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Dil e nadan bah Gaya tha. - 12th August 2014, 07:11 PM

Yoon to aa gayi thi bahut door tujhse phir bhi,
Mujhse mera hi kuch tumhare paas rah Gaya tha...

Yoon to sunta nahi ye kabhi bhi kisi ki,
Tere khatir ye dil Kai ilzaam sah Gaya tha.
Socha tha sab kahoongi beeta Jo Hijra me tha,
Nazaron ko Tera nazara yoon Mila jaise
Chand ko koi chakor takata rah Gaya tha.

Yoon to zazbaat chipaye the tujhi se,
Aisi chali Hawa ki dil e nadan bah Gaya tha.

Yoon to Tera hath Maine pal Bhar ko hi thama,
Khushboo Bhara vo lamha mere hathon me bas Gaya tha.

Yoon to usoolon ki janjeeron se baandh rakha tha dil ko
Kuch to nasha hai tujhse ki ye bagawat kar Gaya tha.

Yoon to aa gayi thi bahut door tujhse phir bhi,
Mujhse mera hi kuch tumhare paas rah Gaya tha.



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12th August 2014, 07:45 PM

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Yoon to Tera hath Maine pal Bhar ko hi thama,
Khushboo Bhara vo lamha mere hathon me bas Gaya tha.

Yoon to usoolon ki janjeeron se baandh rakha tha dil ko
Kuch to nasha hai tujhse ki ye bagawat kar Gaya tha.

Yoon to aa gayi thi bahut door tujhse phir bhi,
Mujhse mera hi kuch tumhare paas rah Gaya tha.

Bohat khoob Madhu ji. ...

pata nahi kyun per bohat zyada pasand aaye mujhe aapke yeh ehsaas..

touching. ....




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Bohat khoob Madhu ji. ...

pata nahi kyun per bohat zyada pasand aaye mujhe aapke yeh ehsaas..

touching. ....
Bahut khushnaseebi ki aapko meri poem pasand aayi...
Aane ke liye shukriya...



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speechless........aur main kahun bhi kya....zainy g ne aapka sher apne sign.me lagaya hai....is se badi baat kya hogi......



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Shukriya aru ji ..shayad aap sahi kah rahe hain zainy ji ne itni izzat bakshi mere sher ko iske liye main tahe dil se shukraguzar hoon unki...



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Yoon to Tera hath Maine pal Bhar ko hi thama,
Khushboo Bhara vo lamha mere hathon me bas Gaya tha.

Yoon to aa gayi thi bahut door tujhse phir bhi,
Mujhse mera hi kuch tumhare paas rah Gaya tha.


Wahh! Madhu jii,,

Ehsasaat ko lafzoN ke roop meiN jis tarah sanwaara hai aap ne
waqai qaabil-e-tareef hai... dherooN daad qabool kijiye,
khas taur per quoted lines ke liye!

likhte rahiye,
aise hi mehfil roshan karte rahiye,

DuaooN ke saath,,


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shukriya - 19th August 2014, 10:10 AM

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Yoon to Tera hath Maine pal Bhar ko hi thama,
Khushboo Bhara vo lamha mere hathon me bas Gaya tha.

Yoon to aa gayi thi bahut door tujhse phir bhi,
Mujhse mera hi kuch tumhare paas rah Gaya tha.


Wahh! Madhu jii,,

Ehsasaat ko lafzoN ke roop meiN jis tarah sanwaara hai aap ne
waqai qaabil-e-tareef hai... dherooN daad qabool kijiye,
khas taur per quoted lines ke liye!

likhte rahiye,
aise hi mehfil roshan karte rahiye,

DuaooN ke saath,,
Aapki daad k liye bahut bahut shukriya hasan ji....aste rahein..



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19th August 2014, 11:01 AM

Madhu saahibaa bahot khoob likha hai aapne..... bas padhte rahen ko dil chahta hai....

Yoon to zazbaat chipaye the tujhi se,
Aisi chali Hawa ki dil e nadan bah Gaya tha.

Yoon to Tera hath Maine pal Bhar ko hi thama,
Khushboo Bhara vo lamha mere hathon me bas Gaya tha.


ummdah peshkash ke liye dil se daad.....




