لئے

مقبول ہو سکا نہ سہی آپ کا کبھی
میں یاد تو رہوںگا ملاقات کو لئے

دل آپ کے ہے نام زمانے سے گائب کیا
اور آپ ک خفا ہو اسی بات کو لئے

جب آپ چل دے تھے تبھی نم نگاہیں تھیں
پر آپ کو ک حال یہ برسات کو لئے

مرتا رہا ہے آدمی دھرمو امان سے
روتا رہا سفیر مگر ذات کو لئے

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रुस्वा न कीजिये मेरे जज़्बात को लिए
अब रो भी दीजिये मेरे हालात को लिए

मक़बूल हो सका न सही आप का कभी
मैं याद तो रहूंगा मुलाक़ात को लिए

दिल आप के है नाम ज़माने से ग़ैब क्या
और आप कि ख़फ़ा हो इसी बात को लिए

जब आप चल दिए थे तभी नम निगाहें थीं
पर आप को कि हाल ये बरसात को लिए

मरता रहा है आदमी धर्म ओ ईमान से
रोता रहा सफ़ीर मगर ज़ात को लिए

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rusvaa = disgraced
maqbuul = chosen, accepted
Gaib = concealed, hidden, mystery
zaat = caste, race (also means self)


waahhhhh kyaa andaaz hai...... aadeil saahab.

aapke andaaz ne to hame ghayal kar diyaa hai janaab... kyaa nishaane lagaa laga ke teer chode hain ke har sher se qatl hotaa huaa gumaan hotaaa hai...
is haseen kalaam ki shaan me laakhon daad peshe nazar hai... qubool farmaaiyegaa...

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Aadeil bhai bahut hi undha ghazal hui aapki ..her ashar kabilte tareef tha .

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waahhhhh kyaa andaaz hai...... aadeil saahab.

aapke andaaz ne to hame ghayal kar diyaa hai janaab... kyaa nishaane lagaa laga ke teer chode hain ke har sher se qatl hotaa huaa gumaan hotaaa hai...
is haseen kalaam ki shaan me laakhon daad peshe nazar hai... qubool farmaaiyegaa...

Shaad.....
Shoabbhai,

aapke andaaz-e-digar hausla afzaai se janaab hum ghaayal ho gaye haiN

bas yuN hi aate rahiye aur hausla badhaate rahiye..
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Aadeil bhai bahut hi undha ghazal hui aapki ..her ashar kabilte tareef tha .

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aapka behad mamnoon hu.. yuN hi aate rahiye

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