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mila vo bhi nahi.n karte,mila hum bhi nahi.n karte... -
26th December 2009, 04:16 PM
Dosto.n,
ek lambe antaraal ke baad chan.d lamhey mile to bus yun hi kuch ehsaas alfaazo.n ki shakl lete chale gaye... aap sabse in ehsaaso.n ko share karna chahuNgi,koi gustakhi ho to maaf kariyega aur ghazal me.n koi kami nazar aaye to bhi jarur bataiyega.. Gaur Farmaiyega: Mila vo nahi.n karte, Mila hum nahi.n karte, Gila hum nahi.n karte, Gila vo nahi.n karte... Raah-e-zindgi me.n ahmiyat kis qadar hai unki, zikr hum nahi.n karte,daga vo nahi.n karte.... Khuda rooth na jana kahi.n...mila dena unse, Guzarish hum nahi.n karte,sifarish vo nahi.n karte... Bharosa khud se jyada,pyar zamane se jyada, Shaq hum nahi.n karte,fikr vo nahi karte... Kya hua jo najaro.n se door hain bahut, Roya hum nahi.n karte,shikva vo nahi.n karte... Cha.nd mulaqaate.n aur umra bhar ke sath ka vada?? pucha hum nahi.n karte,dhokha vo nahi.n karte... aapki dost... ritu Life smiles at you when you are happy.. But, Life salutes you when you make others happy!!" # Feel The Difference # |
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26th December 2009, 06:13 PM
Wow....................Perfect compatibility
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26th December 2009, 07:05 PM
Ritu Ji...Namaste ! arse baad aapki nayi rachna se milkar aur padhkar bahut acha laga...aur khushi bhi hui....aapka khayal bahut umda laga mujhe...sabhi ashaar dil ko chhu jaane wale rahe....pyar ke ehsaason ko aapne bahut khubsurti se buna hai.....superB creation....yuhi likhte rahiye....  YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ... Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ... ---Naresh Mehra---- |
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26th December 2009, 09:36 PM
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ritu jee bahut sundar ehsaas hai gazal me anand aa gaya pad kar aise hi likhte rahiye tumhaara ajnabi dost Aapka Apna Ishk 'इश्क' के बदले इश्क चाहना तिजारत है इज़हार किससे करें महबूब तो दिल में है email: rkm179@gmail.com 
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27th December 2009, 03:17 PM
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 Life smiles at you when you are happy.. But, Life salutes you when you make others happy!!" # Feel The Difference # |
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27th December 2009, 03:22 PM
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God Bless you. aapki Dost ritu Life smiles at you when you are happy.. But, Life salutes you when you make others happy!!" # Feel The Difference # |
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27th December 2009, 03:32 PM
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aapke liye arj kiya hai, Gaur kijiyega; Ajnabi hi ban jate hain dost pakkey, Bus thoda tum chalo,thoda hum.. bahut bahut shukriya humari ghazal me.n aanand DhuNdhne ke liye.. khush rahiye God Bless you aur haan,dost ajnabi nahi hote.. aapki dost ritu Life smiles at you when you are happy.. But, Life salutes you when you make others happy!!" # Feel The Difference # |
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27th December 2009, 05:47 PM
ritu jii....aadaab....
