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kamaal ke sher laate haiN aap................

dheroN dheroN daad..........................
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17th September 2014, 11:03 AM

aree wahhhh...bahut khoobsurat sher likhe aap sabne, Aadeil bhai, HSN bhai, Pari, Anant ji, Sarika ji, Naaz

Naaz ka to muje pta hi nahi tha ki esko shayri bhi aati hai muje lagta tha ki esko bas baate karni aati hai Naaz, bahut accha likhti ho tum bhi


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17th September 2014, 11:06 AM

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WAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!! Aadeil sahab....aap to chhah gaye
pura......fusoon-e-aadeil k liye dheron daad
Ananthji,

aapka bahot bahot shukriya..........................



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aree wahhhh...bahut khoobsurat sher likhe aap sabne, Aadeil bhai, HSN bhai, Pari, Anant ji, Sarika ji, Naaz

Naaz ka to muje pta hi nahi tha ki esko shayri bhi aati hai muje lagta tha ki esko bas baate karni aati hai Naaz, bahut accha likhti ho tum bhi
Shukriya Sunitaji......

aur Naaz ke iis andaaz pe ek sher.....
naazuk dil rahe to rahe khaaksaar* kitna
aaya kisii pe aaj to shaayar banaa diyaa

(* humble)



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Shukriya Sunitaji......

aur Naaz ke iis andaaz pe ek sher.....
naazuk dil rahe to rahe khaaksaar kitna
aaya kisii pe aaj to shaayar banaa diyaa
Shaayara.................


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Shaayara.................
haa haa haa................
ab kabhii kabhii beher ke hisaab se gender meN chhut leni paRtii hai, Hassanbhai ........................, aur phir dil toh hameshaa muzakkar hi hota hai? phir wo kisii mard kaa ho ya zann ka ho!



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Naaz ka to muje pta hi nahi tha ki esko shayri bhi aati hai muje lagta tha ki esko bas baate karni aati hai Naaz, bahut accha likhti ho tum bhi
Bohat bohat shukriyaaH Baaji...
bas Allah se dua hai aap ka mohabbat bhara saath youn hi bana rahe (Ameen)..


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ab kabhii kabhii beher ke hisaab se gender meN chhut leni paRtii hai, Hassanbhai ........................
jazboN meiN behr nahi dekhte .. bas ehsaas dekhte haiN!

khair.... sher was good! daad hi daad!


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jazboN meiN behr nahi dekhte .. bas ehsaas dekhte haiN!

khair.... sher was good! daad hi daad!
aapka bahot bahot shukriya.....................



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Di mai har fan maula huN thodi sudhar gai hun pehlese aap abtak mere kaan khincti haiN and thnx a lot di your appreciation is motivating


Naaz, agar tu dil se muje Dii maanti hai to tere kaan kheechne ka haq mera hamesha rhega, chahe tu poori bhi sudar jaye..to bhi
agar nahi maanti dil se to keh de...


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Naaz ka to muje pta hi nahi tha ki esko shayri bhi aati hai muje lagta tha ki esko bas baate karni aati hai Naaz, bahut accha likhti ho tum bhi
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17th September 2014, 01:05 PM

kuch is tarah se hai zindagi meri zulmat-gaziin*
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*in darkness
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kya khub baat kahi hai......................

bilkul har insaan kii ye haalat hai......

dheroN dheroN daad..............
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Hassanbhai,

ek se badhkar ek ashaar haiN....
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Waaaaaaaahhhhhhhh!!!! Hassan bhai...reality at its best ....dheron daad
teh-e-dil se manoon hoon jaaN se azeez dostoN ka................

khush rahiye...


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hmmmm........yehi karna padega ab to

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17th September 2014, 02:16 PM

"uske Zulm-o-sitam be-intehaa hai,
hamara bhi sabr kamaal ka hai "

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"uske Zulm-o-sitam ki hadd nahi koi,
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"uske Zulm-o-sitam ki hadd nahi koi,
mere laboN par bhi shikwa nahi koi"

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18th September 2014, 11:12 AM

azaab-e-rasn-o-daar-e-afsuun-e-baada-kashii* ke baad
qafas ke zulmatoN se kyuN pashemaaN hai arey insaan

(*tyrrany of gallows of enchantment of drinking)



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qafas ke zulmatoN se kyuN pashemaaN hai arey insaan

(*tyrrany of gallows of enchantment of drinking)
WAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHH!!!! Bohat khoob Aadeil sahab....dheron daad





Mohabbat ke ye silsile na the
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19th September 2014, 02:15 PM

zulmatoN se nikal, hasti subha aaye hai,
dekh tere liye khoobsurat din laaye hai


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doston … waah !! aap sab ne apne khoobsurat aashaar ki roshni se lafz “zulmat” ko kis qadar darakshaan kar diya hai ! bahaut khoob ! aap sab ko meri jaanib se dheron dheron daad aur duaein !

bas ab kuchh hi palon mein naya lafz le kar haazir hota hoon.


