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mera aaina - 7th July 2004, 09:13 AM

mere aaine,
raat bhar yaadon ke safar ne ghere rakha muje
raat bhar tumhari dosti ne fir jina sikhaya hai muje.....

kahte hai ke.... aaina dhundhla ho jaata hai to tasweer saaf nazar nahi aati... isi liye aaine ko chamka ke rakhna padta hai.....
mere sathh kuchh alag huaa hai ......


jahaa jahaa jina bhul gayi maie..
wahaa wahaa, jina sikhaya hai.
maie kuchh dhundhli si ho gayi thhi
'mere aaine' ne muje chamkaya hai.




[kahne ko to poorani hai yah yaade par mere or mere dost k liye har saans maie base hai yah lamhe...jo humne ek doosre ke liye mahesoos kiye thhae.]

Ek din achanak tum meri zindgi maie aaye
Tab to tumhe pahchanti bhi n thhi..
Par jaise tumhe mili....
Aisa laga jaise aainae k saamne khadi hu.
Tumhari har baat muje apni baat lagne lagi
Kya huaa gar tumse ab tak koi rishta n thha
Mere dil se puchho, to jaanogae k tum mere kya ho.
Tumhare ahesaas dil ko hamesha chhu jaate hai
Ab to maine tay kar liya hai...
Tumhare sathh hi chalna hai
Kya ho gar raah par chalte
Tum na muskuraao, parwa nahi
Tumhari aankh maie mera dard muskurata hai
Kya ho gar sathh chalte tum
Ajnabi hi bane raho, parwa nahi
Tumhara har kadam ...
Mere liyae rasta banaata hai
Kya ho gar tumhare sathh chalte
Apna wajood kho baithhu
Tum na pahechano, parwa nahi
Tumhare saaye maie, maine khud ko paaya hai .


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app kitne pyare hoo... anjane ban kar bhi humare hoo
mein apko chaa kar bhi apna bana nai sakta....

agar paa liay too khoo bhi nai sakta..
app ke akhon mein kabhi asson dekh bhi nai sakta

kabhi maa bankar too kabhi ..didi ban kar.
meri har rah pe sath chale hoo app mere ek dost ban kar

kabhi gira too sambhla mujhe... kabhi rooya too hasaya mujhe
pata nai kya rishta hai mera app se..per ajj app jaan se bhi pyare hoo mujhe..

meri har raah ke kaa.nte.. apne sametne chahe..
per hum bhi ..apni raah pe.. khud hi chalte aaye.

kaise kahu apse .. ke mere sath na chalo
aapko mein .. rotae hue dekhh bhi nai sakta

mujeh mout ka khof nai bus.. aapke..pass aane se darta hun..
agar mar jau too mein bina kafan jaal sakta.. hun...
per inn akhon mien assun nai dekh sakta hun.


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7th July 2004, 10:52 AM

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Kahaan dekhne milte hain aise rishte??

Ek wo rishte hote hain.. khoon ke rishte... jo janam se kehne ko apne hote hain.. lekin aksar dekha hai unhe bagaanoN se bhi begaana. Aur phir hote hain ye rishte.. dil ke rishte.. jo kismat hume de jaati hai.. zindagi ki raah par chalte hue.. koi apna na hote hue, humaari nafs ka, humaare wajood ka, humaare jeevan ka, ek hissa ban jaata hai.. hum unke aks ban jaate hain.. aur wo humaari chhavi. Aur ye rishte hoe hain, jo kabhi nahi tooTte.. amar hote hain ye.

Tumhaara, aur tuhaare is dost ka roshta baRa gehra hai.. bohat pyaara hai.. behad sachcha.. aur bilkul saaf... Tumhe ye rishta bohat bohat mubaarak ho!

Yunhi likhti rehna.. aur muskuraati rehna.. apne liye nahi.. to apne aaine ke liye..


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7th July 2004, 11:23 AM

meena tumhare in khoobusraat khayalaat ko parh ker is baat ki hamen kitni khushi huee tum andaaza naheen ker saktin ke ham apne aap ko bohat khush qismat tassuwwur kerte hain ke tum hamari bhi dost hai.
aur aise khoobsuraat ehsaasaat aur khooburat khayalaat rakhen waali shakhsiyat ka dost hona mere liye to kyaa is forum ke sab saathiyon ke liye qaabil e fakhr hai.
duaa go hoon God tumhare is khaloos aur zor e qalam ko aur ziayad kare.
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7th July 2004, 01:23 PM

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Meena...

Kahaan dekhne milte hain aise rishte??

