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"Taish meN hai Taish"
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teri khushboo mere KAAGAZ pe utar jaati hai...!! -
14th July 2015, 09:49 PM
ik dost ke kehne pe chand misre bhoole bhatke se pesh haiN...
Teri khusboo mere kaagaz pe utar jaati hai,
Tu jo sajti hai ghazal meri sanwar jaati hai.
zindagi yuNhi nahin baar-e-digar* jaati hai,
aisi aadat jo ho jaaye to kidhar jaati hai...
*baar-baar, repetitively..
rabt dil ne mere is tarah rakha hai us se,
hichkiyaaN aati haiN mujhko, vo thahar jaati hai..
'taish' ye teri kalam ka hi to paagalpan hai,
jo khayaloN ko le kar uske dagar jaati hai...
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14th July 2015, 10:01 PM
namaste bhaii
Ghazal ke aSh'ar pasand aayen... mere dil se daad aur mubaaaraqbaad
liKhte rahiye aage bhee
duaaoN ke saath ijaazat
aapka
~Dhaval
*~*Dhaval*~*....Ek Ehsaas...
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14th July 2015, 10:15 PM
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Originally Posted by Taish
ik dost ke kehne pe chand misre bhoole bhatke se pesh haiN...
Teri khusboo mere kaagaz pe utar jaati hai,
T
u jo sajti hai ghazal meri sanwar jaati hai.
zindagi yuNhi nahin baar-e-digar* jaati hai,
aisi aadat jo ho jaaye to kidhar jaati hai...
*baar-baar, repetitively..
rabt dil ne mere is tarah rakha hai us se,
hichkiyaaN aati haiN mujhko, vo thahar jaati hai..
'taish' ye teri kalam ka hi to paagalpan hai,
jo khayaloN ko le kar uske dagar jaati hai...
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Waaaaaaaaaah behad umdah
Kya baat hai..........maza aa gaya ye gazal padh kar
Daad kubul farmaiyega
Aapka apna
Bhushan
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14th July 2015, 10:40 PM
Teri khusboo mere kaagaz pe utar jaati hai,
Tu jo sajti hai ghazal meri sanwar jaati hai.
Kya kahne.......waaaah....
ek khoobsoorat kalaam par dil se daad....
अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी
आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे
madhu..
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14th July 2015, 11:55 PM
Wah wah...
Outstanding romantic shayri.
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15th July 2015, 09:11 AM
Bohot khuub jenab.
Umdaah ghazal huyi hai.
Nacheez ki daad qubuul farmaayeiN.
Sagar Aashna
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Qaul thae ke 'Sagar' milengae kal magar
Taareeki musalsal hai, savera nahii hota
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15th July 2015, 10:29 AM
waahh bahut khoob sher hue hain lucky bhai............
'taish' ye teri kalam ka hi to paagalpan hai,
jo khayaloN ko le kar uske dagar jaati hai...
likhte rahen....
shaad...
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15th July 2015, 10:54 AM
Quote:
Originally Posted by Taish
ik dost ke kehne pe chand misre bhoole bhatke se pesh haiN...
Teri khusboo mere kaagaz pe utar jaati hai,
Tu jo sajti hai ghazal meri sanwar jaati hai.
zindagi yuNhi nahin baar-e-digar* jaati hai,
aisi aadat jo ho jaaye to kidhar jaati hai...
*baar-baar, repetitively..
rabt dil ne mere is tarah rakha hai us se,
hichkiyaaN aati haiN mujhko, vo thahar jaati hai..
'taish' ye teri kalam ka hi to paagalpan hai,
jo khayaloN ko le kar uske dagar jaati hai...
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Nihaayat Khoob ... Lucky Ji
AchChhi Ghazal Huii Janaab ... Mubaaraqbaad !!!
YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN
Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ...
Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh
Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ...
---Naresh Mehra----
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15th July 2015, 01:30 PM
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namaste bhaii
Ghazal ke aSh'ar pasand aayen... mere dil se daad aur mubaaaraqbaad
liKhte rahiye aage bhee
duaaoN ke saath ijaazat
aapka
~Dhaval
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shukriya dhaval bhai, bas aage bhi yunhi saath dete raheN...
