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Kahiin lage na dil... - 10th June 2015, 09:29 PM
KahiiN lage na dil mera nahiiN mujhe meri khabar.
Ye dil ka mere hai bharam ya mausmoN ka hai asar.

Naseeb meiN mere nahii jo saath yaar kaa to kya.
Qubool sare gam mujhe khushi mile use agar.

Tumhare dam se haiN sanam chaman me ye bahar bhii.
Ki Tumko dhooNdhti rahe uthe jahaaN meri nazar.

Duaa ye rab se ki bahut tujhe bhula sake ye dil
Na jane kya vajah huyi dua meri hai be asar

Zara sa tham ja dil mere dhadak ke aise na dara..
saNwar to looN zara sa maiN vo aaye jane kis pahar.

Tujhe hee khojti rahi maiN aahtoN me har kahiiN.
Madhu milan ki aas meiN ek aur din gaya guzar.


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मधु जी।।।क्या बात है।।।।।भुलाने की इतनी नाकाम कोशिशें।।।

Duaa ye rab se ki bahut tujhe bhula sake ye dil
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Madhu ji bahut achche ...

pyar meiN qurabani ka jazba bakhoobi nibhaya aapne.Pls dont mind ye kalam apke standard ke hisab se 8 out 10 grade karoonga ...per overall ehsaas pasand aye mujhe ..yuN hi likhte raho, humein aapke kalamon ko parne ka intezar rahega.

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10th June 2015, 11:35 PM
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KahiiN lage na dil mera nahiiN mujhe meri khabar.
Ye dil ka mere hai bharam ya mausmoN ka hai asar.

Naseeb meiN mere nahii jo saath yaar kaa to kya.
Qubool sare gam mujhe khushi mile use agar.

Tumhare dam se haiN sanam chaman me ye bahar bhii.
Ki Tumko dhooNdhti rahe uthe jahaaN meri nazar.

Duaa ye rab se ki bahut tujhe bhula sake ye dil
Na jane kya vajah huyi dua meri hai be asar

Zara sa tham ja dil mere dhadak ke aise na dara..
saNwar to looN zara sa maiN vo aaye jane kis pahar.

Tujhe hee khojti rahi maiN aahtoN me har kahiiN.
Madhu milan ki aas meiN ek aur din gaya guzar.
Bahut khoob Madhu behad saral tarah se nibhaaya hai aapne ise, is mein jahan dard mila wahi chah bhi dikhi. har baar ki tarah bemisaal rahi aapki yeh rachnaa..

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KahiiN lage na dil mera nahiiN mujhe meri khabar.
Ye dil ka mere hai bharam ya mausmoN ka hai asar.

Naseeb meiN mere nahii jo saath yaar kaa to kya.
Qubool sare gam mujhe khushi mile use agar.

Tumhare dam se haiN sanam chaman me ye bahar bhii.
Ki Tumko dhooNdhti rahe uthe jahaaN meri nazar.

Duaa ye rab se ki bahut tujhe bhula sake ye dil
Na jane kya vajah huyi dua meri hai be asar

Zara sa tham ja dil mere dhadak ke aise na dara..
saNwar to looN zara sa maiN vo aaye jane kis pahar.

Tujhe hee khojti rahi maiN aahtoN me har kahiiN.
Madhu milan ki aas meiN ek aur din gaya guzar.

sabhi ashar khoob rahe madhu jee bahut khoob
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Duaa ye rab se ki bahut tujhe bhula sake ye dil
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koshishein karna hamara kaam hai aur unka kamyab hona na hona upar wale ke hath me hai....to main bhi vahi karti hoon...koshish...ki kuch aisa likh sakoon jo aap jaise aala shayron ke dil se waaah nikal kar le aaye.....
shukriya...pasand karne ke liye.
dua kijiyega...kishishein yoon hee kamyab hoti rahein...

Khush rahiye...aate rahiye...


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hmm - 12th June 2015, 02:07 PM
Dear madhu ji,


KahiiN lage na dil mera nahiiN mujhe meri khabar.
Ye dil ka mere hai bharam ya mausmoN ka hai asar.

Yea khumari hai.. jo andar se aa rahi.. aur mausam eska saath de raha hai.. bahut khub...

