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Question Tabaahi aur leh - 7th August 2010, 11:50 AM

LEH ME TABAAHI



TV par dekh rahe the suhaane mousam ka haal,

Is season me kafi sailani aenge, bola ram dyal,
Bola ram dyal ,amdan hogi achhi,
Peele honge haath , sasural jaegi bachhi,
Ram dyal leh me chhoti si dukan chalata tha,
Gareebi ki chinta me jaag ke raat bitata tha.

Baadal kadke bijli chamki ho gaya barish ka aagaz,
Chalta jeewan ikdam thahra Kaisa kudrat ka andaaj,
Kudrat ka andaaj , Aadmi samajh na paya,
Ik pal hansi khushi thi dooje pal mout ki chhaya,
Fat gaye badal ho gaya jal thal,kaisi aai tabahi,
Path ujad gae , Rath ukhad gae , bichhude path ke rahi.

Aya ek zalzala , aur the maut ne pankh pasare,
Ujde ashyane bebas log gae hai'n maare,
Log gae hain mare, kaisi berahmi hai alla,
Beech raah me bathi budhia jhhad ke apna palla,
Jhaarh ke baithi palla uska bacha na koi,
Itni berami na kar Malik, bachhi yateem hai roi.


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7th August 2010, 12:30 PM

Parveen jee,
Hats Off to the beautiful creation !!!!
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7th August 2010, 01:15 PM

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LEH ME TABAAHI



TV par dekh rahe the suhaane mousam ka haal,

Is season me kafi sailani aenge, bola ram dyal,
Bola ram dyal ,amdan hogi achhi,
Peele honge haath , sasural jaegi bachhi,
Ram dyal leh me chhoti si dukan chalata tha,
Gareebi ki chinta me jaag ke raat bitata tha.

Baadal kadke bijli chamki ho gaya barish ka aagaz,
Chalta jeewan ikdam thahra Kaisa kudrat ka andaaj,
Kudrat ka andaaj , Aadmi samajh na paya,
Ik pal hansi khushi thi dooje pal mout ki chhaya,
Fat gaye badal ho gaya jal thal,kaisi aai tabahi,
Path ujad gae , Rath ukhad gae , bichhude path ke rahi.

Aya ek zalzala , aur the maut ne pankh pasare,
Ujde ashyane bebas log gae hai'n maare,
Log gae hain mare, kaisi berahmi hai alla,
Beech raah me bathi budhia jhhad ke apna palla,
Jhaarh ke baithi palla uska bacha na koi,
Itni berami na kar Malik, bachhi yateem hai roi.
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7th August 2010, 06:29 PM

thanks rashmi ji bahut bahut shukria


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7th August 2010, 07:24 PM

aise topic pe kuch kehna theek nahi hai .. jaisa bhi hai dukh may hai .. mujhe bhi yakeen hai aapko bhi meri wah wahi sunne main koi maza nah aayega ... kuch kar sakte hai to madad ka hath badhayeN .. aur kya kahun ...

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7th August 2010, 07:40 PM

kunal bhai , apki baat bilkul theek hai . maine is ko likhte hue jo darad mahsoos kia hai aur uska varnan mai nahi karna chahta.Hum apni organization ke jarie bhi is silsile me zameeni kaam kar rahe hai.n.Lekin Aap un logo'n ke darad ko bhi mahsoos kar rahe honge aur darad ka bya'n karne ka bhi kai dafa housla nahi'n hota. Aap bhi agar hamari aapki apni organization ke jarie is area me hamaare saath jake kaam karna chaahe'n to please mujhe phone keejiega.Mujhe yakeen hai ki aap hamare saath jaroor chalenge.
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7th August 2010, 07:51 PM

I totally agree with Kunaal sahab,

Ya aap unke liye dawa kijiye ya dua'a, per kam se kam is tarah aysi topics per shayri mat kijiye...


Koi dard me dooba hai, aur hum unke haalaat ko topic banaker likh rahe ho ya wah wah kar rahe ho, theek nahi lagta..


