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11th June 2005, 11:46 PM
hope u like it frnd
Koi dekhe meri in aankho main ki inse aaj bhi nadiya behti hai koi aaye mere virane main ki unki yaad bahut satati hai... Bhula baitha tha jis kahani ko wo kahani phir dohrai jaati hai koi aaye mere virane main ki unki yaad satati hai..... Tha kisi ka intzaar itna ki palak na jhapkaye jaati hai, koi aaye mere virane main ki mujhse unki yaad na bhulaye jaati hai.... Dhundta tha dhoop main wo to ek parchai thi haat jo mere aaye wo uski hi bewafai thi Aaj bhi jhumta hai dil ki uski jhalak dekh paata hun mehfil main na sahi virane main usko khayal main laaya hun Koi mere dil se pooche chot ye kaisi khaye hai, koi aaye mere virane main unki yaad chali aaye hai.... |
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12th June 2005, 06:34 AM
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well wat a flow of thoughts. har alfaas aapne aap mein mukamal hai. its superb. meri daad kabool karna and keep writing ahead too. it was fantastic n well written by u. judai ki tarap ka kya bakhubhi se beyaan diya aapne. likhte rahiye. take care and may god bless u with his finnest glitters.  mera aashiyaan tha wahan jahan toofanon ka theekana tha, ek naadan dil tha aur ek bedard zamana tha! na jaane kyu ussi pal mil gaya ek dard naya, jab kisi roz mere labon ka muskurana tha! ***************************** Kutch bayani ho ehsaason ki….. Kutch kahani ho jasbaaton ki…. Ek paaq bazm jahan ho sirf pyar….. Dhoondte hain koi aisa manzar yaar…. Karein ek dooje se har koi lagaav…. Koi kare shikayat koi de sujaav Naazim kare hifaazat-e-pyar… Dhoondte hain koi aisa manzar yaar…. Buzurgoon ki kahawaat hai… Fal-e-intezaar meetha hai…. Kehte hain Jas- Nal- Aman…. Thoda sa, bus thoda sa intezaar…. 
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12th June 2005, 12:56 PM
Hi ...
bahoot achha likha hai.. nice one.. |
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12th June 2005, 01:31 PM
Namaskar Tanha ji
Bahut khoobsurat Rachna hay........dard bhari Koi dekhe meri in aankho main ki inse aaj bhi nadiya behti hai koi aaye mere virane main ki unki yaad bahut satati hai... Meri daad kijega...... Sada kush Rahiye.......keep writing |
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12th June 2005, 06:21 PM
Bhula baitha tha jis kahani ko
wo kahani phir dohrai jaati hai koi aaye mere virane main ki unki yaad satati hai..... Waah...waah...I'liked it! take care Kuch nagme gaa kar chale gaye kuch aahe bhar kar laut gaye, Wo bhi ek pal ka kissa the mein bhi ek pal ka kissa hoon, Kal tumse juda ho jaaonga jo aaj tumhara hisa hoon[/color] |
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12th June 2005, 06:27 PM
tanha ji, (sorry don no ur name)amazin
simply superb keep writin liek this....really it was wonderful take care Chaandni mere pyaar ki kyun uspar na rang laayi Kyun bas kami hi meri ibaadat me usko nazar aayi Thaa laakh bura sahi main. sacchi meri chaahat thi Kyun meri bhaavnaon ko woh samajh nahi paayi... Dekhna chahta hun.. Tere tasveer ko khwab banake dekhna chahta hun Aur us khwab mein apne aap ko khona chahta hun I envy the words, which took the form of my emotions I love my poetry… Which has turned the tears of pain in to the pearls of love… |
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12th June 2005, 11:34 PM
bahut bahut shukiria dosto ki aane mere likha pasand kiya bas likh leta hun kabhi kabhi aise hi jab man karta hai phir aapke saamne haajir hunga aisa hi kuch lekar tab tak ke liye maaf kijye aur sada khush rahiye
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13th June 2005, 01:58 AM
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Bahut acha likha hai apne...it was superb Bhula baitha tha jis kahani ko wo kahani phir dohrai jaati hai koi aaye mere virane main ki unki yaad satati hai..... These lines were amzaing...keep writing Take Care Regards Nidhi Friend Nidhi - A Silent Tear "Shedding a Tear When You are Lonely - So Peaceful yet so Painful...." |
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13th June 2005, 10:51 AM
Thanks a lot dear friends mujhe bahut accha laga ki aapne mera likha pasand kiya
take care tanha (Rohit) |
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13th June 2005, 05:05 PM
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likhte rahiye sonal There would come a time when we have to stop loving a person not because that person started hating us ..... but because we found out that they'd be happier if we let me go..... |
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18th June 2005, 07:51 PM
Thanks a lot dear soni accha laga aapne mera likha pasand kiya
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