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Sad Life's Blues - 27th February 2004, 06:40 PM

Hi friends,
First of all I apologize for not being in touch for sooo long....I had some problems and was trying to sort out the entangled life. Though I have been quite successful in the process but still Life seems to be Blue.....

The sky is huge, The sky s large,
The sky is full with moon & stars.
The sky has the sun, and all the sunshine.
But still it's BLUE, with everything so divine.

The ocean is deep, and the ocean is vast,
The ocean is full with whales and sharks.
The ocean has beaches and beautiful shore,
But still it's BLUE, with everything beautiful to the core.

My smile is so good, I laugh so well,
I make people feel light, with jokes I tell,
But the truth lies hidden deep in my heart,
I'm BLUE and people think I'm jolly from the start.

You make me smile, You make me cry,
U leave footprints, When you walk by,
But still there's something, And that is true,
My life is blue, When I'm without you.

The ink I used to write this letter,
Was used many a times, to scribble things far better.
It writes the pain in hearts, hidden from view,
But guess what? Even this ink is BLUE.


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27th February 2004, 06:52 PM

Wow...That was reall really Amazing....

Tamanna ji..I never got a chance to read ur writings before but after reading what u wrote this time,I think I missed a literaryand poetic fortune..

Whatever u hane written is worth all the praises..

Keep it up..


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Thumbs up Bahut khoobsoorat.. - 28th February 2004, 11:36 AM

Kuchh OoNchaai bhi jaroori hai
Kuchh gehraai bhi jaroori hai,
Ye mehfileiN, rangeeniyaaN khoobsoorat haiN beshak
Is dil ke sukooN ko lekin, Kuchh tanhaai bhi jaroori hai.

Kon jaane, wo shaks jo itna muskuraata hai
Kon sa dard hai uska, jo wo sabse chupaata hai,
Gar har dard parh paane me hum itne kaabil hote
Beshaq hamare jo apne haiN wo yooN tanha na rote.

welcome back tamana... bahut khoobsoorat likha hai aapne.


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Anjaam sochkar, aksar khaamosh hi reh jaate haiN.

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28th February 2004, 04:38 PM

Bahot bahot shukriya Parwana ji.....aapki hausla-afzai ke liye...
it was really gr8 to have your replies so soon...
Thanks Chaand...
It was very wonderful to receive your replies..

Savreen


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3rd March 2004, 04:02 PM

Thank payal ji,
Nice to have a reply from you.
Thanks for your appreciation again.


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hello - 3rd March 2004, 04:25 PM

Tamana dear,

Very nice...the deepness of ur thought reaches at the bottom of sea..Thanks for a lovely poem shared with us.


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21st March 2004, 03:45 PM

Thanks Akant...
It's always necessary to have some positive reinforcement to continue with whatever we do....

It feels very nice to have someone appreciate your feeling
Thanks Again....


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