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dard hi mere dil ka thikaana rahe - 5th August 2003, 07:24 AM
dard hi mere dil ka thikaana rahe
aur khushioon me ana-jana rahe

os ghum me bhi ek mazaa sa mile
gar tu mere ghum ka bahana rahe

guzar zindagi youn-hi hooti rahe
na poochna, na kuch batana rahe

sukoon se jiyaa wo aakhri din bhi
jiski maut kaa usko patana rahe

dard hi mere dil ka thikaana rahe
aur khushioon me ana-jana rahe

Zeba likhti rahegi..........................
   
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5th August 2003, 11:49 AM
zeba
saadaa se alfaaz mein apne ehsaasaat aur jazbaat ki tarjumani is ko kehte hain.
well said zeba
agar tum urdu zaban ke barey shairon maslan meer, dard, sauda, jigar, nasir kaazmi, kaif azmi, in jaise bohat se barey naam hain , un ko parho to tumhari samajh mein aaye gaa ke achchi shaiyeri voh hi hoti hai jo saadaa se alfaaz mein apni baat bayan ker de.
mein khush hoon zeba ke pehle ke muqable mein bohat achcha likh rahi hain aap.
bas koshish karo apni mutale ki aadat daalo, ziayada se ziayada asidita ka kalaam parho , aur bohat improve karo gi. I believe.
wishing you all the best

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6th August 2003, 02:12 AM
musharraf ji,
aap ki baaten mai hamesha yaad rakhoongi aur is gazal ki tareef ka behad shukriya.
Mai acche kalam padhna to chati hoo magar magar mai urdu nahi padh sakti sirf bol sakti hoon.

Thanks for the advice,mai koshish karoongi insha allah.

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waah - 6th August 2003, 10:22 AM
zeba,
hamesha ki tarah khub likha hai... sadgi aur soondarta...
   
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8th August 2003, 07:52 PM
Meena ji aap ki hausal afzai ka behad shukriya.

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12th September 2003, 10:28 AM
Zeba...kaha ho ap ??????sab kheriya???!!!!kafi dino se apki koyi post nahi.......ap apni hii baat ko galat sabit kar rahi hai.....

Zeba likhti rahegi..........................! plz come back..sanju

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b ahot khub - 12th September 2003, 05:18 PM
Zeba ji
bahot acha likha hai.

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12th September 2003, 11:05 PM
sukoon se jiyaa wo aakhri din bhi
jiski maut kaa usko patana rahe


Hello Zeba...bhai kahan ho aaj kal....jyada dikhati nahi.....
aur likhane bhi khoob lagi ho....

ye bahoot pasand aaya...

tum bas likhati rahana.

paplu.

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hi - 13th September 2003, 12:34 AM
HI Zeba

Bahoth koob likha hai apne. Kuch aisa he khyal humara bhi hai. Keep up the good work.

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13th September 2003, 08:14 PM
Zeba ji............how are u?
WOW! aapne thode hi alfazon se aapni dil ki baat baatdi
aap aise hi likhte rehega Zeba ji aur aapna khyal rakhyega
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17th July 2005, 11:25 PM
sanjoo ji, mitaparekh1 ji, paplupopat ji, chota sa dil ji, aur ishika ji, aap sab logon ka behad shukriya. mai ne reply dene me der kardi iskeliye maafi chahti hoon. mujhe aap sab ki relies padh ke bohot khushi hoti hai.
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hi - 18th July 2005, 09:01 AM

os ghum me bhi ek mazaa sa mile
gar tu mere ghum ka bahana rahe


HI Zeba ji!

Bahut hi lajawab aur pursoch ghazal likhi hai aapne.

aapne likhne ka aur bayan karne ka andaaz bahut achcha laga......

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20th July 2005, 01:03 PM
os ghum me bhi ek mazaa sa mile
gar tu mere ghum ka bahana raha

Ye sher bhi.....dil ke bahut kareeb.

Zeba ji...aap itna achchha likhti haiN...ki aap yooNhi likhti raheiN yahi kaamna hai...or ham parhte raheiN.


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21st July 2005, 07:31 AM
dard hi mere dil ka thikaana rahe
aur khushioon me ana-jana rahe

os ghum me bhi ek mazaa sa mile
gar tu mere ghum ka bahana rahe

guzar zindagi youn-hi hooti rahe
na poochna, na kuch batana rahe

sukoon se jiyaa wo aakhri din bhi
jiski maut kaa usko patana rahe

dard hi mere dil ka thikaana rahe
aur khushioon me ana-jana rahe
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Zeba ji,

bahot khoob. aap ki rachna bahut kuch keh rahi hai... likhte rehna.. khush rehna!
   
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