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naya lafz - 22nd September 2014, 12:42 AM

doston, aadaab

fusoon-e-alfaaz ka silsila aage bardhaate huwe, is baar ka lafz hai MAHV

“mahv” means being deeply absorbed or engrossed in something.

mere hisaab se, lafz "MAHV" mein "AH" ka pronounciation waise hi hai jaise lafz "SHAHR" (city) ya "ZAHR" (poison) mein "AH" ka pronounciation hai. any other opinion or way of explaining is most welcome.

to har baar ki tarah hum lafz MAHV par ghaur karenge apne qalaam mein us ka istemaal kar ke, aur us par guftagoo kar ke.

shayari ki duniya mein “mahv” hone ke liye cheezon ki kami naheen hai … misaal ke taur pe mahv-e-gham, mahv-e-nazaara, mahv-e-yaad, mahv-e-chaman, mahv-e-ishq, mahv-e-yaas, mahv-e-khwaab, mahv-e-hairat, mahv-e-ada wagairah wagairah wagairah. shayar log to jahaan dekho mahv ho jaate hain, mahv hone ke liye ek cheez dhoondho to hazaaron mil jayengeen

on a serious note, lafz “mahv” is a very expressive and evocative word to describe the state of being completely absorbed / engrossed / lost / fascinated in something.

chaliye dekhte haiN lafz “mahv” par ustaad shora ke kuchh khoobsurat aashaar


mahv itna bhi n ho ishq-e-butaaN meiN ai “zauq”
chaahiye bande ko har waqt Khuda yaad rahe
Zauq


ajab n tha ke maiN begaana-e-alam ho kar
tere jamaal ki raanaaiyoN meiN kho rehta
tera gudaaz badan teri neem-baaz aaNkheiN
inhee haseen fasaanoN meiN mahv ho rehta
Sahir Ludhianvi
(mashhoor nazm “kabhi kabhi mere dil meiN khayaal aata hai” se)


hum aise mahv-e-nazaara n the ke hosh aata
magar tumhaare taghaaful ne hoshiyaar kiya
Daagh Dehlevi


kya huwe wo din ki mahv-e-aarzoo the husn-o-ishq
rabt tha donoN meiN go rabt-e-shanaasaayee n tha
Hasrat Mohani


kahaaN ke naale kahaaN ki aaheiN jamee haiN un ki taraf nigaaheiN
kuchh is tarah mahv-e-yaad hooN maiN ke fursat-e-yak-nafas naheeN hai
Shakeel Badaayuni


aaNkh jo kuchh dekhtee hai lab pe aa sakta naheeN
mahv-e-hairat hooN ki duniya kya se kya ho jaayegee
Iqbal


az azal taa ba abad mahv-e-tamaasha hona
maiN wo hooN jis ko n marna hai n paida hona
Asghar Gondvi


jo kuchh hai mahv-e-shokhi-e-abroo-e-yaar hai
aaNkhoN ko rakh ke taak pe dekha kare koyee
Ghalib


tamaasha ke ai mahv-e-aaeena-daaree
tujhe kis tamanna se hum dekhte haiN
Ghalib


“mahv” ki taqti mere hisaab se hai 21, any other opinion is welcome.

lafz “mahv” par mashq-e-sukhan ka silsila hum jaaree rakkhenge agle 7 dinon tak yaani 28th Sept raat 10:00 PM India time ya 4:30 PM GMT.

to chaliye, intezaar kis baat ka hai. apni shayari ke zariye lafz “mahv” mein mahv ho jaate hain.


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mahv-e-deed-e-khiraam meiN n ye hosh
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- zarraa


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Shukriya, Ananthji...................



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Waaaahhhhh! awesome very romantic...............
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ZulmateiN bhi girtiN haiN rehmat bankar
Jab ashqoN ko chupaney ki jagah nahiN milti
bahot khub, Naaz...............

a wonderful thought............
dheroN daad......................



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zulmatoN se nikal, hasti subha aaye hai,
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waaaaaaahhhh... dii,

bahot hi khubsurat khayaal hai..............

dheroN daad.........



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- zarraa


(deed-e-khiraam = watching the graceful walk)
waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!!!!

Zarraasaab,
bahot hi umda sher hai....................

dheroN dheroN daad-o-mubaarakbaad................



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doston, aadaab

fusoon-e-alfaaz ka silsila aage bardhaate huwe, is baar ka lafz hai MAHV

“mahv” means being deeply absorbed or engrossed in something.

mere hisaab se, lafz "MAHV" mein "AH" ka pronounciation waise hi hai jaise lafz "SHAHR" (city) ya "ZAHR" (poison) mein "AH" ka pronounciation hai. any other opinion or way of explaining is most welcome.

to har baar ki tarah hum lafz MAHV par ghaur karenge apne qalaam mein us ka istemaal kar ke, aur us par guftagoo kar ke.

