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teri khushboo mere KAAGAZ pe utar jaati hai...!! - 14th July 2015, 09:49 PM

ik dost ke kehne pe chand misre bhoole bhatke se pesh haiN...


Teri khusboo mere kaagaz pe utar jaati hai,
Tu jo sajti hai ghazal meri sanwar jaati hai.

zindagi yuNhi nahin baar-e-digar* jaati hai,
aisi aadat jo ho jaaye to kidhar jaati hai...

*baar-baar, repetitively..

rabt dil ne mere is tarah rakha hai us se,
hichkiyaaN aati haiN mujhko, vo thahar jaati hai..

'taish' ye teri kalam ka hi to paagalpan hai,
jo khayaloN ko le kar uske dagar jaati hai...



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14th July 2015, 10:01 PM

namaste bhaii

Ghazal ke aSh'ar pasand aayen... mere dil se daad aur mubaaaraqbaad

liKhte rahiye aage bhee

duaaoN ke saath ijaazat

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14th July 2015, 10:15 PM

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ik dost ke kehne pe chand misre bhoole bhatke se pesh haiN...


Teri khusboo mere kaagaz pe utar jaati hai,
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u jo sajti hai ghazal meri sanwar jaati hai.

zindagi yuNhi nahin baar-e-digar* jaati hai,
aisi aadat jo ho jaaye to kidhar jaati hai...

*baar-baar, repetitively..

rabt dil ne mere is tarah rakha hai us se,
hichkiyaaN aati haiN mujhko, vo thahar jaati hai..

'taish' ye teri kalam ka hi to paagalpan hai,
jo khayaloN ko le kar uske dagar jaati hai...





Waaaaaaaaaah behad umdah
Kya baat hai..........maza aa gaya ye gazal padh kar

Daad kubul farmaiyega

Aapka apna
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14th July 2015, 10:40 PM

Teri khusboo mere kaagaz pe utar jaati hai,
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Kya kahne.......waaaah....
ek khoobsoorat kalaam par dil se daad....



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15th July 2015, 09:11 AM

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Umdaah ghazal huyi hai.
Nacheez ki daad qubuul farmaayeiN.


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15th July 2015, 10:29 AM

waahh bahut khoob sher hue hain lucky bhai............

'taish' ye teri kalam ka hi to paagalpan hai,
jo khayaloN ko le kar uske dagar jaati hai...


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15th July 2015, 10:54 AM

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ik dost ke kehne pe chand misre bhoole bhatke se pesh haiN...


Teri khusboo mere kaagaz pe utar jaati hai,
Tu jo sajti hai ghazal meri sanwar jaati hai.

zindagi yuNhi nahin baar-e-digar* jaati hai,
aisi aadat jo ho jaaye to kidhar jaati hai...

*baar-baar, repetitively..

rabt dil ne mere is tarah rakha hai us se,
hichkiyaaN aati haiN mujhko, vo thahar jaati hai..

'taish' ye teri kalam ka hi to paagalpan hai,
jo khayaloN ko le kar uske dagar jaati hai...

Nihaayat Khoob ... Lucky Ji

AchChhi Ghazal Huii Janaab ... Mubaaraqbaad !!!




YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN
Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ...

Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh
Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ...


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namaste bhaii

Ghazal ke aSh'ar pasand aayen... mere dil se daad aur mubaaaraqbaad

liKhte rahiye aage bhee

duaaoN ke saath ijaazat

aapka

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ik dost ke kehne pe chand misre bhoole bhatke se pesh haiN...


Teri khusboo mere kaagaz pe utar jaati hai,
Tu jo sajti hai ghazal meri sanwar jaati hai.

zindagi yuNhi nahin baar-e-digar* jaati hai,
aisi aadat jo ho jaaye to kidhar jaati hai...

*baar-baar, repetitively..

rabt dil ne mere is tarah rakha hai us se,
hichkiyaaN aati haiN mujhko, vo thahar jaati hai..

'taish' ye teri kalam ka hi to paagalpan hai,
jo khayaloN ko le kar uske dagar jaati hai...

wah lucky bhai bahut khoob...................................
likhte rahen
duaon ke saath


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ik dost ke kehne pe chand misre bhoole bhatke se pesh haiN...


Teri khusboo mere kaagaz pe utar jaati hai,
Tu jo sajti hai ghazal meri sanwar jaati hai.

zindagi yuNhi nahin baar-e-digar* jaati hai,
aisi aadat jo ho jaaye to kidhar jaati hai...

*baar-baar, repetitively..

rabt dil ne mere is tarah rakha hai us se,
hichkiyaaN aati haiN mujhko, vo thahar jaati hai..

'taish' ye teri kalam ka hi to paagalpan hai,
jo khayaloN ko le kar uske dagar jaati hai...

Taish bhai bahut hi khoobsurat lagi yeh gazal

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ik dost ke kehne pe chand misre bhoole bhatke se pesh haiN...


Teri khusboo mere kaagaz pe utar jaati hai,
Tu jo sajti hai ghazal meri sanwar jaati hai.

zindagi yuNhi nahin baar-e-digar* jaati hai,
aisi aadat jo ho jaaye to kidhar jaati hai...

*baar-baar, repetitively..

rabt dil ne mere is tarah rakha hai us se,
hichkiyaaN aati haiN mujhko, vo thahar jaati hai..

'taish' ye teri kalam ka hi to paagalpan hai,
jo khayaloN ko le kar uske dagar jaati hai...



Dear Lucky....hame aapki kalam ka yeh pagalpan behaaaddddd pasand hai...bahut khoobsurat likha hai aapne. dil se daad hazir hai.

dii


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16th July 2015, 06:09 PM

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ik dost ke kehne pe chand misre bhoole bhatke se pesh haiN...


Teri khusboo mere kaagaz pe utar jaati hai,
Tu jo sajti hai ghazal meri sanwar jaati hai.

zindagi yuNhi nahin baar-e-digar* jaati hai,
aisi aadat jo ho jaaye to kidhar jaati hai...

*baar-baar, repetitively..

rabt dil ne mere is tarah rakha hai us se,
hichkiyaaN aati haiN mujhko, vo thahar jaati hai..

'taish' ye teri kalam ka hi to paagalpan hai,
jo khayaloN ko le kar uske dagar jaati hai...
Umdaa sher mere bhai, khoobsurat khayaal aur behad umdaa misree hue haiN yunhi bazm roshan rakhiYe



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