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Madhu saahibaa bahot khoob likha hai aapne..... bas padhte rahen ko dil chahta hai....

Yoon to zazbaat chipaye the tujhi se,
Aisi chali Hawa ki dil e nadan bah Gaya tha.

Yoon to Tera hath Maine pal Bhar ko hi thama,
Khushboo Bhara vo lamha mere hathon me bas Gaya tha.


ummdah peshkash ke liye dil se daad.....


Der se reply k liye mafi chahti hoon shaad ji.....hausala afzai ka behad shukriya. ...
Yoon hi sath dete rahein...



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Apki nazm kii khusbu pahoch gai hum tk dekhiye chale aye dil ko sukooN bakshne...wakai apki nazm padhna dil ko sukooN hi pahoNchata hai....har lafz meiN jazbaatoN kii moti piroyi hai aapne, jitni tareef ki jae kam hai koi ek line ya stanza nhi puri nazm hi muhabbat hai.....mere dil ko chhua hai aapne madhuji aur ap aksar aisa kartiN haiN yunhi likhtey rahiye.
Aapka behad shukriya naaz ji ki aap meri nazm ko itni mohabbat se padti hain...
Ye meri Khushnaseebi ki aapke dil ko chchoo ne me kamyab rahi main.....yoon hi aate rahiye apke sath ki zaroorat aage bhi hogi.....



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Aaj ek dost ka Sher padh me apni the purani poem yaad AA gayii..🙂🙂



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Yoon to aa gayi thi bahut door tujhse phir bhi,
Mujhse mera hi kuch tumhare paas rah Gaya tha...

Yoon to sunta nahi ye kabhi bhi kisi ki,
Tere khatir ye dil Kai ilzaam sah Gaya tha.
Socha tha sab kahoongi beeta Jo Hijra me tha,
Nazaron ko Tera nazara yoon Mila jaise
Chand ko koi chakor takata rah Gaya tha.

Yoon to zazbaat chipaye the tujhi se,
Aisi chali Hawa ki dil e nadan bah Gaya tha.

Yoon to Tera hath Maine pal Bhar ko hi thama,
Khushboo Bhara vo lamha mere hathon me bas Gaya tha.

Yoon to usoolon ki janjeeron se baandh rakha tha dil ko
Kuch to nasha hai tujhse ki ye bagawat kar Gaya tha.

Yoon to aa gayi thi bahut door tujhse phir bhi,
Mujhse mera hi kuch tumhare paas rah Gaya tha.
Bahut aacha likha hai Madhu jaane kyun pehle is par nazar nahi padi....daad qubool farmaayein



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Bahut aacha likha hai Madhu jaane kyun pehle is par nazar nahi padi....daad qubool farmaayein
Inayat ka shukriya Ji......

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Yoon to aa gayi thi bahut door tujhse phir bhi,
Mujhse mera hi kuch tumhare paas rah Gaya tha...

Yoon to sunta nahi ye kabhi bhi kisi ki,
Tere khatir ye dil Kai ilzaam sah Gaya tha.
Socha tha sab kahoongi beeta Jo Hijra me tha,
Nazaron ko Tera nazara yoon Mila jaise
Chand ko koi chakor takata rah Gaya tha.

Yoon to zazbaat chipaye the tujhi se,
Aisi chali Hawa ki dil e nadan bah Gaya tha.

Yoon to Tera hath Maine pal Bhar ko hi thama,
Khushboo Bhara vo lamha mere hathon me bas Gaya tha.

Yoon to usoolon ki janjeeron se baandh rakha tha dil ko
Kuch to nasha hai tujhse ki ye bagawat kar Gaya tha.

Yoon to aa gayi thi bahut door tujhse phir bhi,
Mujhse mera hi kuch tumhare paas rah Gaya tha.

Madhu bala...bahut khoobsurat ehsaas...yeh ehsaas bahut khaas lge:

Yoon to aa gayi thi bahut door tujhse phir bhi,
Mujhse mera hi kuch tumhare paas rah Gaya tha



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Madhu bala...bahut khoobsurat ehsaas...yeh ehsaas bahut khaas lge:

Yoon to aa gayi thi bahut door tujhse phir bhi,
Mujhse mera hi kuch tumhare paas rah Gaya tha

Bahot shukriya Di......

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