shayari ki duniya mein “mahv” hone ke liye cheezon ki kami naheen hai … misaal ke taur pe mahv-e-gham, mahv-e-nazaara, mahv-e-yaad, mahv-e-chaman, mahv-e-ishq, mahv-e-yaas, mahv-e-khwaab, mahv-e-hairat, mahv-e-ada wagairah wagairah wagairah. shayar log to jahaan dekho mahv ho jaate hain, mahv hone ke liye ek cheez dhoondho to hazaaron mil jayengeen

on a serious note, lafz “mahv” is a very expressive and evocative word to describe the state of being completely absorbed / engrossed / lost / fascinated in something.

chaliye dekhte haiN lafz “mahv” par ustaad shora ke kuchh khoobsurat aashaar


mahv itna bhi n ho ishq-e-butaaN meiN ai “zauq”
chaahiye bande ko har waqt Khuda yaad rahe
Zauq


ajab n tha ke maiN begaana-e-alam ho kar
tere jamaal ki raanaaiyoN meiN kho rehta
tera gudaaz badan teri neem-baaz aaNkheiN
inhee haseen fasaanoN meiN mahv ho rehta
Sahir Ludhianvi
(mashhoor nazm “kabhi kabhi mere dil meiN khayaal aata hai” se)


hum aise mahv-e-nazaara n the ke hosh aata
magar tumhaare taghaaful ne hoshiyaar kiya
Daagh Dehlevi


kya huwe wo din ki mahv-e-aarzoo the husn-o-ishq
rabt tha donoN meiN go rabt-e-shanaasaayee n tha
Hasrat Mohani


kahaaN ke naale kahaaN ki aaheiN jamee haiN un ki taraf nigaaheiN
kuchh is tarah mahv-e-yaad hooN maiN ke fursat-e-yak-nafas naheeN hai
Shakeel Badaayuni


aaNkh jo kuchh dekhtee hai lab pe aa sakta naheeN
mahv-e-hairat hooN ki duniya kya se kya ho jaayegee
Iqbal


az azal taa ba abad mahv-e-tamaasha hona
maiN wo hooN jis ko n marna hai n paida hona
Asghar Gondvi


jo kuchh hai mahv-e-shokhi-e-abroo-e-yaar hai
aaNkhoN ko rakh ke taak pe dekha kare koyee
Ghalib


tamaasha ke ai mahv-e-aaeena-daaree
tujhe kis tamanna se hum dekhte haiN
Ghalib


“mahv” ki taqti mere hisaab se hai 21, any other opinion is welcome.

lafz “mahv” par mashq-e-sukhan ka silsila hum jaaree rakkhenge agle 7 dinon tak yaani 28th Sept raat 10:00 PM India time ya 4:30 PM GMT.

to chaliye, intezaar kis baat ka hai. apni shayari ke zariye lafz “mahv” mein mahv ho jaate hain.


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Zarraasaab,

bahot hi umda lafz laaye haiN aap iis baar bhii....

mahv kaa dusra maanii 'erase' bhii hota hai......

mahv dil se sab shikaayat ho gayii
saamne jab unkii suurat ho gayii
-- Ahsan Marahravi

aayaa idhar khayaal udhar mahv ho gayaa
kehne ko tha na jaane abhii kya maiN apne app se
-- Naushad Ali saab




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aaiine meN aks unkaa mahv sabko kar gayaa
dil meN hai raqs-e-junooN* aur aaNkheN khulii reh gayii

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the ejaaz-e-jaaN-dahii* pe mahv hum jinkii kabhii
le gaye wo jaaN hamaari aaj to shikwaa ho kyuN

(*miracle of giving life)



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maiN mahv* to rahaa na kabhii itnaa jaam meN
jitnaa Duubaa hooN unke ye juu-e-KHiiraam** meN

(*lost; **walk like rivulet)



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halqa-e-zulf* meN tere hum itne mahv hai
juzv-e-hayaat** meN bhii kiyaa karte sahv*** hai

(*ringlets of tresses [of hair];
**a portion of life
***mistakes)



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22nd September 2014, 01:26 PM

sabhii mahv-e-raks-e-havas* hai jahaaN meN
safiir-e-haram** bhii yahaaN uryaaN*** hai

(*busy/lost in dance of greed;
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kaii the jahaaN meN taare jo ki mahv ho gaye haiN
kare yaad koii unko ye saraa pe aaj phir kyuN



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Zarraasaab,

bahot hi umda lafz laaye haiN aap iis baar bhii....

mahv kaa dusra maanii 'erase' bhii hota hai......

mahv dil se sab shikaayat ho gayii
saamne jab unkii suurat ho gayii
-- Ahsan Marahravi

aayaa idhar khayaal udhar mahv ho gayaa
kehne ko tha na jaane abhii kya maiN apne app se
-- Naushad Ali saab

Shukriya aadeil sahab is lafz ke mani khol dene ke liye


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Shukriya aadeil sahab is lafz ke mani khol dene ke liye
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vaise, Zaraasaab, http://rekhta.org/ zindabaad

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23rd September 2014, 04:36 PM

jaane kahaaN gaye haiN log........
sabhii dost mahv haiN per ye pataa nahiN kahaaN hai
hai sunii padii ye mehfil ye dayaar kare fugaaN* hai

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