Koii bhi koshish naakaam nahiiN hoti, magar jo himmat haar deta hai wahii naakam hota hai.
waise is lehk ki baat kareN, to bahot hi khoob likha hai aapne :]
khaas-taur pe yeh sher mujhe behad pasand aaya:
"tum jub se mujhko chod kar tanha chale gaye
"Fanah" bhi teri yaad mein midta chala jata hai"
ek baar ohr taareef karta huuN aapki koshish ki, magar saath meiN yeh guzaarish bhi hai ki aap himmat na haariye!
likhte rahiye,
aman
"je tu akhiiyaaN de saamne naii rehnaa,
te bibba saada dil moD de..!"
Aman aap ki hausla afzai ke liye shukriya...
aap ke comments bahot kum milte hain...pur aap jub bhi kuch
kehte ho woh 100% such hota hai...
Aman maine abhi himmat nahi hari hai Isiliye abhi tuk jee raha
hoon..kuchlogon ke liye warna is jahan mein hai hi kya...
aman yeh mut samajhyiga ki main negative thinking wala person
hoon...lekin dil ki chot Ache-Ache pathar dilon ko hila deti hai...
koshish jari rahegi...
To Rani..
Waleku-As-Salam Rani...
Rani thanks for u'r compliments..
aap ko bahotkum padha hai..
kya aap nayi hain...
thanks once again...
Keep in touch...
Jee Im new to the forum,par app likh rehe the ke iss duniya main hai kia?Fanah Allah nai hum ko bohut kuch diya hai...par insaan tho hur vaaqt aur mangtha hai...jo hai uss ka shukriyah adah nahen kartha.Par app honsla rakhen.
tc
Likhthe rahiye gha
w/s
Rani
Log Kehtein hain mujhe aadat hai muskurane ki,
Par woh yeh nahi jaante ki yeh bhi ek adaa hai gam chupaane ki.