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15th July 2015, 01:37 PM
Quote:
Originally Posted by Taish
ik dost ke kehne pe chand misre bhoole bhatke se pesh haiN...
Teri khusboo mere kaagaz pe utar jaati hai,
Tu jo sajti hai ghazal meri sanwar jaati hai.
zindagi yuNhi nahin baar-e-digar* jaati hai,
aisi aadat jo ho jaaye to kidhar jaati hai...
*baar-baar, repetitively..
rabt dil ne mere is tarah rakha hai us se,
hichkiyaaN aati haiN mujhko, vo thahar jaati hai..
'taish' ye teri kalam ka hi to paagalpan hai,
jo khayaloN ko le kar uske dagar jaati hai...
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wah lucky bhai bahut khoob...................................
likhte rahen
duaon ke saath
Aapka Apna Ishk
'इश्क' के बदले इश्क चाहना तिजारत है
इज़हार किससे करें महबूब तो दिल में है
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16th July 2015, 12:49 AM
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Waaaaaaaaaah behad umdah
Kya baat hai..........maza aa gaya ye gazal padh kar
Daad kubul farmaiyega
Aapka apna
Bhushan
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bhushan saahib is hausla afzaayi ke liye tahe dil se aapka shukraguzara hun main...
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16th July 2015, 08:52 AM
originally posted by Taish
ik dost ke kehne pe chand misre bhoole bhatke se pesh haiN...
Teri khusboo mere kaagaz pe utar jaati hai,
Tu jo sajti hai ghazal meri sanwar jaati hai.
zindagi yuNhi nahin baar-e-digar* jaati hai,
aisi aadat jo ho jaaye to kidhar jaati hai...
*baar-baar, repetitively..
rabt dil ne mere is tarah rakha hai us se,
hichkiyaaN aati haiN mujhko, vo thahar jaati hai..
'taish' ye teri kalam ka hi to paagalpan hai,
jo khayaloN ko le kar uske dagar jaati hai...
Taish bhai bahut hi khoobsurat lagi yeh gazal
Rajinderseep
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16th July 2015, 10:05 AM
Quote:
Originally Posted by Taish
ik dost ke kehne pe chand misre bhoole bhatke se pesh haiN...
Teri khusboo mere kaagaz pe utar jaati hai,
Tu jo sajti hai ghazal meri sanwar jaati hai.
zindagi yuNhi nahin baar-e-digar* jaati hai,
aisi aadat jo ho jaaye to kidhar jaati hai...
*baar-baar, repetitively..
rabt dil ne mere is tarah rakha hai us se,
hichkiyaaN aati haiN mujhko, vo thahar jaati hai..
'taish' ye teri kalam ka hi to paagalpan hai,
jo khayaloN ko le kar uske dagar jaati hai...
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Dear Lucky....hame aapki kalam ka yeh pagalpan behaaaddddd pasand hai...bahut khoobsurat likha hai aapne. dil se daad hazir hai.
dii
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.....Sunita Thakur.....
यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया
....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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16th July 2015, 06:09 PM
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Originally Posted by Taish
ik dost ke kehne pe chand misre bhoole bhatke se pesh haiN...
Teri khusboo mere kaagaz pe utar jaati hai,
Tu jo sajti hai ghazal meri sanwar jaati hai.
zindagi yuNhi nahin baar-e-digar* jaati hai,
aisi aadat jo ho jaaye to kidhar jaati hai...
*baar-baar, repetitively..
rabt dil ne mere is tarah rakha hai us se,
hichkiyaaN aati haiN mujhko, vo thahar jaati hai..
'taish' ye teri kalam ka hi to paagalpan hai,
jo khayaloN ko le kar uske dagar jaati hai...
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Umdaa sher mere bhai, khoobsurat khayaal aur behad umdaa misree hue haiN yunhi bazm roshan rakhiYe
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