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14th March 2009, 12:29 PM
shayri.com ke sabhii dosto.n ko mere salaam, ek taazi Ghazal ke saath haazir huu.n.. apni raa'ey se zaruur nawaaziyegaa
 *********************************** haal-e-soz-e-dil tumhe batlaaye.n kyaa ashk kaa paimaanaa phir chalkaaye.n kyaa naar-e-ulfat ai sanam bhaDkaaye.n kyaa! ham tumhaare aur qareeb aa jaaye.n kyaa! dil me.n dhaDhkan ban ke ham bas jaaye.n ge! jism do hai.n jaan ek ho jaaye.n kyaa? kyu.n nahii.n kartee hamaaraa aitbaar? "aks hai.n ham aaiinaa dikhlaaye.n kyaa" ishq dozakh bhii hai, jannat bhii hai ishq dekhiye qismat me.n apnii paaye.n kyaa? ham zamee.n kii Khaak tum nuur-e-falak to kshitiz par ,chal ke ham mil jaaye.n kyaa! zindagii ke pech-o-kham me.n pha.ns gaye kyaa kare.n! ab roye.n kyaa! muskaaye.n kyaa! ab kahaa.n :Ghaafil: woh shauq-e-shaairee! aap hee farmaaiye, farmaaye.n kyaa? -Mayank haal-e-soz-e-dil: dil ke dard ka haal naar-e-ulfat: ishq ki aag dozakh: hell jannat:heaven kshitiz: horizon falak: aasamaa.n pech-o-kham: Twist and turns |
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14th March 2009, 03:07 PM
हाल-ए-सोज़-ए-दिल तुम्हे बतलायें क्या
अश्क का पैमाना फिर छलकायें क्या may I show you the state of my heart pain may I spill the cup of my tears once again नार-ए-उल्फ़त! ऐ सनम भड्कायें क्या हम तुम्हारे और क़रीब आ जायें क्या the fire of love,my dear, may I blow may I come closer to you, a bit more दिल में धड्कन बन के हम बस जायेंगे जिस्म दो हैं जान एक हो जायें क्या? As a heart beat, in your heart I will reside To become a single life, let the two souls unite क्युं नहीं करती हमारा ऐतबार? "अक्स हैं हम आईना दिखलायें क्या" Why am I never worthy of your trust Let me show you a mirror,I am your reflect इश्क़ दोज़ख भी है, जन्नत भी है इश्क़ देखिये क़िस्मत में अपनी पायें क्या love is hell and love is also heavenly lets see what I get from my destiny हम ज़मीं की ख़ाक तुम नूर-ए-फ़लक तो उफ़ुक़ पर ,चल के हम मिल जायें क्या I am the dust of earth,and in the sky you shine as light Shall we walk upto the horizons ,and there we unite ज़िन्दगी के पेच-ओ-खम में फंस गये क्या करें! अब रोयें क्या! मुस्कायें क्या! lost I am in the twists and turns of life in deep confused I am,should I smile or should I weep अब कहां :ग़ाफ़िल: वो शौक़-ए-शाइरी! आप ही फ़रमाइये, फ़रमायें क्या? for poetry,.. Ghaafil now hardly have any interest what should I say..,why don't you suggest -मयंक |
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14th March 2009, 09:35 PM
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Mashaallah Kyaa qalaam hai, Har ek sher, har ek lafz dil ko chhoo kar gayaa hai, Dil se daad kubul kijiye. Neverthless, to say keep writing. Ye lines mujhe khaas taur se pasand aayiN- ham zamee.n kii Khaak tum nuur-e-falak to kshitiz par ,chal ke ham mil jaaye.n kyaa! zindagii ke pech-o-kham me.n pha.ns gaye kyaa kare.n! ab roye.n kyaa! muskaaye.n kyaa! ab kahaa.n :Ghaafil: woh shauq-e-shaairee! aap hee farmaaiye, farmaaye.n kyaa? With best wishes -Rashid Quote:
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Neki aur puch ??? Farmaayiye jo bhi aap ka dil kare................. Mayankjee Bahot khoob rahi yeh ghazal........... Muje wakyi tajjub hota hai ke aap kaise likhte hai aisi ghazale.N?? ...... Har baar koi naya andaaz dekhne ko milta hai...... Thodi Tips hame.N bhee batade.n ke har baar naye andaaz mein ghazal kaise pesh ki jaye???Yunhi likhte rahiye ...Duwao.N ke saath Ghazal  ~*~Kaash Dil ki aawaz mein aisa asar ho jaaye
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15th March 2009, 09:26 PM
Bohat khoob mayank ji bohat acha likha hai aap ne likhte rahiyega
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16th March 2009, 12:22 PM
Bahot khoob Mayank ji....................
