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Tumhare naam kar di - 15th July 2015, 06:22 PM
Yeh dil yeh zindagi tumhare naam kardi
Ke likhi sari nazmen tumhare naam kar di

Jab dekha auron ki duaoon ko poora hote
Toh apni saari duaen tumhare naam kar di

milta nahi karaar iss dil ko tumhe sune bina
dekho haR ek dhadkaN tumhare naam kar di

Maanga jab bhi toh maaNgi tumhari muskaaN
Apni tamam khushiyaN tumhaRe naaM kaR di

Yun toh kami nahi deewano ki shehar mai
Ke maine saari wafaein tumhare naam kar di...

Zindagi wahi jise khul ke Jiya jaaye, apne armaanon ko pankh lagaa udhne do...
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15th July 2015, 11:53 PM
Behad khoobsurat ehsaas aur utne hi khoobsurat aashaar. Last sher khaas pasand aaya mujhe. Deewanon ki kami nahin shehar me. Yun hi likhti rahiye. Mehfil ki raunak banaaye rakhiye.

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15th July 2015, 11:57 PM
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Behad khoobsurat ehsaas aur utne hi khoobsurat aashaar. Last sher khaas pasand aaya mujhe. Deewanon ki kami nahin shehar me. Yun hi likhti rahiye. Mehfil ki raunak banaaye rakhiye.
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16th July 2015, 09:38 AM
Namaste jiya

Aapki peshkash achchhi rahiin ... mujhe yeh aakhiri sher bahot achchha lagaa

Yun toh kami nahi deewano ki shehar mai
Ke maine saari wafaein tumhare naam kar di...

Likhte rahiye... daad

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16th July 2015, 09:49 AM
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Yeh dil yeh zindagi tumhare naam kardi
Ke likhi sari nazmen tumhare naam kar di

Jab dekha auron ki duaoon ko poora hote
Toh apni saari duaen tumhare naam kar di

milta nahi karaar iss dil ko tumhe sune bina
dekho haR ek dhadkaN tumhare naam kar di

Maanga jab bhi toh maaNgi tumhari muskaaN
Apni tamam khushiyaN tumhaRe naaM kaR di

Yun toh kami nahi deewano ki shehar mai
Ke maine saari wafaein tumhare naam kar di...


Sweet ji.............bahut sweet sweet likha hai aapne....hame aapke ehsaas bahut pasand aaye.

yu hi pyar bhare ehsaasoN ke saath bazm meiN aati rhiye...khush rhiye.


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16th July 2015, 10:53 PM
bahut khoob kalaam jiya ji....dil se daad..
likhti rahiye....
aati rahiye...


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17th July 2015, 11:20 AM
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Yeh dil yeh zindagi tumhare naam kardi
Ke likhi sari nazmen tumhare naam kar di

Jab dekha auron ki duaoon ko poora hote
Toh apni saari duaen tumhare naam kar di

milta nahi karaar iss dil ko tumhe sune bina
dekho haR ek dhadkaN tumhare naam kar di

Maanga jab bhi toh maaNgi tumhari muskaaN
Apni tamam khushiyaN tumhaRe naaM kaR di

Yun toh kami nahi deewano ki shehar mai
Ke maine saari wafaein tumhare naam kar di...
Umdaa khayaal huye hai is ghazal mein aapse guzaarish hai ki agar aap radeef ke saath saath kafiyaa nibhaane ki bhi koshish karein to mein aur nikhaar aa jaaye...


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17th July 2015, 11:54 AM
Dilkash Ehsaasaat Se Bhapoor

Khoobsurat Kalaam

AchChhi Peshkash Ke Liye Dilee Mubaaraqbaad !!!



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