Naseeb meiN mere nahii jo saath yaar kaa to kya.
Qubool sare gam mujhe khushi mile use agar.

samarpan bahut hi khubsurati se bayan kiya gaya hai... behatarin..

Tumhare dam se haiN sanam chaman me ye bahar bhii.
Ki Tumko dhooNdhti rahe uthe jahaaN meri nazar.

tadap jo dil mein hain.. ek shermahat ke saath baahr aa rahi.. waah kya khub likha aapne..

Duaa ye rab se ki bahut tujhe bhula sake ye dil
Na jane kya vajah huyi dua meri hai be asar

duaao ka asar to hamesh hi rahata...

Zara sa tham ja dil mere dhadak ke aise na dara..
saNwar to looN zara sa maiN vo aaye jane kis pahar.

sringaar ki jhalak ko bakhubi bayaan kiya gaya...

Tujhe hee khojti rahi maiN aahtoN me har kahiiN.
Madhu milan ki aas meiN ek aur din gaya guzar.

pyaar me entjaar ka dard to bana rahata hai..


bahut achchha likha hai aapne ... badhaayi sweekar karein..

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12th June 2015, 02:52 PM
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KahiiN lage na dil mera nahiiN mujhe meri khabar.
Ye dil ka mere hai bharam ya mausmoN ka hai asar.

Naseeb meiN mere nahii jo saath yaar kaa to kya.
Qubool sare gam mujhe khushi mile use agar.

Tumhare dam se haiN sanam chaman me ye bahar bhii.
Ki Tumko dhooNdhti rahe uthe jahaaN meri nazar.

Duaa ye rab se ki bahut tujhe bhula sake ye dil
Na jane kya vajah huyi dua meri hai be asar

Zara sa tham ja dil mere dhadak ke aise na dara..
saNwar to looN zara sa maiN vo aaye jane kis pahar.

Tujhe hee khojti rahi maiN aahtoN me har kahiiN.
Madhu milan ki aas meiN ek aur din gaya guzar.
Madhu Bala ji........behad khoobsurat ehsaas...2nd wala sher muje bahuttttt khaas lga.


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12th June 2015, 04:04 PM
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KahiiN lage na dil mera nahiiN mujhe meri khabar.
Ye dil ka mere hai bharam ya mausmoN ka hai asar.

Naseeb meiN mere nahii jo saath yaar kaa to kya.
Qubool sare gam mujhe khushi mile use agar.

Tumhare dam se haiN sanam chaman me ye bahar bhii.
Ki Tumko dhooNdhti rahe uthe jahaaN meri nazar.

Duaa ye rab se ki bahut tujhe bhula sake ye dil
Na jane kya vajah huyi dua meri hai be asar

Zara sa tham ja dil mere dhadak ke aise na dara..
saNwar to looN zara sa maiN vo aaye jane kis pahar.

Tujhe hee khojti rahi maiN aahtoN me har kahiiN.
Madhu milan ki aas meiN ek aur din gaya guzar.
khoobsuat peshkash madhu saahibaa....... daaad ka nazraaana quboool farmaaiye........

Naseeb meiN mere nahii jo saath yaar kaa to kya.
Qubool sare gam mujhe khushi mile use agar.

sacchaa pyaar nazar aa raha hai is sher me...... khoob..

Tumhare dam se haiN sanam chaman me ye bahar bhii.
Ki Tumko dhooNdhti rahe uthe jahaaN meri nazar.


phoolon ssa naazuq sher huaa hai...... waahhhhh

Duaa ye rab se ki bahut tujhe bhula sake ye dil
Na jane kya vajah huyi dua meri hai be asar

tadap, dard, soz, sisikiyaan, majbooii bebasee na jaane kya kkyaa nazar aa raha hai is sher me... likhte hue haanth kaamp gaye honge ise........ waaahhhh is sher ko haasile ghazal kahun to ghalat na hogaaa....... bahut khoob.....


Tujhe hee khojti rahi maiN aahtoN me har kahiiN.
Madhu milan ki aas meiN ek aur din gaya guzar.

kyaa baat hai intezaaar ka isse behatra chitran nahi ho sakta tha is ghazal me..... bahut acchaa likhti hain aap.... merii dua ahaike aap isse bhi acha likhtii rahen.... khush rahen...

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KahiiN lage na dil mera nahiiN mujhe meri khabar.
Ye dil ka mere hai bharam ya mausmoN ka hai asar.