Ek wo rishte hote hain.. khoon ke rishte... jo janam se kehne ko apne hote hain.. lekin aksar dekha hai unhe bagaanoN se bhi begaana. Aur phir hote hain ye rishte.. dil ke rishte.. jo kismat hume de jaati hai.. zindagi ki raah par chalte hue.. koi apna na hote hue, humaari nafs ka, humaare wajood ka, humaare jeevan ka, ek hissa ban jaata hai.. hum unke aks ban jaate hain.. aur wo humaari chhavi. Aur ye rishte hoe hain, jo kabhi nahi tooTte.. amar hote hain ye.

Tumhaara, aur tuhaare is dost ka roshta baRa gehra hai.. bohat pyaara hai.. behad sachcha.. aur bilkul saaf... Tumhe ye rishta bohat bohat mubaarak ho!

Yunhi likhti rehna.. aur muskuraati rehna.. apne liye nahi.. to apne aaine ke liye..
priy banno,

haan sahi kaha .... aksar aise rishte milna nahi hota... or yaha bhi tumhare sathh maie sahemat hu k.... khoon ke rishto ka bhi kaha koi maaina rah paata hai.... aaj kal jahaan dekho... har roz har pal... rishton ke khoon hote nazar aa rahe hai....
or aise maie ek aisa rishta aa milta hai.... jo honto ki mushkaan ban jaata hai... jine ka vajood ban jaata hai.. jin ke hone se hi rishton ka maaina bana raha hai... aisa sathhi... aisa dost... jis rishte maie.. kisne kis ke liye kya kiya... kitna kiya yah maaina hi nahi.... bas... ek doosre k sathh bina koi sawaal kiye chal padna hai... mahesoos karana hai k aap akele nahi ho... aapka saaya ya aapki tanhaai akeli nahi hai.. har jagah jaha aapka vajood hai woh har jagah par maujood rahta hai woh dost...
lol kuchh jyada hi kah gayi.... par nahi.. is rishte k liye jitna kaho kam hi hai.
muje khushi is baat ki or bhi hui k tum is rachna par aaj bhi mere sathh ho or oos wakt bhi sathh thhi jab yah rachna maine or mere aaine ne likhi thhi.

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meena tumhare in khoobusraat khayalaat ko parh ker is baat ki hamen kitni khushi huee tum andaaza naheen ker saktin ke ham apne aap ko bohat khush qismat tassuwwur kerte hain ke tum hamari bhi dost hai.
aur aise khoobsuraat ehsaasaat aur khooburat khayalaat rakhen waali shakhsiyat ka dost hona mere liye to kyaa is forum ke sab saathiyon ke liye qaabil e fakhr hai.
duaa go hoon God tumhare is khaloos aur zor e qalam ko aur ziayad kare.
wishing you all the best

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mere mushi dost,
khush to maie bhi hui aaj..... kyun ki aaj aapne yah farmaaya k maie aisa kuchh khushnuma pash karu or yaha maie yahi pash kar chuki thhi..... aapki baat rakh paayi yah dosti kya kam hai?
humesha aapki dosti k kaabil rah paau... yahi prathhna

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bahut khoob likha aapne
padhkar dil ko sahara mila
aap isi tarah likhte rahe aur
khuda aapko sada khush rakhe
kabhi aap ko lage ki aap gham me doobe hue ho to bas hume yaad kar lena bas itna yaad rakhe main hoon na
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khuda aapko sada khush rakhe
kabhi aap ko lage ki aap gham me doobe hue ho to bas hume yaad kar lena bas itna yaad rakhe main hoon na
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7th July 2004, 05:54 PM

Meena didi...

Bahut khoobsoorat khayaalaat haiN tumhaare aur mai mushraf bhaaii ke iss khayalaat se ittefaaq rakhtaa hooN ki aise khoobsuraat ehsaasaat aur khooburat khayalaat rakhen waali shakhsiyat ka dost hona mere liye to kyaa is forum ke sab saathiyon ke liye qaabil e fakhr hai...

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Thanx for everything.

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jara yah tumhari great ki rachna bhi padhhna fir reply karna... intzaar rahega... or haan....... is maie jo rachna hai.... 'aanshu nahi dekh sakta'... woh manish ki likhi hui hai. oose bhi padhhna.... mere pathhe ne mere liye kya likha hai.... samji?

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bahut khoob - 7th July 2004, 05:58 PM

Meena ji...hamesha ki hi taraah.....kuchh gehri baateiN....isi liye to ham aapke fan haiN....

Dil khush hua aapki rachna...bhavnaoN...or aapke dost ko parhkar....

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Bahut khoobsoorat khayaalaat haiN tumhaare aur mai mushraf bhaaii ke iss khayalaat se ittefaaq rakhtaa hooN ki aise khoobsuraat ehsaasaat aur khooburat khayalaat rakhen waali shakhsiyat ka dost hona mere liye to kyaa is forum ke sab saathiyon ke liye qaabil e fakhr hai...