Komal sahab, aap accha likhte haiN, per jo topics aap chunte haiN unper shayri ya poetry theek nahi lagti,aap newspaper ya magzines me columns likhiye, ...In problems ko vistaar me likhiye aur saath me upaay bhi...


plz dont mind....per aapki threads per wah wah karna bohat ajeeb lagta hai...aagey aapki marzi...




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7th August 2010, 09:39 PM

Itne dukhad haadse par shayri aur kavita kisi bhi leehaaz se theek nahi hai....sirf help ke liye aage aana hi sahi hai....jaisa kunal ji aur zainy ji ne kaha...main unki baat se sehmat hoon.....

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7th August 2010, 10:04 PM

kunaal ji , zainy ji,naresh ji, aapki baat bilkul theek hai, mujhe is baat pe tassali hai ki meri kavita ki vazah se aap me aise ahsaas jaage. kavita to ek parerna sarot hoti hai, aur ye kam baat nahi ki aap ke man me mai madad ke ahsaas jaga saka. Hum leh me madad samagri pahle se hi bhijwa rahe hai, mai aap se apeel karta hoon ki aap bhi mere is paryas me arthik madad karne ke lie lehhelp@humanrightsp3.com pe sampark kare'n. Trasdi me fase peedit logo'n ke lie awaz uthane me sahyog karne ke lie apka shukria.


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Mere adeeb dosto, Aap bahut zyada zaheen hai. apse mujhe ummeed hai ki aap khule dil se kaam lete hue ye mahsoos karenge ki aksar aisi badkismat ghatnao'n ko lekar kavya (poetry) aur samajh vichhar (comprehension verdict) dono me likha jata hai. Ye sochna bilkul galat hai ki kavita sirf waah waah lootne ke lie likhi jati hai. Agar aisa hota to kweta ke dukhaant aur kargil ki ghatnao'n ya shaheedo'n ki shahadat par to kavita bilkul na likhi jati. Aap jara fursat me shayri.com pe dekhiega bahut sare jane mane shayro'n ne dardnaak ghatnao'n par aisi dil ko chhoo lene wali kavitae'n likhi hai'n jinka sankalan mere paas hai. Aur shayri koi school ka Home work nahi ki hidayat de kar ya topic chun kar kar nirdharit waqat me karvaya jae. Ye khuda ki nyamat hai aur alla ke aadesh se shayraana amad kisi bhi topic par kabhi bhi ho sakti hai.Agar aap meri baat se sahmat nahi'n to please mujhe do chaar fix topic de deejie. mai'n us pe hi likh kar sabar kar lunga. Ye ek social networking site hai jaha'n nirantar aur nirankush vichaar parwaah ki zaroorat hai, Agar aap har shahar me aise muddo'n par shayri.com ki taraf se mushayre karwae'n to mai har tarah ka yogdaan dene ke lie tayaar hoon. Umeed hai mere in vichaaro'n ko sahjta se lenge.

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8th August 2010, 12:00 AM

mahashay praveen saahab..

aapko kisi ne bhi roka nahi hai ki na hi aap pe koi bhi kisi bhi tarah ki rok hai .. aur maine aur mere saathiyoN ne jo kuch bhi kaha hai wo bas ek salaah ki tarah tha ... aur jaisa ki aapne kaha bohatoN ne bohat kuch likha hai aur aapke paas ek sankalan bhi hai.. to main aapki kisi baat ko nahi nakaarta .. par mere hisaab se ab soch badal rahi hai .. phir bhi kisi ke shaheed pe salaami dene ki bajay uski maut pe shauk manaaya jaye mere sir ke uper ki baat hai .. aur traasadi jhelne waaloN ki madad ke liye yahan kuch nahi likha gaya tha .. bas ek dukh bhari gaatha thi .. jis par mujhse wah wahi na ki gayi .... haaN mujhe behad afsos hai ki ye sab hua ... aap seedhe madad ka pryaas karte to shaayad alag baat hoti ..

baaki rahi sahayata ki baat .. to khul ke kehna chahuNga ki meri haisiyat nahi hai in dinoN kuch bhi.. aur hoti bhi to main uske dhol peetne ki bajaaye chupke se kar deta ... jaisa ki beete waqt main bohat baar kar chuka huN main .. uska bhi jikra karna yahan theek na hoga .. phir bhi maiN aapke nyote ka swagat karta huN aur avashya sochunga ki main antatah kya kar sakta huN...

aur aap kuch bhi likheN aapki marji hai .. subject kuch bhi bana leN .. Zakhm ya dawa.. ye aapki marzi hai .. par aap zakhm ko vishay banayeNge to sach maaniye.. bohat logoN ke dil main aise hi tees uthegi ...

