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इतना कहर था बादलों का उजड़ी बस्तियां - 27th August 2015, 12:23 PM
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गाफिल, तू मुझको ये बता किस-किस पे नज़र है,
चलना मगर, इस राह की, मुश्किल ये डगर है |

इंसान की तहजीब पर दौलत का है दखल ,
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27th August 2015, 12:31 PM
Namaskaar harash ji.....
Shayad pahli baar hee mujhe aapka koi kalaam padhne ki khshnaseebi hasil huyi hai.....
Nihayatee khoob kalaam....daad qubool kijiyega meri janib se.....

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27th August 2015, 02:21 PM
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Aaj bohut dino baad aapne isstaraf rukh kiya. Bohut khushi hui aapko yaha dekh kar.

Kya khoob ghazal hai bilkul vartaman paristhitiyon par kataaksh karti hui.

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Smile welcome back - 27th August 2015, 02:58 PM
Harash ji,
aapka sdc par aik baar dubara suwagat hai behad accha lag rha hai aapko sdc par phir se dekh kar.

aapki gazal ke sabhi ashiyaar hame behad pasand aaye...aapke likhne ka andaaz bahut accha hai.

likhte rhiye aur aate rha kijiye sdc par...taaki nye members bhi aapko pad sakeN.

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27th August 2015, 07:08 PM
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Namaskaar harash ji.....
Shayad pahli baar hee mujhe aapka koi kalaam padhne ki khshnaseebi hasil huyi hai.....
Nihayatee khoob kalaam....daad qubool kijiyega meri janib se.....

Duaon ke sath..
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Madhu ji namaskaar !! bohat mamnoon hooN aap ki is zarrah nawazi per. Aapki Gazal KI pasandadgi Ne Mera Hounsle Ko Badhaya Hai -- is Hounsila Afzaayii Ka Bahut bahut ShukriyaaH !!!

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Aaj bohut dino baad aapne isstaraf rukh kiya. Bohut khushi hui aapko yaha dekh kar.

Kya khoob ghazal hai bilkul vartaman paristhitiyon par kataaksh karti hui.

Bohut achi lagi.

Yunhi aate rahiye taaki humein aapse seekhne ka avsar prapt hota rahe.
Sarika ji aadaab !! aapkii is himmat_afzaaii ke liye maiN aapka dil se shukr_guzaar hooN.....aapko meraa pesh_karda inteKhaab pasaNd aaya hai to yuN samajhiye ki merii meHnat vasool ho gayii..... thoda bahut jo kah lete haiN wahi kalam i raah aa jaata hai...kuch khaas bhi nahiN likha karte apna intekhaab aap sab ke saath saaNjha kartaa ....aapke in khoob_soorat alfaaz ke liye ek baar phir se shukriyaa .....duago
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aapka sdc par aik baar dubara suwagat hai behad accha lag rha hai aapko sdc par phir se dekh kar.

aapki gazal ke sabhi ashiyaar hame behad pasand aaye...aapke likhne ka andaaz bahut accha hai.

likhte rhiye aur aate rha kijiye sdc par...taaki nye members bhi aapko pad sakeN.

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गाफिल, तू मुझको ये बता किस-किस पे नज़र है,
चलना मगर, इस राह की, मुश्किल ये डगर है |

इंसान की तहजीब पर दौलत का है दखल ,
पर भूलता है मुक्तसिर उसका ये सफ़र है |

किस-किस करम से जूझता है आदमी यहाँ,
अब क्या किये, ज़ुल्मो सितम, खुद को भी खबर है |

इतना कहर था बादलों का उजड़ी बस्तियां,
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जिनके लिए हंसती रही जो आँखें उम्र भर,
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Gaafil, tu mujhko ye bataa kis-kis pe nazar hai,
Chalna, magar, Is raah ki, Mushquil ye dagar hai.

Insaan ki tahzeeb par doulat ka hai dakhal,
Par bhoolta hai muktsar uska ye safar hai.

Kis-kis karam se joojhta hai aadmi yahaaN,
Ab kya kiye, zulmo sitam, khud ko bhi khabar hai.

Itna kahar tha baadloN ka ujdii bastiyaN,
Toota, lage barsaat ka jitna bhi sabar hai.

Jinke liye hansti rahiN aankheN umra bhar,
Chhoda hai, aisa gam wahaN ab tak wo asar hai.

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waahhhhh kyaa baat hai Harash bhaiyaa...... khoob se khoob sher pesh kiye hain aapne..... behad haseen pru lutf aur laajawaab kalaam huaa hai aapki kalam se is baar....

merii daad aur mubaarakbaad qubool karen aur hame aage aur bhi haseen kalaam padhne ke mauqe dete rahen.... shukriyaa

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28th August 2015, 10:51 AM
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waahhhhh kyaa baat hai Harash bhaiyaa...... khoob se khoob sher pesh kiye hain aapne..... behad haseen pru lutf aur laajawaab kalaam huaa hai aapki kalam se is baar....

merii daad aur mubaarakbaad qubool karen aur hame aage aur bhi haseen kalaam padhne ke mauqe dete rahen.... shukriyaa

Shaad.....
Shaad ji aapki muhabbatoN ke liye tah-e-dil se mashkoor-o-mamnoon hooN....KhyaaloN ko sametne ki koshish bhar hai ....lekin sach kahuN aapki pasandagi mere khyaaloN ko roushan kar gayii jiske liye maiN beintaha aabhaari hooN....Umeed karta huN aap yuN hi mere chhote chhote ahsaasoN par dastakh dete raheNge.....Shukriyaa !

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Sunita ji namaskaar Gazal aapko pasaNd aayi to yaqiin jaaniye merii meHnat vasool ho gayii.........nazar-e-inaayat ke liye mamnoon hooN....Sunitaa ji aap bulaayeiN to ham naa aayeiN ...aisi Gustaakhi kaise kar sakte haiN.....masroofiat itni hai ki kisi bhi Forum par jaanaa nahiN hota.. .....aap ne hamare muktsar se khayalaat ko apna qeemti waqt diya iske liye tahe dil se shkriyaa ............... sabhaar


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