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shukriaa.... mere khayalaat ko khobssrat samja.... in khayalao maie mere dost ke bhi mere liye khayal maujood hai... [ aanshu nahi dekh sakta] or mushi dost ne jo kaha oose tum bhi sahemat ho rahe ho.... kya kahu? ... itni prathhna karti hu... aap sab ke khayal ko samhaal saku.

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Meena ji...hamesha ki hi taraah.....kuchh gehri baateiN....isi liye to ham aapke fan haiN....

Dil khush hua aapki rachna...bhavnaoN...or aapke dost ko parhkar....

Aapka Chaand

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aaj ki meri or mere aaine ki rachna padhh kar tum khush huae...... to or kya chahiye?
tahe dil se shukriaa... adaa karti hu. hai to poorani rachna ... par kal raat inhi rachnaao ne muje sathh diya.... khud ko saaf nazar nahi dekh pa rahi thhi... mere aaine ne muje meri tasweer bataayi.... itni si baat thhi... socha fir wahi lamha aap sab ke sathh ji lu.

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aur ham is forum ke baasi apne aap ko khush qismat tassawwur kerte hain ke is forum mein meena jaisi hasti maujood hai.
bila shako shubha bohat hi dilkash aur khoobsurat , dil mein uter jaane wale in shahkaaron se tum ne hamare dil munawwer ker diye hain.
mein az had khaloos itna kahoon ga ke meena aap behad achcha likhti hain, isi tarah likhti rahen.
hamein aap ki taareef ke liye alfaaz dhoondne mein diqqat hoti hai, magar aap ko itna achcha likhne ki liye alfaaz ki kami naheen hai. mein jaanta hoon aur maanta hoon.

ejazat chahta hoon is apne pan ke saath ke please apna bohat khayal rakhen aur khush rahen.

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pyaar, mohabbat, khaloos, khud supurdgi, rishton ka taqaddus, dosti ki sachchayee, zindagi ki raanaayee, sab kuch meri dost aap ne apne in kalamon mein bayaan ker diya hai.
aur ham is forum ke baasi apne aap ko khush qismat tassawwur kerte hain ke is forum mein meena jaisi hasti maujood hai.
bila shako shubha bohat hi dilkash aur khoobsurat , dil mein uter jaane wale in shahkaaron se tum ne hamare dil munawwer ker diye hain.
mein az had khaloos itna kahoon ga ke meena aap behad achcha likhti hain, isi tarah likhti rahen.
hamein aap ki taareef ke liye alfaaz dhoondne mein diqqat hoti hai, magar aap ko itna achcha likhne ki liye alfaaz ki kami naheen hai. mein jaanta hoon aur maanta hoon.

ejazat chahta hoon is apne pan ke saath ke please apna bohat khayal rakhen aur khush rahen.

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aapki yah saari baate mere sar aankhon par...... jitna kahu kam hoga....
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Love Love you Didi!!! - 7th July 2004, 08:24 PM

Meena didi...

Itne pyaar se rishton ko samjhaaya hai aapne ki main kya kahun...

Aisa hi rishta hai mera bhi aapse...

Aap ho hi itne ache.. shaayad aadhe se jyada shayri parivaar ke sadasya meri tarah aapke paas apni mushkilon ka hal dhoondne ke liye aate honge...

'Aapke Aaine ne' (Main_aur_meri_tanhaai) ne bhi bahut hi pyari pyari lines likhi hain aapke liye...

Aapne jitna pyar hum sab ko diya hai shaayad uska chota sa bhi hissa agar aapko lauta paaongi to bahut acha lagega..

Didi, aap na mile hote to na jaane is zindagi ka kya hota..

Main Manish ji se bilkul sehmat hun... aapki aankhon mein aansoo nahi dekh sakte hum sab...

Aap hum sab ke dukh aur takleef ko uda ke le jaate ho, na jaane kahan.. pata nahi...

lekin jab bhi aapse baat karti hun.. humesha yeh ehsaas hota hai ki maano dil pe jitna bhi bhoj tha sab gaayab ho gaya... Aapse har woh choti badi baat share karna.. jo shaayd main sabse na kar paaon... aapka har baat pe mujhe samjhaana, mujhe pyar karna... kabhi bhi nahi bhool sakti....

Manish ji, ne to phir bhi ek koshish kar li, aapko yeh bataane ki aapse kitna pyar hai....

Lekin aap mere liye kya ho, yeh shaayad shabdon mein likh paana mere liye mumkin nahi hoga...

Lekin haan.. itna keh sakti hun...

Didi aapke bina ab mera jeena mumkin nahi hoga!