Dil se daad qubool kijiye Fezan . . Koi Aisa Kamaal Ho Jaye Zindigi Be-Misaal Ho Jaye
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Masha Allah, Bahot khub gazal likhi hai aapne har ek ashar behtrin hai. Likhtye rahiye.
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16th March 2009, 04:22 PM
mayank ji, bahot hi khubsurti se hale-dil sunaya hai app ne daad kabool kijiye, bahot khaub, yun hi likhte rahe, rake care, bye
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17th March 2009, 05:10 PM
Mayank Bhai..
Aapne to dil nikaal ke rakh diya.... SUBHAAN-ALLAH!!!!!!!!! Take Care.. ~Priya "Dikha kar khawaab in aankhon ko, De gaye aansoon in mein Tum.. Kaise chalka doo yeh aansoon, In mein bhi To rehTe ho Tum.." ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ Sirf Tanu Ki ChaahaT...... ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ |
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Ghazal ki pasandeegi ke liye tah-e-dil se shukriyah.. aap khud bhi ek achchhe shayar hai.n to aap ki pasandagee khaas maaene rakhti hai... yuu.n hi aage bhi apni aara se nawaazte rahe.n.. shurkriyah! -Mayank |
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24th March 2009, 12:58 PM
hmmm mayankji...so romantic.....isse shari-e-ishq mein post karna tha na
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24th March 2009, 04:53 PM
Arre baap re...
Mayank bhai ... aapne to apna kad itna ooNcha kar liya hai .. ki ab kuch kehte banta nahi .. tareef sooraj ko diya dikhane wali baat jaisi rahegi .. mujhe bohat acchi lagi .. ek alag hi nazariya hai mera iske prati ... jab milunga bataunga ... Kunaal Hai 'sifar' bhi reyazi ka hissa.. Shayrii bhi hisaab ki hogi.. |
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Ghazal ki pasandeegi aur khaaksaar ki hausila afzaai ke liye aap ka shukr-guzaar huu.n.... aap ne jis andaaz se Ghazal ki taarif ki hai us se meri bohat hausila afzaiii huii hai.. shukriyah! -Mayank |
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28th March 2009, 09:35 AM
naar-e-ulfat ai sanam bhaDkaaye.n kyaa!
