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Birha Tu Sultan
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peeta hoon...... -
1st October 2001, 11:04 AM
apne aansoo thode se milaa ke peeta hoon
paani ko sharaab main banaa ke peeta hoon chupke-chukpe unka deedaar karta hoon main sabki nazron se chhupaa ke peeta hoon maikasH is tarhe teri yaad meiN har shaam dhaley hai goyaa koyi nagin si kalejey pe chaley hai maikash ............................... |
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16th October 2001, 02:50 PM
maikash sahab aadaab
aap yakinan ek bahut acche shayar hain miyaa! ye sher hame bahut pasand bhi aaye. socha aap ke nashe mein ham bhi shirkiyat karein.. to agar aap bura na maane to isi vajan ke ek do sher hamari taraf sein nazar karte hain... mulaahiza farmaaiye...... teri galiyon mein aaj kal main bhii aate jaate sharaab piitaa huun tuze 'maikash' to muzko bhi 'sagar' log kehte hain fir bhi piitaa huun anjane me muzko wo shayar bana gaya |
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adaab ...!! |
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17th October 2001, 07:01 AM
shukriya sagar ji......
apki tavaazo mili ....hamare naam pe likhne ka shukriya.....lijiye peene ki baat par kuch arz hai....... khushiyan ho ya gam youn peeta hoon dagmagayen kadam youn peeta hoon peeta nahin main zindagi ke vaaste nikal hi jaaye dam youn peeta hoon adaab maikasH is tarhe teri yaad meiN har shaam dhaley hai goyaa koyi nagin si kalejey pe chaley hai maikash ............................... |
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17th November 2001, 12:20 PM
appkey sheir barey he dard barey hai..... app key shaeiro main etna dard kyo hai maikash je..bataein na....kyo ????
dil chahta hai chahta hai...ki janu, puchoo appsey..... ki etna dard kyo.... etna dard kyo..... app bahut acha likhtey hai......toh main kehna nai chahte kyo ki app es sey be bahut bahut bahut acha likhtey hai.... |
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3rd January 2007, 04:36 PM
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na kar dushmani tu zindgi se, eh mere dost , tu kaya janey tujhe dekhkar bhi koi jeeta hai...!  .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए... 
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7th May 2007, 07:55 AM
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itni puraani post se phir mulaqaat karvaane ke liye shukurguzaar huuN aapka voh din bhi khoob the, bohat dost hua karte the yahaaN us zamaane meiN rab raakha maikash is tarhe teri yaad meiN har shaam dhaley hai goyaa koyi nagin si kalejey pe chaley hai maikash ............................... |
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1st June 2007, 08:14 AM
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Maikash saheb..aapke ye azad sher dekhe ik maza sa aane laga....be-saakhta ik nasha sa aane laga..bahoot khoob dost..hum bhi aapki is ada maiN kutchh gustaakhi kerna chahenge... Aadtan maiN pee leta hooN Iradatan maiN pee leta hooN Roothhe gar khushiyaan jab muzhse Jiyadatan maiN pee leta hooN. Nafrat jo kare koi muzhse, nafrat ko hi pee leta hooN Maikhaane main jab aa hi gaye, Toh zeher mile pee leta hooN Harash |
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10th June 2007, 03:47 AM
correcting your signature maikash -
Jo Khud se na jhukwa le use dar nahi kehtey, Har dar pe jo jhuk jaaye use sar nahi kehtey... Na lo inteqam mujhse mere saath saath chal ke..... Dil diya thaa to muqader bhee ataa kar detey, warna taqhlik se pehley he fanaa kar detey, tumne samajhi hee nahi ishq kee azmat warna, hum tumhey ek he sajdey main khudaa kar detey... Meri bandagi hai woh bandagi, jo qaid-e-dair-o-haram nahi, mera ek nazar tujhey dekhna, ba-khuda namaz se kam nahi... |
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10th June 2007, 04:02 AM
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i'm afraid it did not need corrction! aap donoN ash'aar ga'ur se dekhiye aur takkhayul aur taGhazzul ke hisaab se inke mai'ney bhi dekhiye aapki ittelaah ke liye bataa duuN ke ye do misre'y maine marhoom nusrat fateh ali khan saheb ki ek qawwali meiN sune haiN agar aapka kehna hai ke marhoom ne she'r "Ghalat" padha hai to mehr'baani karke sahi kalaam aur shayir ka naam ataa kareiN taa'ke mere ilm meiN bhi izaafa ho sake shukriya maikash is tarhe teri yaad meiN har shaam dhaley hai goyaa koyi nagin si kalejey pe chaley hai maikash ............................... |
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