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Sahil pe jo numayan... - 8th September 2011, 04:50 PM

Sahil pe jo numaayan, qadmon ke ye nisha'n,
Mitjaayenge ye chund, Maujon ke aane par!

Meri hasti meri zeest aur mera wajood,
Mitjayenge ye chund, Lamhe guzar jaane par!

Raha hai koun aur kya Raheaygaa hameshaa,
ChutJaata hai sabkuch,kazaa ka bulaane par!

Mittee ka ek zarra chaahe uday hawa mein,
Miljaata hai mitti mein, hawa k rukjaane par!

Mere ye do palon ka, haasil to bas yahi hai,
Saroor maine paaya ,Insaa'n k muskuraane par!

I know its nowhere near a correct ghazal....tried to say so long with this piece!
Enjoyed my stay here, felt the warmth,the goodwill as well as the raised eyebrows...
If anyone felt brushed by my khari khari baat I'm sorry! Sanu maaf kerdeo and forthise who think I flattered then letme tell you you're more wrong than the word wrong spelt backwards...I stand by them and you deserved them!
Love and Good Wishes To All!
A j n a bi


Honaa Hai Fenaah Yaad Rakh Aye Shams Tujhko Bhi,
Is Kehkashaan Mein Mai He Nahi Waahid Shaye Faanee!


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Love 8th September 2011, 05:02 PM

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Sahil pe jo numaayan, qadmon ke ye nisha'n,
Mitjaayenge ye chund, Maujon ke aane par!

Meri hasti meri zeest aur mera wajood,
Mitjayenge ye chund, Lamhe guzar jaane par!

Raha hai koun aur kya Raheaygaa hameshaa,
ChutJaata hai sabkuch,kazaa ka bulaane par!

Mittee ka ek zarra chaahe uday hawa mein,
Miljaata hai mitti mein, hawa k rukjaane par!

Mere ye do palon ka, haasil to bas yahi hai,
Saroor maine paaya ,Insaa'n k muskuraane par!

bahot khub AJNABI ji

jo ki hai taiyaari ab tum ne mehafil se laut jaane ki
kya mumkin hai ki aa sako doston ke bulaane par??


Take care
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8th September 2011, 08:44 PM

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Sahil pe jo numaayan, qadmon ke ye nisha'n,
Mitjaayenge ye chund, Maujon ke aane par!

Meri hasti meri zeest aur mera wajood,
Mitjayenge ye chund, Lamhe guzar jaane par!

Raha hai koun aur kya Raheaygaa hameshaa,
ChutJaata hai sabkuch,kazaa ka bulaane par!

Mittee ka ek zarra chaahe uday hawa mein,
Miljaata hai mitti mein, hawa k rukjaane par!

Mere ye do palon ka, haasil to bas yahi hai,
Saroor maine paaya ,Insaa'n k muskuraane par!

I know its nowhere near a correct ghazal....tried to say so long with this piece!
Enjoyed my stay here, felt the warmth,the goodwill as well as the raised eyebrows...
If anyone felt brushed by my khari khari baat I'm sorry! Sanu maaf kerdeo and forthise who think I flattered then letme tell you you're more wrong than the word wrong spelt backwards...I stand by them and you deserved them!
Love and Good Wishes To All!
A j n a bi

Mere ye do palon ka, haasil to bas yahi hai,
Saroor maine paaya ,Insaa'n k muskuraane par!


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8th September 2011, 10:31 PM

Raha hai koun aur kya Raheaygaa hameshaa,
ChutJaata hai sabkuch,kazaa ka bulaane par!


waahh... bahot ummdah tahreer aur kheyaalaat ajnabee.. really its fantastic.. aapki koshish hamaari nazar me kaamyaab huee mere bhai... likhte rahiye bas yoonhi ummdah aashaar.. shukriyaa

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Sahil pe jo numaayan, qadmon ke ye nisha'n,
Mitjaayenge ye chund, Maujon ke aane par!

Meri hasti meri zeest aur mera wajood,
Mitjayenge ye chund, Lamhe guzar jaane par!

Raha hai koun aur kya Raheaygaa hameshaa,
ChutJaata hai sabkuch,kazaa ka bulaane par!

Mittee ka ek zarra chaahe uday hawa mein,
Miljaata hai mitti mein, hawa k rukjaane par!

Mere ye do palon ka, haasil to bas yahi hai,
Saroor maine paaya ,Insaa'n k muskuraane par!


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9th September 2011, 08:07 PM

Mittee ka ek zarra chaahe uday hawa mein,
Miljaata hai mitti mein, hawa k rukjaane par!

Mere ye do palon ka, haasil to bas yahi hai,
Saroor maine paaya ,Insaa'n k muskuraane par!


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9th September 2011, 09:51 PM

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Sahil pe jo numaayan, qadmon ke ye nisha'n,
Mitjaayenge ye chund, Maujon ke aane par!

Meri hasti meri zeest aur mera wajood,
Mitjayenge ye chund, Lamhe guzar jaane par!

Raha hai koun aur kya Raheaygaa hameshaa,
ChutJaata hai sabkuch,kazaa ka bulaane par!

Mittee ka ek zarra chaahe uday hawa mein,
Miljaata hai mitti mein, hawa k rukjaane par!


haasil-e-ghazal

Mere ye do palon ka, haasil to bas yahi hai,
Saroor maine paaya ,Insaa'n k muskuraane par!

I know its nowhere near a correct ghazal....tried to say so long with this piece!

thats not true..yeh achi ghazal kahi hai tumne yaar..

Enjoyed my stay here, felt the warmth,the goodwill as well as the raised eyebrows...
If anyone felt brushed by my khari khari baat I'm sorry! Sanu maaf kerdeo and forthise who think I flattered then letme tell you you're more wrong than the word wrong spelt backwards...I stand by them and you deserved them!
Love and Good Wishes To All!
A j n a bi
tumhaara jo signature sher hai woh mujhe bahot pasand hai.. bahot bahot zyaada...uske liya hazaar daad..

Honaa Hai Fenaah Yaad Rakh Aye Shams Tujhko Bhi,
Is Kehkashaan Mein Mai He Nahi Waahid Shaye Faanee!


wahh

bas ek hi baat..jaane ki baat matt karo yaar...


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11th October 2011, 06:51 PM

Raha hai koun aur kya Raheaygaa hameshaa,
ChutJaata hai sabkuch,kazaa ka bulaane par!

Mittee ka ek zarra chaahe uday hawa mein,
Miljaata hai mitti mein, hawa k rukjaane par!


BOHAT KHOOB!!................




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