Naseeb meiN mere nahii jo saath yaar kaa to kya.
Qubool sare gam mujhe khushi mile use agar.

Tumhare dam se haiN sanam chaman me ye bahar bhii.
Ki Tumko dhooNdhti rahe uthe jahaaN meri nazar.

Duaa ye rab se ki bahut tujhe bhula sake ye dil
Na jane kya vajah huyi dua meri hai be asar

Zara sa tham ja dil mere dhadak ke aise na dara..
saNwar to looN zara sa maiN vo aaye jane kis pahar.

Tujhe hee khojti rahi maiN aahtoN me har kahiiN.
Madhu milan ki aas meiN ek aur din gaya guzar.
Madhu ji waaaaaaah waaaaaah waaaaaaaah,
Abhi do hi minute hue aapki ek gazal ki tareef me likha ki aapka har kalam pehle se behtar hota hai aur ab ye gazal padhi.....kya likhoon samaz nahi aa raha......behad khobsurat gazal hui....ehsaasoN ki baat karen to ufff nikal jaye aur andaz e bayan aahen bharne ko mazboor kar raha hai....

Bohot bohot bohot umdah.....waaaaah...lakhoon daad

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Madhu ji bahut achche ...

pyar meiN qurabani ka jazba bakhoobi nibhaya aapne.Pls dont mind ye kalam apke standard ke hisab se 8 out 10 grade karoonga ...per overall ehsaas pasand aye mujhe ..yuN hi likhte raho, humein aapke kalamon ko parne ka intezar rahega.

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Yunhi likhte rahiYeGaa
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Dear madhu ji,


KahiiN lage na dil mera nahiiN mujhe meri khabar.
Ye dil ka mere hai bharam ya mausmoN ka hai asar.

Yea khumari hai.. jo andar se aa rahi.. aur mausam eska saath de raha hai.. bahut khub...

Naseeb meiN mere nahii jo saath yaar kaa to kya.
Qubool sare gam mujhe khushi mile use agar.

samarpan bahut hi khubsurati se bayan kiya gaya hai... behatarin..

Tumhare dam se haiN sanam chaman me ye bahar bhii.
Ki Tumko dhooNdhti rahe uthe jahaaN meri nazar.

tadap jo dil mein hain.. ek shermahat ke saath baahr aa rahi.. waah kya khub likha aapne..

Duaa ye rab se ki bahut tujhe bhula sake ye dil
Na jane kya vajah huyi dua meri hai be asar

duaao ka asar to hamesh hi rahata...

Zara sa tham ja dil mere dhadak ke aise na dara..
saNwar to looN zara sa maiN vo aaye jane kis pahar.

sringaar ki jhalak ko bakhubi bayaan kiya gaya...

Tujhe hee khojti rahi maiN aahtoN me har kahiiN.
Madhu milan ki aas meiN ek aur din gaya guzar.

pyaar me entjaar ka dard to bana rahata hai..


bahut achchha likha hai aapne ... badhaayi sweekar karein..

Akant...
akant ji namaskaar...bahot khushi huyi aapko yahaan dekhkar...aapnr itna vaqt dekar meri ghazal ko padha aur mahsoos kiya..uske liye bahot abhari hoon aapki...
aate rahiye...
khush rahiye...


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17th July 2015, 10:18 AM
Hasb-e-muaamuul, bohot achha kalaam huaa hai mohtrama.
Dili daad qubuul farmaayein iss behtareen kalaam keliye.

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17th July 2015, 11:51 AM
Ashaar MeN Kya Kya Ehsaas Nazm Hue HaiN

WaaH ! Bahut UmdaaH Madhu Ji

Zabardast Ghazal Huii ... Mubaaraqbaad !!!



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Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ...

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Madhu Bala ji........behad khoobsurat ehsaas...2nd wala sher muje bahuttttt khaas lga.
Bahut shukriya di......
Achcha laga ki vo sher aapka dil chhoo saka....

Khush rahein...
Aati rahein.....


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khoobsuat peshkash madhu saahibaa....... daaad ka nazraaana quboool farmaaiye........

Naseeb meiN mere nahii jo saath yaar kaa to kya.
Qubool sare gam mujhe khushi mile use agar.

sacchaa pyaar nazar aa raha hai is sher me...... khoob..

