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Phir usi dard ne gher liya mujhe.. - 29th July 2004, 08:52 PM

Aaj Shayri likhne nahi aayi.. dil ka dard bayaan kar rahi hun.. Gaur farmaaiye...

Aaj phir usi dard ne gher liya mujhe..
Aaj phir Tanhaai ne gher liya mujhe..
Aaj phir dhadkan koi aur raag suna rahi hai..
Aaj phir kisi yaadon ne duba diya mujhe..

Dhadkan bhi ab to ruk ruk ke chalTi hai..
ThamTi hai, rukTi hai, ik baar phir chalTi hai..
Aaj phir uski baaTein yaad aa rahi hain..
Aaj phir uski raahein yaad aa rahi hain
Aaj phir usi dard ne gher liya mujhe...

Kal Tak to woh saaTh Tha, aaj kahan gum hai?
Kal Tak meri parchaayi Tha, aaj kahan gum hai?
Woh nahi shaayad khoi hui to main khud hun..
Jabse door huyi main usse, TooTi hui main khud hun..
Aaj phir usi dard ne gher liya mujhe....

Aaj phir aankhen nam ho gayi...
BaiThe baiThe Tanha ho gayi..
Kisi ki yaadon ke saaye ne is kadar gher liya mujhe..
Ki apne se hi main door ho gayi...
Aaj phir usi dard ne gher liya mujhe.......

Aaj phir usi dard ne gher liya mujhe..
Aaj phir Tanhaai ne gher liya mujhe..
Aaj phir dhadkan koi aur raag suna rahi hai..
Aaj phir kisi yaadon ne duba diya mujhe..
Aaj phir usi dard ne gher liya mujhe..............



"Dikha kar khawaab in aankhon ko, De gaye aansoon in mein Tum..
Kaise chalka doo yeh aansoon, In mein bhi To rehTe ho Tum.."

~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ Sirf Tanu Ki ChaahaT...... ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~

   
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29th July 2004, 10:05 PM

Priya bahut udaas lag rahi ho...

main samajh sakti hoon...ek aadh din baat na ho apni jaan se...ya email na aaye...tau bus tanhayyian bekaar ke sawaalon se gher leti hain...jee udas hota hai...kuch bhi karne ko man nahin hota...hai na? but natural...lekin dekhna jab baat ho jaayeigi tau tum hee milan ke raag alaapogi...

Chaandni tumhein gheregi phirse
Dharkan dhuk dhuk chalegi phirse
muskurahat labon pe khelegi phirse
chaahat unki bahon mein samayegi phirse

ab tau din ginti hogi naa...

beshumaar pyar ke saath

paras


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29th July 2004, 10:27 PM

Dhadkan bhi ab to ruk ruk ke chalTi hai..
ThamTi hai, rukTi hai, ik baar phir chalTi hai..
Aaj phir uski baaTein yaad aa rahi hain..
Aaj phir uski raahein yaad aa rahi hain
Aaj phir usi dard ne gher liya mujhe...

bhut dard laga priya pad ke.laga ki meri baatein mujhe koi kah gya hai.yuhi apna aur sabka dard likhte raho kam karte rahe .
sakhi


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शब्दों में पिरोना है , जिससे वो हमारी यादों में महकते रहे
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30th July 2004, 12:23 AM

Kal Tak to woh saaTh Tha, aaj kahan gum hai?
Kal Tak meri parchaayi Tha, aaj kahan gum hai?
Woh nahi shaayad khoi hui to main khud hun..
Jabse door huyi main usse, TooTi hui main khud hun..
Aaj phir usi dard ne gher liya mujhe....
..really writtan so nice...touching to heart..keep it up..
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31st July 2004, 12:55 AM

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Priya bahut udaas lag rahi ho...

Chaandni tumhein gheregi phirse
Dharkan dhuk dhuk chalegi phirse
muskurahat labon pe khelegi phirse
chaahat unki bahon mein samayegi phirse

ab tau din ginti hogi naa...
Paras ji,

Itni achi kismat kahan jo din ginne lagun... haan shaayd kuch dino mein pata chalega ki kitne din hai... phir dekhnege ginne hain... ya unhi ki mala pherni hai saara din...

Aapne bahut hi pyar bhara sher likha hai.. mujhe behad pasand aaya..