ehsaas bahut khoobsurat lage i's ghazal ke....aur unki byaani bhi umda....achha laga padh kar....dil se daad haazir hai....qubuul farmaayeN..... Khush raheN.....muskurati raheN.... aapka dost, vikram... Uss Rizk Se Tau Maut Bhali Jis Rizk Se Aatee Ho Tere Parwaaz MeiN Kotaahi.... vikramjethi@gmail.com |
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28th December 2009, 09:16 AM
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radhe radhe kya kahen aapne bahut umda tareeke se hamaari daad kubul ki fir bhi do shabd jahan me aayen kah dete hain "ham to khade hain rahe intzaar me ajnabi bankar koi aaye aur thaam le haath dost bankar" ritu jee hamne ajnabi isliye kaha ki ham aap sabki tarah shayar nahi hai par shauk hai isko padne ham to uske premi hai inhi shabdon me dhoondte hai ham uske sang apne rishte ek gustaakhi aur karne ki izaazat dijiye hamne aapki is nazm me do shabd change kiye unhe dekhiyega hai to gustaakhi par ham apne ko rok nahi paaye umeed hai aap hamaari is khata ko maaf karengi मिला वो नहीं करते, मिला हम नहीं करते, गिला हम नहीं करते, गिला वो नहीं करते... राह-ऐ-ज़िन्दगी में अहमियत किस क़दर है उनकी, जिकर हम नहीं करते, पूछा वो नहीं करते.... खुदा रूठ ना जाना कहीं...मिला देना उनसे, गुज़ारिश हम नहीं करते, सिफारिश वो नहीं करते... भरोसा खुद से ज्यादा, प्यार ज़माने से ज्यादा, दगा हम नहीं करते, शक वो नहीं करते... क्या हुआ जो नज़रों से दूर हैं बहुत, शिकवा हम नहीं करते, रोया वो नहीं करते... चंद मुलाकातें और उमर भर के साथ का वादा?? पूछा हम नहीं करते, बताया वो नहीं करते... aapka ajnabi dost Aapka Apna Ishk 'इश्क' के बदले इश्क चाहना तिजारत है इज़हार किससे करें महबूब तो दिल में है email: rkm179@gmail.com
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28th December 2009, 02:58 PM
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bahut bahut shukriya vikram jee, aapki daad sar aankho.n par.. yun hi sath dete rahiyega.. aapki dost ritu Life smiles at you when you are happy.. But, Life salutes you when you make others happy!!" # Feel The Difference # |
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28th December 2009, 03:59 PM
Ritu jee Aadaab.........
Wah Wah Wah............................................... . Bus ho gaya tarif nahi kar sakta bahut jyada achcha laga, soch ka aur bayani ka andaaz simple sa hia but ekdum nirala laga......... Keep writting......... Keep posting......... Keep smiling.......... 
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28th December 2009, 04:39 PM
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रोया हम नहीं करते, शिकवा वो नहीं करते... yeh ek premika ke ehsaas hain,aur lafz aapas me.n badal dene se yeh ek premi ke ehsaas ho jate hain. apna apna najariya hai... aksar aisa hi hota hai ke premi shikva karte hain aur premika ro kar apni duriyo.n ka ehsaas karti hain..jaha.n tak main samajhti hu,mera najariya isi soch ke aas pass raha aur isiliye maine aisa likha tha... apni baat jarur kahiyega,ho sakta hai ek nayi soch ka janm ho jaye. khush rahiye aapki dost ritu Life smiles at you when you are happy.. But, Life salutes you when you make others happy!!" # Feel The Difference # |
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28th December 2009, 04:41 PM
Ritu Jii,,
A very beautiful creation.... Good work.. Keep the spirit up,, Regardz,, tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di! kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN... ("Asad") |
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28th December 2009, 04:41 PM
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Bahut acha laga aapka reply paDh kar. yun hi sath dete rahiyega.. tah-e-dil se shukriya.. God Bless you aapki dost Ritu Life smiles at you when you are happy.. But, Life salutes you when you make others happy!!" # Feel The Difference # |
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28th December 2009, 04:43 PM
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yun hi sath dete rahiye, us uper wale ne chaha to yun hi kalam chalti rahegi.. Ek baar fir Shukriya.. aapki Dost Ritu Life smiles at you when you are happy.. But, Life salutes you when you make others happy!!" # Feel The Difference # |
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28th December 2009, 08:01 PM
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wahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh........... Ritu... kaha ho dear??...long time ... bahut khoob as usual..... ehsaas bahut umdaa hai...dil me utar gaye....yuhi aate raho aur mehfil ki raunak badhate raho... khush raho...... rep+++++++++++++++++++++  "LAMHA"mujhko acchaa nahiiN lagtaa ko’ii hamnaam teraa , ko’ii tujhsaa ho to phir naam bhii tujhsaa rakhe.... |
