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jis mod pe chhoda wahin talash lena mujhe |
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jis mod pe chhoda wahin talash lena mujhe -
19th August 2009, 10:28 AM
kaatoge jism mera to kya paaoge
apni karni par khud hi pachhtaaoge mein to had-maans me lipti ik laash hun tum to shayad mujhe chhoo bhi na paaoge aankhe.n band karke tum muh ko mod loge kisi aur se daaman ko apne jod loge hum to ik kadam bhi na chal payenge jis mod pe chhoda hai wahin nazar aayenge baldev |
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19th August 2009, 10:47 AM
Accha likha hai..
aankhe.n band karke tum muh ko mod loge kisi aur se daaman ko apne jod loge hum to ik kadam bhi na chal payenge jis mod pe chhoda hai wahin nazar aayenge  likhte rahiye. Zinda hai ye Jism mera,
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pyar ka naam likha tha jisme bade pyar se |
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pyar ka naam likha tha jisme bade pyar se -
19th August 2009, 11:45 AM
thnx dear,,,
u r also good writer,,, keep it up likhne wale ne ye kaisi teri taqdeer bana daali pyar haasil hone se pahle hi teri hasti mita daali pyar ka naam likha tha jisme bade pyar se hamne to woh kitab hi apne ghar se jalaa daali baldev |
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