Is sab ke liye bahut bahut shukriya!

Khush rahiye!

~Priya



"Dikha kar khawaab in aankhon ko, De gaye aansoon in mein Tum..
Kaise chalka doo yeh aansoon, In mein bhi To rehTe ho Tum.."

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31st July 2004, 01:16 AM

Pyari Sakhi..

Is dard bhare dil ki baatein, to saara jahaan karta hai.. zaahir par sab nahi kar paate.. maine koshish ki aue dekhiye meri koshish aapke dil ka haal bhi suna gayi...

Yeh pyar hota hi kuch aisa hai..


Mahen ji,

Dil se nikli baatein dil ko aksar choo jati hain..

Khush rahiye!

Duaaon ke saath..

~Priya



"Dikha kar khawaab in aankhon ko, De gaye aansoon in mein Tum..
Kaise chalka doo yeh aansoon, In mein bhi To rehTe ho Tum.."

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31st July 2004, 10:15 AM



Dhadkan bhi ab to ruk ruk ke chalTi hai..
ThamTi hai, rukTi hai, ik baar phir chalTi hai..
Aaj phir uski baaTein yaad aa rahi hain..
Aaj phir uski raahein yaad aa rahi hain
Aaj phir usi dard ne gher liya mujhe...



Priya,

Very ncie words... Though the whole post is really good.. The lines above were really touching..... Do keep writing


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31st July 2004, 12:08 PM

Ye dil yunhi reh reh kar sataata hai....

Priya..

Dil ke jazbaatoN ko kaaghar par likhna.. ye shayri hi to hai.. bhale hi usme kitna hi dard kyu na mila ho.. wo khubsoorat hi lagta hai.. apni ye kavita hi le lo.. har lafz dard me dooba, saadgi ka parda oRe, kitna khubsoorat lag raha hai..


Yunhi likhti raho..


Tum chale jaaoge to sochenge... Humne kya khoya, humne kya paaya...
   
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31st July 2004, 11:38 PM

Pulkit ji,

Aap yahan aaye bahut khushi huyi!



Afshan ji,

Taareef karna to koi aapse seekhe.. kitne pyare andaaz mein woh sab khaa aapne.. bahut khoob!



Meena di..

Aapka maun bahut kuch keh gaya...
Love u di!



Khush rahiye..
Duaaon ke saath..

~Priya



"Dikha kar khawaab in aankhon ko, De gaye aansoon in mein Tum..
Kaise chalka doo yeh aansoon, In mein bhi To rehTe ho Tum.."

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1st August 2004, 08:51 PM

Aaj phir aankhen nam ho gayi...
BaiThe baiThe Tanha ho gayi..
Kisi ki yaadon ke saaye ne is kadar gher liya mujhe..
Ki apne se hi main door ho gayi...
Aaj phir usi dard ne gher liya mujhe.......



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3rd August 2004, 08:32 PM

Durga ji,

Kisi ne mujhse kaha tha.. ki dard to vahi hota hai.. bas uska ehsaas kabhi kabhi badal jaata hai..

Yaadein... Bas yunhi bina baat ke taaza ho jaati hain... Yeh hoti hi aisi hain..

Bas haste muskuraate rahiye!

~Priya



"Dikha kar khawaab in aankhon ko, De gaye aansoon in mein Tum..
Kaise chalka doo yeh aansoon, In mein bhi To rehTe ho Tum.."

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4th August 2004, 12:50 PM

Chaahat ji..

Aap ke iss qalam ka kya reply karooN samjh mai nahi aa rah ahi.. sirf ehsaas hai mere paas lafz nahi ban paa rahe haiN.. Umeed hai aap apne iss dost ke ehsasoN ko samjh jaayeNgii..

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5th August 2004, 01:47 AM

Na kaho kuch main phir bhi jaan loongi..
Na karo koi ishaara, main phir bhi pehchaan loongi..
Teri aankhon ki woh chamak..
Use to main andhere mein bhi jaan loongi

Aap yahan aaye itna hi bahut hai, aur us par pasand bhi kiya.. isse jyada aur kya chaahiye!

Khush rahiye!

~Priya



"Dikha kar khawaab in aankhon ko, De gaye aansoon in mein Tum..
Kaise chalka doo yeh aansoon, In mein bhi To rehTe ho Tum.."

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