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Re: Love you Didi!!! - 7th July 2004, 10:01 PM

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Meena didi...

Itne pyaar se rishton ko samjhaaya hai aapne ki main kya kahun...

Aisa hi rishta hai mera bhi aapse...

Aap ho hi itne ache.. shaayad aadhe se jyada shayri parivaar ke sadasya meri tarah aapke paas apni mushkilon ka hal dhoondne ke liye aate honge...

'Aapke Aaine ne' (Main_aur_meri_tanhaai) ne bhi bahut hi pyari pyari lines likhi hain aapke liye...

Aapne jitna pyar hum sab ko diya hai shaayad uska chota sa bhi hissa agar aapko lauta paaongi to bahut acha lagega..

Didi, aap na mile hote to na jaane is zindagi ka kya hota..

Main Manish ji se bilkul sehmat hun... aapki aankhon mein aansoo nahi dekh sakte hum sab...

Aap hum sab ke dukh aur takleef ko uda ke le jaate ho, na jaane kahan.. pata nahi...

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Manish ji, ne to phir bhi ek koshish kar li, aapko yeh bataane ki aapse kitna pyar hai....

Lekin aap mere liye kya ho, yeh shaayad shabdon mein likh paana mere liye mumkin nahi hoga...

Lekin haan.. itna keh sakti hun...

Didi aapke bina ab mera jeena mumkin nahi hoga!

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Meena jee....

Tum na pahechano, parwa nahi
Tumhare saaye maie, maine khud ko paaya hai .

aapke iss pur kashish kalaam ne
zaar zaar meri ankhon ko rulaya hai...

hum kaise kisi se milte hain unhein apna bana lete hain...kaise wo jaan se bhi pyaare lagne lagte hain...

Apke aaine ne jo ant mein likha wo bhi hridya ko chuu gaya...

mujeh mout ka khof nai bus.. aapke..pass aane se darta hun..
agar mar jau too mein bina kafan jaal sakta.. hun...
per inn akhon mien assun nai dekh sakta hun.

bus sab kuch keh diya hai manish ne aapse...inhi chand lines mein...

bhagwaan aap dono kee dosti aur pyaar banaye rakhein...

paras


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Meena jee....

Tum na pahechano, parwa nahi
Tumhare saaye maie, maine khud ko paaya hai .

aapke iss pur kashish kalaam ne
zaar zaar meri ankhon ko rulaya hai...

hum kaise kisi se milte hain unhein apna bana lete hain...kaise wo jaan se bhi pyaare lagne lagte hain...

Apke aaine ne jo ant mein likha wo bhi hridya ko chuu gaya...

mujeh mout ka khof nai bus.. aapke..pass aane se darta hun..
agar mar jau too mein bina kafan jaal sakta.. hun...
per inn akhon mien assun nai dekh sakta hun.

bus sab kuch keh diya hai manish ne aapse...inhi chand lines mein...

bhagwaan aap dono kee dosti aur pyaar banaye rakhein...

paras

meri paras,


agar mar jau too mein bina kafan jaal sakta.. hun...
per inn akhon mien assun nai dekh sakta hun.

haan.... mere aaine ne yah jo bat kahi hai.... iske baare maie maie kuchh nahi kah sakti hu... yaha jubaan ki had poori hoti hai or dil ki jubaan bhi kam padti hai..... mahesoos bhi karo to yunh lagta hai k... sagar chhalak raha hai...... aashmaan ko chhu raha hai.....
bhagwaan kare... mera aaina humesha chamakta rahe...
paras.... khush raho. bahot shukriaa..... mere jajbaaton ko samajne ka.....

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wah kya baat hai?????????keep it up


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wah kya baat hai?????????keep it up

mita,

ty yaar. par yaha mere ahesaas mere aaine se mahek oothe hai.
is liye bhagwaan ki bhi aabhari hu.

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hi - 8th July 2004, 04:26 PM

hello meena ji
apki is dil ko choo lene wali rachna ko parha,,aur maini s baat se bilkul sehmat hoon,,ki is duniya meyin jaroori nahi ki rishton ka koi naam ho,,kuch rishtey dil se shuru hoker dil per hi khatm ho jatey hain,,bina naam ke,,,!!!!khoon ke rishton ko hum naam detey hain,, per jalim dhokha de jateyin hain,,per dil ke rishtey,,sabse jyada majboot aur sacchey hotey hain,,bina swarth ke,,bus ek doosrey ko khush aur unnat dekhne ke,,jo saya banker hamarey her dukh aur sukh me sath kahrey rehtey hain,,,,
bahut hi pyari aur gehri,,,,
thx,,for sharing ur views,,with us,,,


