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25th November 2012, 02:36 PM
Bazm ko mera aadaab, mere khayaal se ye ab tak ki meri sabse lambi ghazal hai, bas jo dil me aaya vo likhta chala gaya, agar jyada lambi ho gayi ho ya kuch galtiyaaN hoN to maai ka talabgaar rahuNgaa...
Aag rakhte hain, to kuch log aab rakhte haiN,
Hum dushman ke liye bhi aadaab rakhte haiN.
Mohabbat me log tohfe ye naayaab rakhte haiN,
Har lamhe ke liye ek naya azaab* rakhte haiN.
*sorrow, curse...
Pehle deewaar bana kar usme baab* rakhte haiN,
Insaan bhi aadateN kuch lajawaab rakhte haiN.
*Darwaza.
Sach se hai door talak jinka koi vaastaa nahiN,
PalkoN pe aise bhi chand khwaab rakhte haiN.
Raah chalte kahin tujhse mulaqaat na ho jaye,
Ye soch har waqt saath ab sharaab rakhte haiN.
Do kilo pyar ke aiwaz me diya tune sau kilo ghum,
Bhale-bure ka hum bhi khoob hisaab rakhte haiN.
Dard, aansu, shikwe, jafaa aur ruswayi mile jisme,
Aisi mohabbat se to hum Iztenaab* rakhte haiN.
*Parhez.
Har cheez ahchi ho jaye to log shaq se dekhte haiN,
So hum bhi ab aadateN kuch kharaab rakhte haiN.
Farq hi nahin bacha ab insaan aur jaanwaroN meN,
Jo bhediye bhi aaj kal insaani naqaab rakhte haiN.
Vo din ladd gaye jab mohabbat me ehsash hote the,
Ab ishq ke naam pe log sawaal-o-jawaab rakhte haiN.
Ishq ke tamaachon se hui aaj haalat meri buri 'Taish',
NahiN to hum bhi yahaaN bahut ruaab* rakhte haiN.
*Influence.
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25th November 2012, 03:16 PM
Taish sahib
Apna dil cheer kar rakh diya hain aapne is gazal main,
aur pesh kar diya humare samne ..
itnee sundar ghazal thi ki dil karta tha kabhi lkhatam hi na ho..
Bahut shandar likha apne ...dher sari shubkamnayen..
Sanjay
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25th November 2012, 05:51 PM
Sach se hai door talak jinka koi vaastaa nahiN,
PalkoN pe aise bhi chand khwaab rakhte haiN.
Vo din ladd gaye jab mohabbat me ehsash hote the,
Ab ishq ke naam pe log sawaal-o-jawaab rakhte haiN.
WaaH ! BehtareeN !!
Khoobsurat Khayaalaat Se Labrez ... Takhleeq Huii Janaab !
Dilee Daad O Mubaaraqbaad !!!
YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN
Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ...
Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh
Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ...
---Naresh Mehra----
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26th November 2012, 04:04 PM
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Originally Posted by Hamdam
Taish sahib
Apna dil cheer kar rakh diya hain aapne is gazal main,
aur pesh kar diya humare samne ..
itnee sundar ghazal thi ki dil karta tha kabhi lkhatam hi na ho..
Bahut shandar likha apne ...dher sari shubkamnayen..
Sanjay
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sanjay sahab aapne hume itni izzat bakshi, aur aapka kalaam itna pasand aaya, ye jaan kar dil ko badi tasallli mili, umeed karta hun ki aapke saath ka ye daur v kabhi khatm na ho...
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27th November 2012, 09:47 AM
Lucky Bhaa'ii:
namaste!
aapki soch ko maiN salaam kartaa huuN... umdaah Ghazal aur andaaz-e-bayaaN
yuuNhi bazm ki Shaan ko baDhaate rahiye aage bhee... daad
KhuSh raheN... apnaa Khayaal raKheN
duaaoN ke saath ijaazat
aapka
~Dhaval
*~*Dhaval*~*....Ek Ehsaas...
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27th November 2012, 11:32 AM
Pehle deewaar bana kar usme baab* rakhte haiN,
Insaan bhi aadateN kuch lajawaab rakhte haiN.
Har cheez ahchi ho jaye to log shaq se dekhte haiN,
So hum bhi ab aadateN kuch kharaab rakhte haiN.
Ishq ke tamaachon se hui aaj haalat meri buri 'Taish',
NahiN to hum bhi yahaaN bahut ruaab* rakhte haiN.
waahh wah waahhh kya baat hai janaab.... khoob.. bahot khoob janaab... aapke is khubsurat kalaam ki jitni bhi tareef ki jaae kam hi padegii.. Ye poora kalaam hi behad aala hai meri nazar me magar jo sher maine upar likhe hain unka to jawaab hi nahi.. bahot khoob, bahot ummdah.. likhte raheN....
