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29th March 2006, 10:47 PM
Kunal, Sonal, Jubin, Akant bhai, Nidhi....
Almost ek saal baad reply kar raha hoon aap logon ko.... My last reply was on 26th may... and after that day... life had changed drastically........... khata kar hi li thhi..... Kanchan, Ek aur puraani rachna yaad dilaane ke liye shukriya... yeh ghazal un dinon ki hai jab maine ghazal likhna shuru hi kiya thha... hum sab mumbai gaye thhe... bass wahaan jaane se pehel likhi thhi.... bahut yaadein hain iske sang...  Mayank bhai.. Aapki itni saari daad sar aankhon par hai bhai... bahi yeh us smay ki hai jab radeef kaafiya kya hote hain yehi seekh thha... wazan daalan to abhi bhi poori tarah nahi seekh paaay hoon.... use pehle misre me main yeh kehna chaahta thha.. ke naa to main shaayr hoon...naa hi ghazalaon me mahaarat haasil hai...bass dil ke ehsaas kaaga par likhne ki koshish karta hoon... yun hi saath dete rahiye... khayal rakhiyega.... Lagta hai is baar "Pulkit", kismat teri bhi rang laayii hai |
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hi -
30th March 2006, 03:45 AM
Bahut khoob ,...wah janab wah..tum to poore shayr ho gaye ho
aur kehte ho likhna nahi aata.. lagta hai dil pe kisi ne dastak di hai..hmm...mera bhi jaan ne ka haq banta hai.. khair sach bahut achha likha hai ..bhagwan kare tum jo bhi sapna dekho wo sach ho.. luv, pari and swar |
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achha huya -
30th March 2006, 07:11 AM
achha huya subah subah ye ghazal parhne ko mil gayee bahut khoobsoorat hai dil ko choo ke jatee hai wah aur ye sher kamal ka hai pulkit
Khata-E-Ishq chaahoon karnaa main bhii ek baar Samaa paaye agar koi mujhko apni nazron me wah Anil kho gaye hain woh log ab un kee justzoo hai |
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30th March 2006, 08:21 AM
Swar,
Tumhaari mom bhulakkad hai aur absent minded bhi... Yerh post pichhle saal ki hai... Lolzzzz... ab aisa koi apna nahi hai filhaal...  Tum khayal rakho apna... =========================================== Anil, Picchle saal likhi thhi yeh ghazal....aapko pasand aayi accha laga... Lagta hai is baar "Pulkit", kismat teri bhi rang laayii hai |
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haan tareekh deklh lee thee maine |
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haan tareekh deklh lee thee maine -
30th March 2006, 08:27 AM
mujeh pata hai pichle sal kee hai tab main aya hee nahee tha
Anil kho gaye hain woh log ab un kee justzoo hai |
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30th March 2006, 10:53 AM
pulkit mere bhai
pehle to behad muazrat qabool karo, ke mein itna regular yahan aane ke bawajood yeh ghazel naheen parh saka. behad khoobsurat aur zabardast ghazel hai. niyaayet miyaari aur shahkaar ghazel isey hi kehte hain. mein is baat per bohat khush hoon ke yeh ghazel mere bhai pulkit ne likhi hai. yahan is forum per mein jin chand loagon ki inkisaari, akhlaaq, adab, mohabbat, saadgi, sab aap mein hai, in sab ne mil ker aap ko aur zahir hai aap ki tehreer ko bohat behtreen bana diya hai. meri bharpoor daad qabool karein. musharrafhusain |
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30th March 2006, 12:06 PM
Mushi bhai,
Adaab... Aapne itna kucch keh diya... mere paas sabd nahi hain... main kahoon bhi to kya... bass yehi ke bhai yahaan aakar maine bahut kucch seekha hai... Ek behtar insaan banna... har tarah ke log dekhe hain...is chhoti si jagah me... woh jo diplomatic hain... aur woh bhi jo bass bina matlab sabse jude hain... aur acchi baat yeh hai ke doosre waalon ki sankhya bahut zyada hai... bhai... Mera manna hai ke guru do tarah ke hote hain... ek jo aapko baith ke sikhaae aur doosra jise aap dekhkar observe karke seek sako... aur mere liye yahaan doosre tarah ke guruon ki kami nahi rahi.... bahut seekha hai.... bass main aapke is pyaar ke kaabil reh sakoon aisa aashirwaad dijiyega... apna khayal rakhiyega Lagta hai is baar "Pulkit", kismat teri bhi rang laayii hai |
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