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hello meena ji
apki is dil ko choo lene wali rachna ko parha,,aur maini s baat se bilkul sehmat hoon,,ki is duniya meyin jaroori nahi ki rishton ka koi naam ho,,kuch rishtey dil se shuru hoker dil per hi khatm ho jatey hain,,bina naam ke,,,!!!!khoon ke rishton ko hum naam detey hain,, per jalim dhokha de jateyin hain,,per dil ke rishtey,,sabse jyada majboot aur sacchey hotey hain,,bina swarth ke,,bus ek doosrey ko khush aur unnat dekhne ke,,jo saya banker hamarey her dukh aur sukh me sath kahrey rehtey hain,,,,
bahut hi pyari aur gehri,,,,
thx,,for sharing ur views,,with us,,,
swati,

mere khayal ko, mere ahesaas ko padhha, samja or sahemat bhi hui... tahe dil se tumhari aabhaari hu.
haan sach hi to hai... kuchh rishte aise hote hai jinka taalook naam se nahi chalta... dil se chalta hai... sathh se chalta hai. or maie bhaot hi khush naseeb hu jo muje aisa mera aaina mila hai.
ek baar fir shukria.
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Kamm shabdon mein aap kaafi kuch gayi hain. Accha laga hai bahut hee zuada.......aise hee likhtey rahiye


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Meena Ji

Kamm shabdon mein aap kaafi kuch gayi hain. Accha laga hai bahut hee zuada.......aise hee likhtey rahiye

vipin dost,

aapne muje padhha... sabse pahlay yahi baat ka shukriaa kubul karna.
muje yaad hai aap ne meri rachna... 'sukh ki meri khoj' par reply diya thha... muje humesha yaad raha hai...

yaha mera likha aapko pasand aaya... oos k liye bhi shukria. haan... jo mahesoos kiya mere aaine se.. wahi likha hai... shayed sachhai hai tabhi sabhi ko yah ahesaas chhu gaye hai.

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Re: mera aaina - 8th July 2004, 11:01 PM

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mere aaine,
raat bhar yaadon ke safar ne ghere rakha muje
raat bhar tumhari dosti ne fir jina sikhaya hai muje.....

kahte hai ke.... aaina dhundhla ho jaata hai to tasweer saaf nazar nahi aati... isi liye aaine ko chamka ke rakhna padta hai.....
mere sathh kuchh alag huaa hai ......


jahaa jahaa jina bhul gayi maie..
wahaa wahaa, jina sikhaya hai.
maie kuchh dhundhli si ho gayi thhi
'mere aaine' ne muje chamkaya hai.




[kahne ko to poorani hai yah yaade par mere or mere dost k liye har saans maie base hai yah lamhe...jo humne ek doosre ke liye mahesoos kiye thhae.]

Ek din achanak tum meri zindgi maie aaye
Tab to tumhe pahchanti bhi n thhi..
Par jaise tumhe mili....
Aisa laga jaise aainae k saamne khadi hu.
Tumhari har baat muje apni baat lagne lagi
Kya huaa gar tumse ab tak koi rishta n thha
Mere dil se puchho, to jaanogae k tum mere kya ho.
Tumhare ahesaas dil ko hamesha chhu jaate hai
Ab to maine tay kar liya hai...
Tumhare sathh hi chalna hai
Kya ho gar raah par chalte
Tum na muskuraao, parwa nahi
Tumhari aankh maie mera dard muskurata hai
Kya ho gar sathh chalte tum
Ajnabi hi bane raho, parwa nahi
Tumhara har kadam ...
Mere liyae rasta banaata hai
Kya ho gar tumhare sathh chalte
Apna wajood kho baithhu
Tum na pahechano, parwa nahi
Tumhare saaye maie, maine khud ko paaya hai .


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app kitne pyare hoo... anjane ban kar bhi humare hoo
mein apko chaa kar bhi apna bana nai sakta....

agar paa liay too khoo bhi nai sakta..
app ke akhon mein kabhi asson dekh bhi nai sakta

kabhi maa bankar too kabhi ..didi ban kar.
meri har rah pe sath chale hoo app mere ek dost ban kar

kabhi gira too sambhla mujhe... kabhi rooya too hasaya mujhe
pata nai kya rishta hai mera app se..per ajj app jaan se bhi pyare hoo mujhe..

meri har raah ke kaa.nte.. apne sametne chahe..
per hum bhi ..apni raah pe.. khud hi chalte aaye.

kaise kahu apse .. ke mere sath na chalo
aapko mein .. rotae hue dekhh bhi nai sakta

mujeh mout ka khof nai bus.. aapke..pass aane se darta hun..
agar mar jau too mein bina kafan jaal sakta.. hun...
per inn akhon mien assun nai dekh sakta hun.