Tumhare dam se haiN sanam chaman me ye bahar bhii.
Ki Tumko dhooNdhti rahe uthe jahaaN meri nazar.


phoolon ssa naazuq sher huaa hai...... waahhhhh

Duaa ye rab se ki bahut tujhe bhula sake ye dil
Na jane kya vajah huyi dua meri hai be asar

tadap, dard, soz, sisikiyaan, majbooii bebasee na jaane kya kkyaa nazar aa raha hai is sher me... likhte hue haanth kaamp gaye honge ise........ waaahhhh is sher ko haasile ghazal kahun to ghalat na hogaaa....... bahut khoob.....


Tujhe hee khojti rahi maiN aahtoN me har kahiiN.
Madhu milan ki aas meiN ek aur din gaya guzar.

kyaa baat hai intezaaar ka isse behatra chitran nahi ho sakta tha is ghazal me..... bahut acchaa likhti hain aap.... merii dua ahaike aap isse bhi acha likhtii rahen.... khush rahen...

shaad......
adaab janaab......

Ghazal to pasand karne ka dil se shukriya aapka...bahut sukoon hasil hota hai jab...likhi huyi baat padhne wale ke dil tak pahunche aur vo uske ehsaas mahsoos kar sake...
...aur aapka jawaab padhkar dil ko vahi sukoon aur khushi mili...aur aage likhne ka hausla bhi.....

Aapki ray ki hamesha talabgaar rahoongi....

Aate rahiye...
Salamat rahiye....


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Madhu ji waaaaaaah waaaaaah waaaaaaaah,
Abhi do hi minute hue aapki ek gazal ki tareef me likha ki aapka har kalam pehle se behtar hota hai aur ab ye gazal padhi.....kya likhoon samaz nahi aa raha......behad khobsurat gazal hui....ehsaasoN ki baat karen to ufff nikal jaye aur andaz e bayan aahen bharne ko mazboor kar raha hai....

Bohot bohot bohot umdah.....waaaaah...lakhoon daad

Aapka apna
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Bhushan sahab...
Aapne khaak alfaaz ki is kadar tareef ki hai samajh nahi aa raha kya kahoon.....bas dua hai aap hamesha khush rahein..

Aur sath banaye rakhiyega...kafi dino se aapka koi naya kalaam nahi padhne mila....ummeed hai jald tashreef layenge aap...

Apna khayaal rakhein...
Madhu.


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Very beautiful...bahot achcha likha dear
Kahiin sapna to nahi hai........sach me tum ho naz...thank u dear...yahaan aane ke liye mujhe padhne ke liye...

Thank u so much ...aage bhi intzaar rahega...

Takecare..
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bahut ahcha likha hai madhu ji, ye dil ka hai mere bharam ya mausamoN ka asar, bahut ahche....
bahut shukriya taish sahab.......
aage bhi sath dete rahiyega...

apna khayaal rakhein....

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Dili daad qubuul farmaayein iss behtareen kalaam keliye.
Aapki shukraguzar hoon ki vaqt nikaal kar mujhe padha aur
Pasand kiya....

Aage bhi apni rai dete rahiyega...

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WaaH ! Bahut UmdaaH Madhu Ji

Zabardast Ghazal Huii ... Mubaaraqbaad !!!
Aapka bahut shukriya naresh ji....
Ehsason ko tawajjo aur ghazal ko pasand kiya aapne khushi huyi...

Asheerwad banaye rakhiyega..

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Madhu ji

Khoobsoorat ahsaas ki khoobsoorat adaaygi hai aapki ye ghazal. Aise hi likhti rahiyr, behatar aur behtar...

Tujhe hee khojti rahi maiN aahtoN me har kahiiN.
Madhu milan ki aas meiN ek aur din gaya guzar.

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Madhu ji

Khoobsoorat ahsaas ki khoobsoorat adaaygi hai aapki ye ghazal. Aise hi likhti rahiyr, behatar aur behtar...

Tujhe hee khojti rahi maiN aahtoN me har kahiiN.
Madhu milan ki aas meiN ek aur din gaya guzar.

Khaaksaar
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namaskaar praveen ji..

aap ko bazm me dekhkar main vaise hee khush ho jati hun..aur kalaam kisi layak laga aapko..ye jankar bahut achcha laga...

aap yun hee hausla badhate rahiyega..koshish jari rahegi..

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