Shaad....
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28th November 2012, 12:16 PM
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Originally Posted by naresh_mehra110
Sach se hai door talak jinka koi vaastaa nahiN,
PalkoN pe aise bhi chand khwaab rakhte haiN.
Vo din ladd gaye jab mohabbat me ehsash hote the,
Ab ishq ke naam pe log sawaal-o-jawaab rakhte haiN.
WaaH ! BehtareeN !!
Khoobsurat Khayaalaat Se Labrez ... Takhleeq Huii Janaab !
Dilee Daad O Mubaaraqbaad !!!
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sir ji aap aaye bahaar aayi, jaan kar khushi hui ki aapko kalaam pasand aaya, kosish yahi rahegi ki aage v aapko pasand aane laayak kalaam likh sakun...
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28th November 2012, 05:52 PM
bahut khoob......nice one..........
एक हाथ में दिल उनके एक हाथ में खंजर था
चेहरे पे दोस्त का मुखौटा अजीब सा मंजर था
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29th November 2012, 10:05 AM
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Originally Posted by Dhaval
Lucky Bhaa'ii:
namaste!
aapki soch ko maiN salaam kartaa huuN... umdaah Ghazal aur andaaz-e-bayaaN
yuuNhi bazm ki Shaan ko baDhaate rahiye aage bhee... daad
KhuSh raheN... apnaa Khayaal raKheN
duaaoN ke saath ijaazat
aapka
~Dhaval
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Dhaval sahab bahut bahut shukriya, aapki tareef maayne rakhti hai hai, jaan kar behad khushi hui ki aapko kalaam paand aaya, umeed karta hun ki aage bhi aapka saath hume yuNhi milta rahega, aur humari likhne ki jaddo-jehat bji jaari rahegi...
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29th November 2012, 05:58 PM
Sach se hai door talak jinka koi vaastaa nahiN,
PalkoN pe aise bhi chand khwaab rakhte haiN.
Har cheez ahchi ho jaye to log shaq se dekhte haiN,
So hum bhi ab aadateN kuch kharaab rakhte haiN.
Vo din ladd gaye jab mohabbat me ehsash hote the,
Ab ishq ke naam pe log sawaal-o-jawaab rakhte haiN.
Ishq ke tamaachon se hui aaj haalat meri buri 'Taish',
NahiN to hum bhi yahaaN bahut ruaab* rakhte haiN.
waah ... bahot achhe ... padh ke maja aa gaya bhai ... keep it up !!
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30th November 2012, 02:04 PM
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Originally Posted by Taish
Bazm ko mera aadaab, mere khayaal se ye ab tak ki meri sabse lambi ghazal hai, bas jo dil me aaya vo likhta chala gaya, agar jyada lambi ho gayi ho ya kuch galtiyaaN hoN to maai ka talabgaar rahuNgaa...
Aag rakhte hain, to kuch log aab rakhte haiN,
Hum dushman ke liye bhi aadaab rakhte haiN.
Mohabbat me log tohfe ye naayaab rakhte haiN,
Har lamhe ke liye ek naya azaab* rakhte haiN.
*sorrow, curse...
Pehle deewaar bana kar usme baab* rakhte haiN,
Insaan bhi aadateN kuch lajawaab rakhte haiN.
*Darwaza.
Sach se hai door talak jinka koi vaastaa nahiN,
PalkoN pe aise bhi chand khwaab rakhte haiN.
Raah chalte kahin tujhse mulaqaat na ho jaye,
Ye soch har waqt saath ab sharaab rakhte haiN.
Do kilo pyar ke aiwaz me diya tune sau kilo ghum,
Bhale-bure ka hum bhi khoob hisaab rakhte haiN.
Dard, aansu, shikwe, jafaa aur ruswayi mile jisme,
Aisi mohabbat se to hum Iztenaab* rakhte haiN.
*Parhez.
Har cheez ahchi ho jaye to log shaq se dekhte haiN,
So hum bhi ab aadateN kuch kharaab rakhte haiN.
Farq hi nahin bacha ab insaan aur jaanwaroN meN,
Jo bhediye bhi aaj kal insaani naqaab rakhte haiN.
Vo din ladd gaye jab mohabbat me ehsash hote the,
Ab ishq ke naam pe log sawaal-o-jawaab rakhte haiN.
Ishq ke tamaachon se hui aaj haalat meri buri 'Taish',
NahiN to hum bhi yahaaN bahut ruaab* rakhte haiN.
*Influence.
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bahut hi umda gazal pata hi nahi chala kab khatam ho gai bahut khoob..............
