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maiN DIWANA hua, tu SAYANA hua...!! |
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maiN DIWANA hua, tu SAYANA hua...!! -
23rd November 2014, 01:13 PM
Ek halki fulki ghazal pesh-e-khidmat hai... khamiyoN ke liye muafi ka talabgaar rahunga...
dekh kar jisko maiN shayarana hua, usko dekhe hue ik zamana hua... soch kar aapko likh rahe the ghazal, kya pata sher kab aashiqana hua... ishq ki chal nayi hum kahaani likheN, falsafa pyar ka ab purana hua... lagta hai aaj vo aa raheN hain idhar, shahr bhar ka jo mausam suhana hua... mujhse milne ko the beqaraar aap bhi, dil mera todna bas bahana hua... ishq ka kuch asar dono pe ho gaya, maiN diwana hua, tu sayana hua... chaahne ki tujhe jo khata ho gayi, dil mera dard ka ab thikana hua... maiN tera ho gaya, tu meri ho gayi, khwaab meN hi sahi muskurana hua... aashiqoN ki sabhi manzileN kho gayiN, dard ka kaarwaaN jab ravaana hua... ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ http://alfaaz-e-taish.blogspot.in/ Ishq hota tha, ishq karte haiN, Vo zamana tha, ye zamana hai... ----Taish ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ |
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23rd November 2014, 04:11 PM
lazwab...taish dear... bahut khub likha aapne..
ishq ka kuch asar dono pe ho gaya,maiN diwana hua, tu sayana hua. ..chaahne ki tujhe jo khata ho gayi,dil mera dard ka ab thikana hua... Wah..wah....wah... mera kya hai main to deewana hu kya bataoo tumko baare mein apne mein to khud se hi begaana hu ...................vinaydahiya |
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23rd November 2014, 06:12 PM
Ghayal bhai...
 Namaste Umdaah Ghazal....mazaa aa gaya Ye sher be-Had pasand aaya maiN tera ho gaya, tu meri ho gayi, khwaab meN hi sahi muskurana hua... Dil se daad aur duaaen Khush rahiye...apnaa khayaal rakhen Duaaon ke saath ijaazat Aapka Dhaval |
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24th November 2014, 10:33 AM
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vinay saaheb tahe dil se aapka shukraguzaar hun saaheb... bas yuNhi apna pyar banaaye rakheN... ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ http://alfaaz-e-taish.blogspot.in/ Ishq hota tha, ishq karte haiN, Vo zamana tha, ye zamana hai... ----Taish ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ |
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24th November 2014, 12:54 PM
soch kar aapko likh rahe the ghazal,
kya pata sher kab aashiqana hua... waaahhhh miyaaaN kyaa bbaat hai... ati sunder |
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24th November 2014, 01:06 PM
Waah waah bahut khoob taish ji....
अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे madhu.. |
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24th November 2014, 02:43 PM
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Dear Lucky...bahut hi khoobsurat ehsaas padne ka mokka mila hame, bahut umda likhte hai aap, es baar aapki shayri meiN beete hue zamane ki kuch jalak milli...! sabhi ashiyaar behad khoobsurat hai, par yeh sher muje khaas pasand aaya: dekh kar jisko maiN shayarana hua, usko dekhe hue ik zamana hua... duaoN ke saath .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए... 
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24th November 2014, 09:24 PM
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aapki mohabbatoN ka shukriya saaheb, bas aage bhi pyar yuNhi banaaye rakheN... ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ http://alfaaz-e-taish.blogspot.in/ Ishq hota tha, ishq karte haiN, Vo zamana tha, ye zamana hai... ----Taish ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ |
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25th November 2014, 11:21 PM
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~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ http://alfaaz-e-taish.blogspot.in/ Ishq hota tha, ishq karte haiN, Vo zamana tha, ye zamana hai... ----Taish ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ |
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27th November 2014, 07:15 PM
*soch kar aapko likh rahe the ghazal,
kya pata sher kab aashiqana hua... ishq ki chal nayi hum kahaani likheN, falsafa pyar ka ab purana hua... *Kya baat hai Lucky bhai ... Aaj tau cha gaye aap.bus ...Sher kab ashikana hua , oh ho ho ..kahaN ja ke khara kar diya sher ko , kamnakht apni ada se mar dala sanam. Yun hi nayee ghazlein pesh.karye raho aur mehfil jawan karte raho. Regds Sanjay Sehgal khone Pane ki daur mein yun uljha hai har bashar , Isee kashmeqash mein kat raha Zindagee ka safar. |
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27th November 2014, 07:16 PM
*soch kar aapko likh rahe the ghazal,
kya pata sher kab aashiqana hua... ishq ki chal nayi hum kahaani likheN, falsafa pyar ka ab purana hua... *Kya baat hai Lucky bhai ... Aaj tau cha gaye aap.bus ...Sher kab ashikana hua , oh ho ho ..kahaN ja ke khara kar diya sher ko , kamnakht apni ada se mar dala sanam. Yun hi nayee ghazlein pesh.karye raho aur mehfil jawan karte raho. Regds Sanjay Sehgal khone Pane ki daur mein yun uljha hai har bashar , Isee kashmeqash mein kat raha Zindagee ka safar. |
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27th November 2014, 07:38 PM
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ho sake to majeed waqt diyaa karen site ko aur baaki membraan ko.... aapse ye guzaarish SDC ke puraane member aur ajeez dost hone ke naate kah raha hoon.... ummeed hai naummeed na kiijiyega..... Shukriyaa |
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27th November 2014, 08:47 PM
Taish Ji
Beautiful Ghazal.Daad kabul kijeyega. Ghazal yeh khoobsurat gana hua kabile tareef yeh tarana hua Regards |
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