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28th December 2009, 10:18 PM
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radhe radhe baat aapki sahi hai nazariya hi apna hota hai jis nazar se dekho man me vaisa hi bhav paida hota hai meri nazar me prem ke andar dhoka daga bewafai aur shikva ye shabd hai hi nahi mere pyaar me to sirf apne premi se pyaar karna hai uski achhaiyon se bhi uski burayion se bhi vo jaisa hai acceptable hai aur ye bhi jaroori nahi ki vo bhi hame pyaar karta hai bas itna hi kaafi hai ki ham use pyaar karte hai aur vo jaise khush hai usme hi ham khush hai hamaara pyaar me yahi nazaria hai hamne is nazam teen jagah change ki thi aapka dhyan ek tarf hi gaya hai chhoti changes hai sirf pyaar ke nazariye se ho sakta hai ham galat ho koi jaroori nahi ki ham sahi ho par jo hamaara nazaria hai vo hamne kaha hai vo changes is prakaar hain aapne likha Raah-e-zindgi me.n ahmiyat kis qadar hai unki, zikr hum nahi.n karte,daga vo nahi.n karte.... hamne likha राह-ऐ-ज़िन्दगी में अहमियत किस क़दर है उनकी, जिकर हम नहीं करते, पूछा वो नहीं करते.... aapne likha Cha.nd mulaqaate.n aur umra bhar ke sath ka vada?? pucha hum nahi.n karte,dhokha vo nahi.n karte... hamne likha चंद मुलाकातें और उमर भर के साथ का वादा?? पूछा हम नहीं करते, बताया वो नहीं करते... aapne likha Bharosa khud se jyada,pyar zamane se jyada, Shaq hum nahi.n karte,fikr vo nahi karte... hamne likha भरोसा खुद से ज्यादा, प्यार ज़माने से ज्यादा, दगा हम नहीं करते, शक वो नहीं करते... hamaara prem me nazaria hai ki shikva ham kabhi nahi karenge aur unke liye nazarai ye hai ki vo hamaare liye kabhi aansu na bahaayen bas isi nazariye ko rakhte hue hamne lika hai ye sab aapki rai hamaare liye mahtavpoorn hai bataiyega hamaare nazariye me kya kami hai isi intzaar me aapka ajnabi dost Aapka Apna Ishk 'इश्क' के बदले इश्क चाहना तिजारत है इज़हार किससे करें महबूब तो दिल में है email: rkm179@gmail.com
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28th December 2009, 10:21 PM
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radhe radhe baat aapki sahi hai nazariya hi apna hota hai jis nazar se dekho man me vaisa hi bhav paida hota hai meri nazar me prem ke andar dhoka daga bewafai aur shikva ye shabd hai hi nahi mere pyaar me to sirf apne premi se pyaar karna hai uski achhaiyon se bhi uski burayion se bhi vo jaisa hai acceptable hai aur ye bhi jaroori nahi ki vo bhi hame pyaar karta hai bas itna hi kaafi hai ki ham use pyaar karte hai aur vo jaise khush hai usme hi ham khush hai hamaara pyaar me yahi nazaria hai hamne is nazam teen jagah change ki thi aapka dhyan ek tarf hi gaya hai chhoti changes hai sirf pyaar ke nazariye se ho sakta hai ham galat ho koi jaroori nahi ki ham sahi ho par jo hamaara nazaria hai vo hamne kaha hai vo changes is prakaar hain aapne likha Raah-e-zindgi me.n ahmiyat kis qadar hai unki, zikr hum nahi.n karte,daga vo nahi.n karte.... hamne likha राह-ऐ-ज़िन्दगी में अहमियत किस क़दर है उनकी, जिकर हम नहीं करते, पूछा वो नहीं करते.... aapne likha Cha.nd mulaqaate.n aur umra bhar ke sath ka vada?? pucha hum nahi.n karte,dhokha vo nahi.n karte... hamne likha चंद मुलाकातें और उमर भर के साथ का वादा?? पूछा हम नहीं करते, बताया वो नहीं करते... aapne likha Bharosa khud se jyada,pyar zamane se jyada, Shaq hum nahi.n karte,fikr vo nahi karte... hamne likha भरोसा खुद से ज्यादा, प्यार ज़माने से ज्यादा, दगा हम नहीं करते, शक वो नहीं करते... hamaara prem me nazaria hai ki shikva ham kabhi nahi karenge aur unke liye nazarai ye hai ki vo hamaare liye kabhi aansu na bahaayen bas isi nazariye ko rakhte hue hamne lika hai ye sab aapki rai hamaare liye mahtavpoorn hai bataiyega hamaare nazariye me kya kami hai isi intzaar me aapka ajnabi dost Aapka Apna Ishk 'इश्क' के बदले इश्क चाहना तिजारत है इज़हार किससे करें महबूब तो दिल में है email: rkm179@gmail.com
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2nd January 2010, 02:01 PM
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thanks a lot dear.......................... God Bless You aapki dost ritu Life smiles at you when you are happy.. But, Life salutes you when you make others happy!!" # Feel The Difference # |
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hi Lamha dear, kaisi ho? thanks a lot.. tumhara reply dekh kar sach me.n bahut khushi hui... khush raho aur haan,Happy New year dear God Bless you. tumhari dost ritu Life smiles at you when you are happy.. But, Life salutes you when you make others happy!!" # Feel The Difference # |
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