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Dear Meena, dilko chhoogaayi.......younhi likhte rahiyega. Salamat rahe Dosti aapki...Aaj aur kuch nahin kehsakoungi...shayad aap samajh paayengi...aaj jitne bhi post padhi hain, sabse jo dilko chhooya hain woh yehi hain.......dilka rishta hoti hi aisi hain ke keya aur kahoun...lafz sath nahin derahe hain...waise tou jo kehna tha woh sab aapki post mein hi shamil houi hain...Khush rahiye yehi Duwaon ke sath ijaazat chahoungi. Aapna khayal rakhiyega. God bless you.

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Re: Re: mera aaina - 9th July 2004, 11:49 PM

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Dear Meena, dilko chhoogaayi.......younhi likhte rahiyega. Salamat rahe Dosti aapki...Aaj aur kuch nahin kehsakoungi...shayad aap samajh paayengi...aaj jitne bhi post padhi hain, sabse jo dilko chhooya hain woh yehi hain.......dilka rishta hoti hi aisi hain ke keya aur kahoun...lafz sath nahin derahe hain...waise tou jo kehna tha woh sab aapki post mein hi shamil houi hain...Khush rahiye yehi Duwaon ke sath ijaazat chahoungi. Aapna khayal rakhiyega. God bless you.

Keep smilling.......
meri shimul,

meri dosti salamat rahe yah duwaa tum karo to kubul to honi hi hai....... tumhara bahottttttttt shukriaa.... tumne ise jis tarah saraha hai..... kitna bhi thanx kahu kam hoga....
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jahaa jahaa jina bhul gayi maie..
wahaa wahaa, jina sikhaya hai.
maie kuchh dhundhli si ho gayi thhi
'mere aaine' ne muje chamkaya hai.

Waah...Kya Khooba Dosti haai aapki

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Ek din achanak tum meri zindgi maie aaye
Tab to tumhe pahchanti bhi n thhi..
Par jaise tumhe mili....

Aisa laga jaise aainae k saamne khadi hu.
Tumhari har baat muje apni baat lagne lagi
Kya huaa gar tumse ab tak koi rishta n thha
Mere dil se puchho, to jaanogae k tum mere kya ho.

Tumhare ahesaas dil ko hamesha chhu jaate hai
Ab to maine tay kar liya hai...
Tumhare sathh hi chalna hai
Kya ho gar raah par chalte
Tum na muskuraao, parwa nahi

Tumhari aankh maie mera dard muskurata hai
Kya ho gar sathh chalte tum
Ajnabi hi bane raho, parwa nahi
Tumhara har kadam ...

Mere liyae rasta banaata hai
Kya ho gar tumhare sathh chalte
Apna wajood kho baithhu
Tum na pahechano, parwa nahi
Tumhare saaye maie, maine khud ko paaya hai .


Amazing Didi... Kitne komal, Kitne Sundar ehsaas hain.... Ek ek Shabd us rishte ki mazbooti ko darshata hua...Now this is called the Special Bond of Friendship... May this frndship always shines like this and blossoms with evry coming day
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app kitne pyare hoo... anjane ban kar bhi humare hoo
mein apko chaa kar bhi apna bana nai sakta....

agar paa liay too khoo bhi nai sakta..
app ke akhon mein kabhi asson dekh bhi nai sakta

Beeautifull.. and so touchin... bhai!!


kabhi maa bankar too kabhi ..didi ban kar.
meri har rah pe sath chale hoo app mere ek dost ban kar

kabhi gira too sambhla mujhe... kabhi rooya too hasaya mujhe
pata nai kya rishta hai mera app se..per ajj app jaan se bhi pyare hoo mujhe..

Yahan aisa laga jaise... Aapne mere bhi ehsaas apni kalam se likh diye.... Bahut hi khoobsurat...!!


meri har raah ke kaa.nte.. apne sametne chahe..
per hum bhi ..apni raah pe.. khud hi chalte aaye.

kaise kahu apse .. ke mere sath na chalo
aapko mein .. rotae hue dekhh bhi nai sakta

Bahut Hi Pyaare ehsaaas!!


mujeh mout ka khof nai bus.. aapke..pass aane se darta hun..
agar mar jau too mein bina kafan jaal sakta.. hun...
per inn akhon mien assun nai dekh sakta hun.



Dear Manna Bhai!

I can feel the love and respect u have for Didi in ur words...I simply loved it... Can feel the warmth and fragrance of this special bond here.... Kitna accha lga rahaa hai aap dono ke ehsaas padhkar... Aap Dono ke saaf dilon ka parichay ho gaya....

Aur kya kahoon... Ke bas Dil khush ho gaya hai yeh khoobsurat se ehsaas padhkar....

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Ek sher yaad aaya.. kahin padha thha....

