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Ghazal: so laboeN pe ab koi duaa nahiN... - 14th April 2012, 11:44 AM
Dosto,

ek taaza ghazal pesh kar rahaa hun..aapke raaey ki umeed rahegi.


kuch teri nigaah se chupa nahiN
so laboeN pe ab koi duaa nahiN

kuch mila ya na mila gilaa nahiN
maiN khudi se aaj tak milaa nahiN

ajnabee ki shaql meiN dikha lekin
kaarwaan der tak rukaa nahin

jaa rahaa ye raastaa kahaan bataa?
ta-umar hi jo safar kataa nahiN

shokh kaaghaz sa tha ye dil jahaaN
rang rishtoeN ka tha ghulaa nahiN

koste ho baarishoeN ko tum magar
phool bay kaef tha khila nahiN

woh mere baad bhi meraa rahe
aisi khwahish to kar chalaa nahin

waqt kaatil bhi hai hakeem bhi
aur mareez-e-ishq ki dawaa nahiN

fursato’n meiN sochte yahi bismil
kyun sukooN se waastaa huaa nahiN

Pradhyuman - Bismil

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gore ghareeban hai ye 'bismil', kyun tu naashaad nazar aata hai?
musht-e-khaak hai basi yahan, bata kahan fuwaad nazar aata hai?
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14th April 2012, 04:19 PM
kuch mila ya na mila gilaa nahiN
maiN khudi se aaj tak milaa nahiN

jaa rahaa ye raastaa kahaan bataa?
ta-umar hi jo safar kataa nahiN

Bahut Khoob ... Pradhyuman Ji !

AchChhe Ash'aar Kahe HaiN ... UmdaaH !

Purasar Ghazal Huii ... BehtreeN PeshKash !

Dilee Mubaaraqbaad !!!



YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN
Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ...

Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh
Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ...

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15th April 2012, 10:17 AM
kuch teri nigaah se chupa nahiN
so laboeN pe ab koi duaa nahiN

kuch mila ya na mila gilaa nahiN
maiN khudi se aaj tak milaa nahiN


jaa rahaa ye raastaa kahaan bataa?
ta-umar hi jo safar kataa nahiN

bahut khoob bhai.daad o mubaraqbaad.
   
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15th April 2012, 10:28 AM
Pradhyuman Bhaa'ii:

namaste! Kem chho?

janaab aik Khoob Ghazal paDhne ko mili aapki aur se... behterin andaaz-e-bayaan rahaa aapka aur yeh Sher mujhe zyaadaah pasand aaya...
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kuch mila ya na mila gilaa nahiN
maiN khudi se aaj tak milaa nahiN
ees soch par alag se daad!

KhuSh raheN... apnaa Khayaal raKheN

duaaoN ke saath ijaazat

aapka

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15th April 2012, 10:45 PM
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waqt kaatil bhi hai hakeem bhi
aur mareez-e-ishq ki dawaa nahiN

hooooooooN......

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dhaval bhai, sunita ji, naresh ji, uff ak sahaab, rajinder ji aap sabhi ka dil se shukriyaada karta hun...thank you all..god bless

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