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thanks Kunaal bhai.Bhagwan ji aapka bhala kare'n.


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Parveen Komal Saheb aadab ,

Wah kya khoob nazm kahi hai ,, daur ke bade se bade shaura ne halat-e-hazran ka dard o karb khalam bandh kiya hai ..yae ik khuda dad salahiyath hoti hai jo sub ko hasil nahi ....Apne shayad ghaur farmaya hoga jub Iraq me qatl o garatgari zor o shor pe thi to mushairo.N ka mauza bus wohi eak shaher howa karta tha ... Manglore Plance crash ko dusre hi din professor barelwi ki nazm amal aai ..aur kai shaura ne bhi us hadse ko qalam bandh kiya tha .. allah hi apko iska ajar de sakta hai ..aisi darjano misaal hain jahan aise mauzo pe bade sebade shaura na qalam chalai hai ....allah apke jazbe ko hamesha qayam o dayam rakhe aur apko mazeed tariqqiyun se nawaze .. allah hadse se jujte afrad ko apni aaman me rakhe aur unhe salamat rakhe ..



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mahashay praveen saahab..

aapko kisi ne bhi roka nahi hai ki na hi aap pe koi bhi kisi bhi tarah ki rok hai .. aur maine aur mere saathiyoN ne jo kuch bhi kaha hai wo bas ek salaah ki tarah tha ... aur jaisa ki aapne kaha bohatoN ne bohat kuch likha hai aur aapke paas ek sankalan bhi hai.. to main aapki kisi baat ko nahi nakaarta .. par mere hisaab se ab soch badal rahi hai .. phir bhi kisi ke shaheed pe salaami dene ki bajay uski maut pe shauk manaaya jaye mere sir ke uper ki baat hai .. aur traasadi jhelne waaloN ki madad ke liye yahan kuch nahi likha gaya tha .. bas ek dukh bhari gaatha thi .. jis par mujhse wah wahi na ki gayi .... haaN mujhe behad afsos hai ki ye sab hua ... aap seedhe madad ka pryaas karte to shaayad alag baat hoti ..

baaki rahi sahayata ki baat .. to khul ke kehna chahuNga ki meri haisiyat nahi hai in dinoN kuch bhi.. aur hoti bhi to main uske dhol peetne ki bajaaye chupke se kar deta ... jaisa ki beete waqt main bohat baar kar chuka huN main .. uska bhi jikra karna yahan theek na hoga .. phir bhi maiN aapke nyote ka swagat karta huN aur avashya sochunga ki main antatah kya kar sakta huN...

aur aap kuch bhi likheN aapki marji hai .. subject kuch bhi bana leN .. Zakhm ya dawa.. ye aapki marzi hai .. par aap zakhm ko vishay banayeNge to sach maaniye.. bohat logoN ke dil main aise hi tees uthegi ...

Kunaal

janab e mann kunaal saheb aadab o tasleemat ,
Mizaj shareef huzoor ke ?

Mere Aziz mai apke tabsire ko samjhne se qaasir raha hon ,ye meri haqir fikr o kam ilmi ka hi sabab ho sakta hai ,, kya hi acha hoga agar app hazrat koi aisi thos dalil de den jahan dard naak mauzo pe shayari ko ayeb bataya gaya hai .. taake apki rahenumai me hum jaise naumoz ki bhi islaah ho jaye .. aur phir khalam chalane se parhez kiya jaye .. chunke ye dekha gaya hai ke bade se bade shaura ne aise darjano hadso.N pe apni jasaraten pesh ki hain jo ke qabil-e-qadr maani gaa'i .. magar jub ap jaise sukhan fahm o fatin shaura ne iterazz dikhaya hai to zaoor koi thos wajhe rahi hogi .. to bare maherbani ap chaspa kar de to hamari bhi islaah ho jaye ..umid hai meri koi baath apke zahn-e-nazuk ko garan na guzri hogi ..chunke aisi guftago se ilm badta hai na ke kissi ki dil shikani hoti hai ....allah apko hamesha khush rakhe ..Agar dalil dena khatir e baar hai to taherir hazaf kar len hazam hona mushkil hai .. chunke saheba nazm ke hausle pastt karne jaise hain ..