Dooriyan bahut hian, par itna samjah lo,
Paas rhkar bhi koi rishta khas nahi hota,

Aap dil ke itna kareeb ho,
ke dooriyon ka ab ehsaas nahi hota....
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kya baat kahi hai aapne
dil ko choo gayi
humein bhi apne ek aise dost ki yaad dila gayi

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priy sonal,

yah ahesaas mere liye bhi bahut kimti hai........ tumhe chhu gaye .. muje khushi hui. tumhare dost aur tumhari dosti k liye shubhkamna......

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Ek sher yaad aaya.. kahin padha thha....

Dooriyan bahut hian, par itna samjah lo,
Paas rhkar bhi koi rishta khas nahi hota,

Aap dil ke itna kareeb ho,
ke dooriyon ka ab ehsaas nahi hota....
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mere pulkit,

aaj fir maan ne is lamhe par dastak di to aa gayi... dekha ke tumhe jawaab nahi diya hai...

Dooriyan bahut hian, par itna samjah lo,
Paas rhkar bhi koi rishta khas nahi hota,

Aap dil ke itna kareeb ho,
ke dooriyon ka ab ehsaas nahi hota....

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mere aaine,

tumhara yah likha har pal yaad raha hai khaas kar tab jab... aankh nam hoti hai...

app kitne pyare hoo... anjane ban kar bhi humare hoo
mein apko chaa kar bhi apna bana nai sakta....

agar paa liay too khoo bhi nai sakta..
app ke akhon mein kabhi asson dekh bhi nai sakta

kabhi maa bankar too kabhi ..didi ban kar.
meri har rah pe sath chale hoo app mere ek dost ban kar

kabhi gira too sambhla mujhe... kabhi rooya too hasaya mujhe
pata nai kya rishta hai mera app se..per ajj app jaan se bhi pyare hoo mujhe..

meri har raah ke kaa.nte.. apne sametne chahe..
per hum bhi ..apni raah pe.. khud hi chalte aaye.

kaise kahu apse .. ke mere sath na chalo
aapko mein .. rotae hue dekhh bhi nai sakta

mujeh mout ka khof nai bus.. aapke..pass aane se darta hun..
agar mar jau too mein bina kafan jaal sakta.. hun...
per inn akhon mien assun nai dekh sakta hun.


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Re: mera aaina - 3rd December 2005, 12:52 PM

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mere aaine,
raat bhar yaadon ke safar ne ghere rakha muje
raat bhar tumhari dosti ne fir jina sikhaya hai muje.....

kahte hai ke.... aaina dhundhla ho jaata hai to tasweer saaf nazar nahi aati... isi liye aaine ko chamka ke rakhna padta hai.....
mere sathh kuchh alag huaa hai ......


jahaa jahaa jina bhul gayi maie..
wahaa wahaa, jina sikhaya hai.
maie kuchh dhundhli si ho gayi thhi
'mere aaine' ne muje chamkaya hai.




[kahne ko to poorani hai yah yaade par mere or mere dost k liye har saans maie base hai yah lamhe...jo humne ek doosre ke liye mahesoos kiye thhae.]

Ek din achanak tum meri zindgi maie aaye
Tab to tumhe pahchanti bhi n thhi..
Par jaise tumhe mili....
Aisa laga jaise aainae k saamne khadi hu.
Tumhari har baat muje apni baat lagne lagi
Kya huaa gar tumse ab tak koi rishta n thha
Mere dil se puchho, to jaanogae k tum mere kya ho.
Tumhare ahesaas dil ko hamesha chhu jaate hai
Ab to maine tay kar liya hai...
Tumhare sathh hi chalna hai
Kya ho gar raah par chalte
Tum na muskuraao, parwa nahi
Tumhari aankh maie mera dard muskurata hai
Kya ho gar sathh chalte tum
Ajnabi hi bane raho, parwa nahi
Tumhara har kadam ...
Mere liyae rasta banaata hai
Kya ho gar tumhare sathh chalte
Apna wajood kho baithhu
Tum na pahechano, parwa nahi
Tumhare saaye maie, maine khud ko paaya hai .


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app kitne pyare hoo... anjane ban kar bhi humare hoo
mein apko chaa kar bhi apna bana nai sakta....

agar paa liay too khoo bhi nai sakta..
app ke akhon mein kabhi asson dekh bhi nai sakta

kabhi maa bankar too kabhi ..didi ban kar.
meri har rah pe sath chale hoo app mere ek dost ban kar

kabhi gira too sambhla mujhe... kabhi rooya too hasaya mujhe
pata nai kya rishta hai mera app se..per ajj app jaan se bhi pyare hoo mujhe..

meri har raah ke kaa.nte.. apne sametne chahe..
per hum bhi ..apni raah pe.. khud hi chalte aaye.

kaise kahu apse .. ke mere sath na chalo
aapko mein .. rotae hue dekhh bhi nai sakta

mujeh mout ka khof nai bus.. aapke..pass aane se darta hun..
agar mar jau too mein bina kafan jaal sakta.. hun...
per inn akhon mien assun nai dekh sakta hun.


