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Aye Khuda.... - 4th October 2008, 09:19 PM
Raaston ki thokaron ko meri talaash hogi...
Apni kashti bhi ek roz sar-e-bazaar hogi......
Humein khud se door hi rakh e-khuda...........
..........varna teri hasti bhi taar-taar hogi!!!!!!!

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Raaston ki thokaron ko meri talaash hogi...
Apni kashti bhi ek roz sar-e-bazaar hogi......
Humein khud se door hi rakh e-khuda...........
..........varna teri hasti bhi taar-taar hogi!!!!!!!
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4th October 2008, 10:54 PM
chand lafzo.n mein dil ki baat............bahut khoob ritu jee

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sunita jee... - 5th October 2008, 10:28 PM
thanks alot.
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kripya jee na lagaya karein,ritu kaha karein(apna lagta hai).

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4th November 2008, 01:13 PM
nice sher ritujee.....................

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22nd November 2008, 06:37 PM
Ek aur shikayat us khuda se. . . . . .

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Gir kar sambhalna chahe to diwane kehlaate hain. . .

Jab jab bhatakna chaha pyar ki talaash me.n ,
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22nd November 2008, 08:16 PM
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Raaston ki thokaron ko meri talaash hogi...
Apni kashti bhi ek roz sar-e-bazaar hogi......
Humein khud se door hi rakh e-khuda...........
..........varna teri hasti bhi taar-taar hogi!!!!!!!
bahut khoob - wah waah karne ko jee chahta hai.......

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22nd November 2008, 10:10 PM
Bahut bahut shukriya dilip ji aur noor shaikh ji. . . . . .
Yun hi aap sabke beech kuch na kuch pesh karti rahu.n dua kijiyega.

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Raaston ki thokaron ko meri talaash hogi...
Apni kashti bhi ek roz sar-e-bazaar hogi......
Humein khud se door hi rakh e-khuda...........
..........varna teri hasti bhi taar-taar hogi!!!!!!!
waaah Ritu ji bahoot khoob......Achhi peshkash hai aapki....is ashar meiN aapne apne dil ko kho ker kutchh aisa kehne ki koshish kii hai ke apne wazood ko hi doondti raheiN haiN.......bahoot khoob kaha hai...lekin dost aakhiri line maiN kutchh miss sa lagta hai....woh line poori beh'r me nahiN jaaa pa rahi...agar aap aisa ker leiN toh!!!!!!!!!!!


Raaston ki thokaron ko meri talaash hogi...
Apni kashti bhi ek roz sar-e-bazaar hogi......
Humein khud se door hi rakh e-khuda...........
varna teri hasti bhi yuN hi taar-taar hogi!!!!!!!


Meri janib se is dil paziir ashar per daad qubool kareiN dost


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24th November 2008, 09:45 AM
Shukriya harash ji. . .
Nayi parindo.n ko udhne me.n waqt to lagta hai. . . .
Hamari shayri me.n sudhaar karne ke liye shukriya. .
Aapki daad to hamesha kubool ki jayegi. . .
Ek baar fir shukriya janaab!!

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