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Tuta hua dil... -
14th December 2005, 11:32 AM
Tute hue paymaane main jaam nahi aata,
ishq ke mariz kaa aaram nahi aata, ayedil todne waale, tune yeh to socha hota, toota hua dil kisike kaam nahi aata..... Jimmy.....  har saans ke saath yujhe yaad karta hai koi, maut sacchai hai ek roz aani hai, lekin teri Judaai main har Roz marta hai koi.... |
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14th December 2005, 11:58 AM
bahaut badhiya jimmy...likhte rehna..bye
Subha Kii Gard MeiN Naa Kho JaayeiN Aa ! Tere Gham MeiN Jaagtii AankheiN Kam Se Kam Aik Raat So JaayeiN." **~*FaRhAnA*~** |
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Re: Tuta hua dil... -
14th December 2005, 12:12 PM
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bohat khoob aur bilkul sahi kaha aapne. aapki is shayri ko mai ek aur andaz mein likh raha hoon aapko kaisa laga zaroor batana. @~@~@~@~@~@~@~@~@~@~@~@~@~@~@~@~@~@~@ pyaar ke payaam ko jaam nahi aata har mohabbat ke mariz ko araam nahi aata arey dil todne se pehle itna to socha hota zaalim, ke toota hua dil kisi ke kaam nahi aata......... @~@~@~@~@~@~@~@~@~@~@~@~@~@~@~@~@~@~@ i am wating for ur reply jimmy bye tak care and keep postin. I LOVE WALKING IN RAIN B.COZ NO BUDDY CAN SEE ME CRYING..........  mai kabhi kuch nahi likhta bas dusron ka likha post karta hoon kyonki mai shayar nahi hoon lekin mujhe shayri bohat pasand hai |
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14th December 2005, 12:18 PM
Hi dear friend ibrahim ji its a really nice and mujhse bhi accha hai yeh mujhe padh kar bahot hi accha laga aur accha laga ki aap ne mujhe is layak samjha ki meri khaami ko sudhaar kae baataye..thank you.. mujhe aap ki shayri bahut acchi lagi really.... u r nice....
Jimmy... Ilike to allways see the moon bcz where ever my love seen from anywhere that..... har saans ke saath yujhe yaad karta hai koi, maut sacchai hai ek roz aani hai, lekin teri Judaai main har Roz marta hai koi.... |
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14th December 2005, 12:37 PM
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aapke sher mein koi khaami nahi hai bas aapke sher ko padhne ke baad hi mujhe yeh sher yaad aaya hai aur ye aher bhi mera nahi hai ise maine ne bohat pehle suna tha jo aaj aapki shayri se yaad aagya aur jimmy doston ke naam ke aage { JI } nahi lagaate sirf aur sirf ibrahim ok bye tak care and keep posting. aapke liye ek sher arz hai..... na chahat hi sitaaron ki na tamanna hai nazaron ki sirf aap jais ek dost mil jaaye to, kya zaroorat hai hazaaron ki............. I LOVE WALKING IN RAIN B.COZ NO BUDDY CAN SEE ME CRYING ......... mai kabhi kuch nahi likhta bas dusron ka likha post karta hoon kyonki mai shayar nahi hoon lekin mujhe shayri bohat pasand hai |
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Hai -
4th June 2008, 04:10 PM
HAI JIMMY I WANT TO FREINDSHIP WITH U BECOZ U R WROTE VERY VERY LOVEABLE
MAIN BHI ISI RASTE SE NIKAL KAR GAYI HU SO I LIKE UR SHAYARI VERY MUCH   Quote:
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4th June 2008, 05:04 PM
Puja ji
Good Evening Lagtha hai ki aapney pyar may chot kaei.hai, May ek baat kahu. Tab tak pyar se pyar mat karana Jab tak pyar aapse pyar na kare, Agar pyar aapse pyar kare to use aise pyar karna ki Pyar kisi aur se pyar na kare |
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14th July 2008, 09:39 PM
Farhana G bahot khub likha hai aapney.. Keep writing thnx...
Chahat Ka Rang Tha Na Wafa Ki Lakeer Thi, Kaatil Key Haath Mein To Hina Ki Lakeer Thi, Khush Hoon Key Waqt-e-Qatl Mera Rang Surkh Tha, Merey Labo Pey Harfey Duaa Ki Lakeer Thi. 
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