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meena

Maa bas ye pyaar ehsaas dekh me samajh ke usame kho jaane ko dil kar raha hai.. aur kya kahoon? naseeb waalo ko itana pyaar milata hai.. aap aur bhaiya dono hi itane naseeb waale ho...

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jesa suna tha apki racchna us se bohat jada acchi lagi. muje acha laga ki mein thik jaga aayi hun.

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meena ji
jesa suna tha apki racchna us se bohat jada acchi lagi. muje acha laga ki mein thik jaga aayi hun.

Kaanch

priy kanchan,

tumhara is pariwaar mai swagat hai. yakinan is pariwaar k ujale mai tumhara naam maujood rahega..
ab baat meri rachna ki...

nahi jaanti k is rachna k liye tumne kya soona tha... tumhe pasand aayi yah jaan kar achha laga ... shukria.

swabhaavik hai ... is rachna mai mere or mere aaine ki .. hum dono ki bhavna mushkuraai hai... mere dil k to yah kareeb honi hi hai. bhagwaan se yahi prathna hai k humesha yah rishta samhaal paau.

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Re: Re: mera aaina - 9th December 2005, 10:11 PM

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Maa bas ye pyaar ehsaas dekh me samajh ke usame kho jaane ko dil kar raha hai.. aur kya kahoon? naseeb waalo ko itana pyaar milata hai.. aap aur bhaiya dono hi itane naseeb waale ho...

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meri priy garima,

bhagwaan se yahi prathna hai k is naseeb k humesha kaabil rah paau.

shukria bachaa.

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Re: mera aaina - 14th December 2005, 08:55 AM

jahaa jahaa jina bhul gayi maie..
wahaa wahaa, jina sikhaya hai.
maie kuchh dhundhli si ho gayi thhi
'mere aaine' ne muje chamkaya hai.

Meena di,

Bahut acha likha hai....
Aapke aaine se milkar bahut khushi hui...
Umeed hai sabki aaine se pehchaan ho...
aur ek aisa aaina har ek shaks ko mile...

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Re: Re: mera aaina - 14th December 2005, 09:10 AM

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jahaa jahaa jina bhul gayi maie..
wahaa wahaa, jina sikhaya hai.
maie kuchh dhundhli si ho gayi thhi
'mere aaine' ne muje chamkaya hai.

Meena di,

Bahut acha likha hai....
Aapke aaine se milkar bahut khushi hui...
Umeed hai sabki aaine se pehchaan ho...
aur ek aisa aaina har ek shaks ko mile...

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mere rohin,

mere jivan ki chamak mai bilkul mere aaine ka sath hai.. hum dono ka ek aisa rishta hai... jo humesha bina aahat k ... bina bulaawe k humesha ek doosre k sath chala hai..

bhagwaan ki aabhari hu is rishte k liye.

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mere aaine,
tumhari yaad .. tumhara sath ... aaj fir meri hi yah rachna ki yaad dila gaya.


meri bhigi palkae kuchh kahti hai tumhae
yakin hai samaj paaogae tum ooski jubaan
wada kiya thha kabhi sathh chalne ka
woh pal woh raah.. kuchh kahte hai tumhae
kadmo k nishaan jo hamesha sathh banae thhae
yakin hai, samaj paaogae tum oonki pahechaan
woh sathh hasna, geet gungunana, sharaarat karna
aur haste haste kabhi jo ghum chhu jaaye to....
FIKAR NOT kah kar muje apne galae laga lena
woh tumhare kandhae par thhare huae mere aanshu
yakin hai samaj paaogae tum oonka kampkapana
mera rota huaa dil kuchh kahta hai tumhe
yakin hai sathh le jaaogae muje ya wapas aa jaaogae tum.
yakin hai......... yakin hai........ yakin hai.......

or yah padh kar 'mere aaine' tumne kaha tha ... woh bhi yaad hai...


namastee... meena... ji..

jee...haaan... apka.. aaina.....

bahut khoob likha hai yar..apne.. iska.. wakai ko dil ko chu gaya .. ji... boole too yar..FIKAR NOT....everything is fine...


tumhare yah ' FIKAR NOT ' mere jine ke vajood mai barabar shaamil hai

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Meena Ji,
saadar pranaam

Issi tarah sach ko likhtey rahiye humesha, samay-samay per humey sach ka aabhaas hota rahega.


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