Rashmi Sharma
path par kaante bahut hain tere
par manjil par jaana too.ne
dar na jatilata se jeewan ki
isko saral banana too.ne
pasat na hone paye honsle
khud ka sahas khud hi juta le
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1st December 2012, 12:57 PM
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Originally Posted by sameer'shaad'
Pehle deewaar bana kar usme baab* rakhte haiN,
Insaan bhi aadateN kuch lajawaab rakhte haiN.
Har cheez ahchi ho jaye to log shaq se dekhte haiN,
So hum bhi ab aadateN kuch kharaab rakhte haiN.
Ishq ke tamaachon se hui aaj haalat meri buri 'Taish',
NahiN to hum bhi yahaaN bahut ruaab* rakhte haiN.
waahh wah waahhh kya baat hai janaab.... khoob.. bahot khoob janaab... aapke is khubsurat kalaam ki jitni bhi tareef ki jaae kam hi padegii.. Ye poora kalaam hi behad aala hai meri nazar me magar jo sher maine upar likhe hain unka to jawaab hi nahi.. bahot khoob, bahot ummdah.. likhte raheN....
Shaad....
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shaad saahab tak mera salaam pahuNche, jaan kar khushi hui ki aapke dil tak baat pahunchi, aur aapki daad humare sar aaNkhon pe, bas yahi dua rahegi ki aapka ye saath aur aapki hausla afzaayi yunhi saath rahe.... yunhi aate rahiye, khush rahiye...!!
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1st December 2012, 01:31 PM
Aag rakhte hain, to kuch log aab rakhte haiN,
Hum dushman ke liye bhi aadaab rakhte haiN.
Pehle deewaar bana kar usme baab* rakhte haiN,
Insaan bhi aadateN kuch lajawaab rakhte haiN.
bahut khoob taish sahib........................daad.
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2nd December 2012, 12:45 PM
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bahut khoob......nice one..........
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arvind sahab jaan kar behad khushi hui ki aapko kalaam pasand aaya, bas aage v aap yuNhi hausla afzaayi karte raheN...
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2nd December 2012, 04:36 PM
bahot khoob...daad..yeh sher kaafi pasand aaya..yunhi likhte rahiye..god bless...
Pehle deewaar bana kar usme baab* rakhte haiN,
Insaan bhi aadateN kuch lajawaab rakhte haiN.
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gore ghareeban hai ye 'bismil', kyun tu naashaad nazar aata hai?
musht-e-khaak hai basi yahan, bata kahan fuwaad nazar aata hai?
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3rd December 2012, 01:14 PM
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Sach se hai door talak jinka koi vaastaa nahiN,
PalkoN pe aise bhi chand khwaab rakhte haiN.
Har cheez ahchi ho jaye to log shaq se dekhte haiN,
So hum bhi ab aadateN kuch kharaab rakhte haiN.
Vo din ladd gaye jab mohabbat me ehsash hote the,
Ab ishq ke naam pe log sawaal-o-jawaab rakhte haiN.
Ishq ke tamaachon se hui aaj haalat meri buri 'Taish',
NahiN to hum bhi yahaaN bahut ruaab* rakhte haiN.
waah ... bahot achhe ... padh ke maja aa gaya bhai ... keep it up !!
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deep sahab ye humari khushnasseebi ki aapko kalaam pasand aaya, aage bhi yahi kosish rahegi ki kuch aapko bhaane layak likh sakun par aapse yuNhi saath nibhaate rehne ki darkhwast rahegi...
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4th December 2012, 08:49 AM
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bahut hi umda gazal pata hi nahi chala kab khatam ho gai bahut khoob..............
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tareef aur hausla afzaayi ka bahut bahut shukriya rashmi ji, bas duaa yahi rahegi ki aage bhi humara saath yuNhi bana rahe...
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4th December 2012, 04:19 PM
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Originally Posted by uff ak
Aag rakhte hain, to kuch log aab rakhte haiN,
Hum dushman ke liye bhi aadaab rakhte haiN.
Pehle deewaar bana kar usme baab* rakhte haiN,
Insaan bhi aadateN kuch lajawaab rakhte haiN.
bahut khoob taish sahib........................daad.
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uff aq ji bahut bahut shukriya aapka, jo aapne ise pasand kiya, bas yahi umeed karta hun ki aage v aapka saath yuNhi bana rahegaa...
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4th December 2012, 04:20 PM
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Originally Posted by Pradhyuman
bahot khoob...daad..yeh sher kaafi pasand aaya..yunhi likhte rahiye..god bless...
Pehle deewaar bana kar usme baab* rakhte haiN,
Insaan bhi aadateN kuch lajawaab rakhte haiN.
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pradhyuman sahab shukraguzaar hun aapka ki aapki nazar ko vo sher pasand aaya, umeed karta hun ki aage bhi yuNhi aapka saath hume milta rahegaa...
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