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Dard-e-dil Banke Gazal -
6th March 2005, 03:32 PM
BENOOR AANKHE KEH RAHI HAIN EK DAASTAA',
DARD HUMSE BADHKAR AUR PAOGE KAHAAN, ASHK BANKE DARIYA, BAHA LE JAATE HAIN GAMO KO, HAR MUKURAAHAT ME EK DARD CHHIPA HAI, KAASH BHULA PAATE HUM BHI GAM, HONTHO SE LAGAA KE JAAMO KO, FARMAAYE ZAMAANA ,HUM SA KHUSHNASEEB NAHI, KOSHISH KARE LAB KEHNE KI, DIN VO AB NAHI, JAZBAAT GHUT RAHE HAIN DIL HI DIL MEIN, BEBASI KI TASWEER BANKE REH GAYE GUM, NAAUMMEEDI HI NAZAR AAYE HASEEN SAAHIL MEIN, APNO KE TAANE AAJ AISE JAKHM BHAR RAHE HAIN, KI DARD-E-DIL BANKE GAZAL KAGAZ PE UTAR RAHE HAIN ****** Your attitude towards life decides Life's attitude towards you... |
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Re: Dard-e-dil Banke Gazal -
6th March 2005, 04:36 PM
[B]Bahut hi khoob likha hai pallavi ji aapne yahan.....[B]itna achha laga aaj dard mein dooba kuch padna......kounsi panktiya jaada achhi hain ye to kehna mushkil hoga....par mujhe ye kafi kafi oasand aayi!!!
JAZBAAT GHUT RAHE HAIN DIL HI DIL MEIN, BEBASI KI TASWEER BANKE REH GAYE GUM, NAAUMMEEDI HI NAZAR AAYE HASEEN SAAHIL MEIN, APNO KE TAANE AAJ AISE JAKHM BHAR RAHE HAIN, KI DARD-E-DIL BANKE GAZAL KAGAZ PE UTAR RAHE HAIN Kuch nagme gaa kar chale gaye kuch aahe bhar kar laut gaye, Wo bhi ek pal ka kissa the mein bhi ek pal ka kissa hoon, Kal tumse juda ho jaaonga jo aaj tumhara hisa hoon[/color] |
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6th March 2005, 05:07 PM
THANX DEAR SHALINI...
ACHHA TAB LAGTA HAI JAB MEHSOOS HO KOI AUR BHI IS DARD KO MEHSOOS KAR SAKTA HAI...EK KISI KE SAATH HONE KA EHSAAS TANHA HOTE HUYE BHI.. THANX AGAIN TAKE CARE ****** Your attitude towards life decides Life's attitude towards you... |
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7th March 2005, 02:53 PM
FARMAAYE ZAMAANA ,HUM SA KHUSHNASEEB NAHI,
KOSHISH KARE LAB KEHNE KI, DIN VO AB NAHI, Pallavi, Touching... Really well written... Doo keep it Up!! Lagta hai is baar "Pulkit", kismat teri bhi rang laayii hai |
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7th March 2005, 05:10 PM
hmmm bahut khoob likha aapna
BENOOR AANKHE KEH RAHI HAIN EK DAASTAA', DARD HUMSE BADHKAR AUR PAOGE KAHAAN, kuch kahunga, Kyun Hame diya dard itna ki hamara dard seh na sake, Jo hui hai beenoor aaj ye aankhein kabhi noor dhundhna chaha tha inme... bye tanha |
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7th March 2005, 05:55 PM
thanx tanhaa ji....
waise aap tanhaa q hain..smajh nahi aaya...hum sabhi hain to sahi.... take care ****** Your attitude towards life decides Life's attitude towards you... |
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7th March 2005, 06:38 PM
kisi ne apne pan par hi kuch kaha tha kabhi
Ki Hame to apno ne maara gairo main kahan dum tha hamari kishti bhi wahan doobi jahan paani kam tha tanha |
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