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Wink My last message... - 17th April 2005, 12:13 AM

Hi everyone,
Today I want to share something with all of U. my last mail to the only online friend of mine. I never met her personally but she came so close to me that after she's gone i just can't forget her. Anyways here's what i wrote her. And as always your comments r most greeted...
Have a good day...
Jeet...



Where should I start
What should I say
Let me recollect my thoughts
About our first meeting and that day…

Everything was pretty normal
Except that we met
As we started talking
To know each other we sat...

That was a lucky day
As I found a new friend
We decided to continue it
And create new trend...

Things quite worked for us
Soon we became good friends
Eager to see each other
Sitting together at different ends…

I never thought of
Meeting someone this way
A person I never saw
Who lives far away…

You came apparently
As brightness in my life
So I proposed you
One day to be my wife...

But u declined to say yes
As it was a tough pick
A matter of whole life…
That no one can trick…

So what happened
If my dreams never came true
No one should feel guilty
And no one would rue…

You turned me down
But I didn’t lose my faith
As I always believe
Love is eternally great…


No matter what
We will always be friends
Friends forever…
As nothing can take us apart

But I don’t deny one thing
That u’ll always be in my heart…
   
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17th April 2005, 12:52 AM

Dear Jeet a very nice post,
btw if you love someone
let her free,if she returns back,she is yours....otherwise
gulshan main phool aur bhi hain
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Hum tum ko chahte hein,
Ye sab jaante hein…
Tum ko kitna chahte hein,
Sirf Rab jaante hein


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HEY - 17th April 2005, 04:49 AM

YES AMRITA
U R ABSOLUTELY RIGHT. BUT ITS NOT THAT EASY TO GET RID OF ALL THE FEELINGS U HAVE FOR SOMEONE. BUT I M TRYING HARD. THANKS FOR READING...


AYE DOST TERI DOSTI NE MUJHE BAHUT KUCH DIYA
KHUSHI THODI KAM DI MAGAR GHAM BAHUT DIYA
DOOR JAAKE TUJHSE YEH EHSAAS MUJHE HUA
JO BHI DIYA TUNE , APNA SAMAJH KE TO DIYA...

JEET...
   
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Hey - 21st April 2005, 02:34 AM

Really good job man. Believe me if I was in her place, I would've never left you alone. and after reading this I can't think of one good reason why someone would do that. Maybe it wasn't in your destiny. Cheer up and everything will be fine.
again a very nice post.
take it easy...
   
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thnx - 25th April 2005, 12:05 AM

Thanks Sanjh,
I m happy u liked it. keep reading more...
   
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Thumbs up 25th April 2005, 12:39 PM

same story of mine........... but my friend life has to go on. we can't spoil our life for a girl who doesn't care for us. whenever i read this kind of poetry/stories my heart sinks..........it hurts. try to forget everything and start a new life . best of luck.


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ab to chahna hi reh gaya hai zindagi main
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hey - 28th April 2005, 04:13 AM

I agree with mehul. live your life like there's no tomorrow... love comes alot of times in life. I don't know why people say it comes once in a life. anyways have fun...
   
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29th April 2005, 08:49 AM

jeetji, i wish u all the good luck for future. its not necessary that u need to get the love of a person in return if u love that person.
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hey - 30th April 2005, 11:06 PM

Thnx guys,
I appreciate whatever u said. Mehul U have a point. But u r also doing the same i guess. which i felt after reading all your poems. But i will still try to do what u told me.
Vedika, Love only needs love in return. No luxuries of life can replace it. so I didn't ask for much.
Anyways all that is over for me. Take care all of you...
   
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hi - 3rd May 2005, 04:20 AM

U have a point Jeet. But life must go on at any cost... so forget everything and U can always start fresh...
   
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5th May 2005, 05:10 AM

Hi Jeet

I understand the sentiments of your poem but i dont agree with you for that being a reason to stop writing here. love is giving not expecting anything in return. she must have had her reasons for refusing you. We always tend to think in terms of our own feelings and never from the other person's point of view. I also agree with u that its not easy forgetting someone bt u can change all the sadness by reliving ll the happy memories. Life is only as tragic as we make it. I hope you see you write more often here. take care

Munnia


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HEY MUNNIA - 7th May 2005, 04:19 AM

HEY MUNNIA,
THANKS ALOT FOR YOUR CONCERN. BUT I THINK U DIDN'T READ THE FIRST PART THAT COMES BEFORE THE POEM EVEN STARTS. ANYWAYS I SAID "MY LAST MESSAGE" FOR SOMEONE SPECIAL TO ME. NOT TO EVERYONE ELSE... SO I WILL BE HERE ALL THE TIME. AND U HAVE TO BEAR WITH ME AND MY SO CALLED POEMS. HAHAHA...
TAKE CARE AND THANKS FOR REPLYING...
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18th May 2005, 02:20 PM

yeah we can control our mind but not our heart


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19th May 2005, 04:52 AM

absolutely right Mehul,
We can control our thoughts but not feelings and no matter how hard we try we can't stop thinking about it. anyways I m keeping myself busy with work and I m doing pretty good. thnx for the reply...
have a great day...
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