dua go o khair andesh

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8th August 2010, 04:40 PM

Shukria qadeer bhai , aapne is dard ke ahsaas ko samjha . ye aapke zaheen hone ka pukhta saboot hai. Allah apko aur bhi jyada rahamdili se nawaze


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Parveen Komal Saheb aadab ,

Wah kya khoob nazm kahi hai ,, daur ke bade se bade shaura ne halat-e-hazran ka dard o karb khalam bandh kiya hai ..yae ik khuda dad salahiyath hoti hai jo sub ko hasil nahi ....Apne shayad ghaur farmaya hoga jub Iraq me qatl o garatgari zor o shor pe thi to mushairo.N ka mauza bus wohi eak shaher howa karta tha ... Manglore Plance crash ko dusre hi din professor barelwi ki nazm amal aai ..aur kai shaura ne bhi us hadse ko qalam bandh kiya tha .. allah hi apko iska ajar de sakta hai ..aisi darjano misaal hain jahan aise mauzo pe bade sebade shaura na qalam chalai hai ....allah apke jazbe ko hamesha qayam o dayam rakhe aur apko mazeed tariqqiyun se nawaze .. allah hadse se jujte afrad ko apni aaman me rakhe aur unhe salamat rakhe ..



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Shukria qadeer bhai ,

Aapne is dard ke ahsaas ko samjha . ye aapke zaheen hone ka pukhta saboot hai. Allah apko aur bhi jyada rahamdili se nawaze.

Apki baat ekdam sahi hai janaab, darasal sdc pe shayri-e-dard forum na hoti to shayad dard ka ehsaas bhi na paida hota .

Agar sirf romantic shayri hi likhne ka kayda kanoon hota to hum sirf neembu ke ped ke neeche aam choos rahi mahbooba ki zulfo'n ke bikhrne nikharne sanwarne pe hi keyboard ko nachaane me masroof hote aur aalmi dard zahalat ke andhere kone me siskta rahta.

Aur jara in Azeem Shayro'n ke ashaaro'n pe nazar farmaie jinho'n ne iraq me hui dadagiri ke mudde pe khul ke kalam rawa'n ki .

Udaan walo udaano pe waqath bhari hai
Paro'n ki abke nahi'n houslo'n ki baari hai
Koi bata de ye guroor-e-beja ko
Vo jang maine ladi hi nahi jo haari hai.

-Proffesor Vaseem Bareli saheb-

Jangal jangal khoo'n ka alam
Shahro'n me veerani hai
Fir bhi mere mustaqbil ki har tasveer suhaani hai,

Gulshan ke nanhe se parinde , par se pahle aankhe'n khol,
gulshan ki har ek shaakh pe baitha koi shikaari hai.

-Zanaab khursheed haidar saheb-

In Do almi shoura ne iraq ke pasmanzar me khyalo'n ko qalam band kia hai aur bainul aqwami touer pe izzat hasil kee aur logo'n ne bahut pasand farmaya aur inki jassarate'n kabil-e-qadar maani gaii.

is hi tarha karbla aur baabri mudde pe bhi darzno shoura ne tba azmai ki hai.

Muafinama : Agar yaha'n kisi ki marzi ke mutabik hi shayri karne ka usool hai to mai manta hoon ki mujhse ye galti sarzad hui. Is baar maaf kar'n . Age se Arbab-e-Mahfil ke mutabik hi shayri karunga.

Apka Parveen Komal


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Parveen jee,
Hats Off to the beautiful creation !!!!
Regards
thanks ritu ji .


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