ham tumhaare aur qareeb aa jaaye.n kyaa! ham zamee.n kii Khaak tum nuur-e-falak to kshitiz par ,chal ke ham mil jaaye.n kyaa! ab kahaa.n :Ghaafil: woh shauq-e-shaairee! aap hee farmaaiye, farmaaye.n kyaa? janaab mayank saheb., aapki ghazal padhi, behad khoobsurat ehsaas hain,har sher qabil-e-tareef hai,iska english translation bhi bohat lajawaab hai,.. ..ye dono sher aur maqta hame behad acche lage ,ek aur khoobsurat ghazal per dil se daad qubool kijiye...yuhi likhte rahiye....zainy Zainy PalkoN ki baand ko tod ke daaman pe aa gira Ek aaNsu mere zabt ki tauheen kar gaya... Nm |
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moHtaram mayank jee aik mudaat ke baa'd app hi ki ghazal per app se mukhaatib hone ka sharf milaa hai , yeh ashaa'r mujhe munfarid lage ... aur behtreen bhi , app ka andaaz-e-bayaaN maqtaa meN kuch kuch Mirza Ghaalib jaisa laga , khuda wande ta'aalaa se duaa go hoN keh app ki soch aur app k andaaz-e-bayaN ko mazeed Quwat bakhshieN aik behtreen ghazal per meri jaanib se teh dili se daad qabool fermaaiye likhte rahieN Mujeeb |
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28th March 2009, 04:26 PM
namaskaar mayank jii..................kya tareef karuN aapki kalam ki, lafz nahi mil rahe tareef ke liye......har sher ki baat nahi karuNgi har lafz tareef ke kabil hai.....dil ki gahrayo.n se daad hazir hai.....!
reps +++++++++++++++++++++ god bless u .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए... 
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dil-azeez MayaNk bhaa'ii:
namaste! bahot hi naGhz Ghazal kahi hay aapne...waah waah!! bazm ki raunaq YuuNhi baRhaate raheN! Ghazal ke aSh'aar dil ko chhu gayeN! daad! KhuSh raheN... apnaa Khayaal raKheN duaaoN ke saath ijaazat aapka ~ Dhaval |
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30th March 2009, 12:28 PM
Mayank bhai................. aap kuch karte kyun nai
i mean u write so well, why don't u publish ur book or something really wonderful poetry..... ! hats off for you Save me from the safety of my SILENCE
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Subhan_allah Ghaafil saheb hamesha ki tarah appka yeh kalam bhi bohat bohat khoobsurat hain mujhe yeh sher bohat ziyada pasand aaya...
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10th July 2009, 09:35 PM
apki yeh ghazal meri nazron se kaise chook gayi...
asusual bahut acchi lagi yeh ghazal bhi... abh faltoo tareef toh karni nahi mujhe... waise toh poori ghazal bahut acchi hai ... per dil chu gaye teen sher... dil me.n dhaDhkan ban ke ham bas jaaye.n ge! jism do hai.n jaan ek ho jaaye.n kyaa? kyu.n nahii.n kartee hamaaraa aitbaar? "aks hai.n ham aaiinaa dikhlaaye.n kyaa" ishq dozakh bhii hai, jannat bhii hai ishq dekhiye qismat me.n apnii paaye.n kyaa? Taec kaer jab yaad karte hai kisi ko wo waqt suhana hota hai uth jati hai kalam likhne ko wo pyar deewana hota hai kar deti hai haal-e-dil bayaan wo kalaam shayraana hota hai jab yaad karte hai kisi ko wo waqt suhana hota hai... ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~* duniya mein kitna gam hai apna gam phir bhi kam hai ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~* |
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mohtarma, Ghazal ki pasandagii ke liye aap ka behad shukr-guzaar huu.n.. ummeed hai ki aage bhi isi tarah koshish zaari rahegii.... Mayank |
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aadaab arz hai aap ki daad dil se qubool hai.. aap khud ek achche shayar hai.n, to aap ki pasandagii bhii khaas mayne rakhti hii hai..tah-e-dil se shukriyah hausila afzaaii ke liye... mayank |
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sameer saahab, Ghazal ki pasandagii ke liye aap ka maamuun huu.n.. Ghazal aur us ke har aashaar aap ko pasand aaye, yeh mere liye khushi kii baat hai.. yuu.n hi aage bhi apni raa;ey aur daad se nawaazte rahe.n mayank |
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eliyas saahab, aap ko Ghazal pasand aayee jaan kar khushii huii...Ghazal ki pasandagii ke liye, aap ka tah-e-dil se shukr-guzaar huu.n.. bazm me.n aate rahe.n Mayank |
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moderator saahiba, Ghazal ki pasandagii ke liye to aap ka shukr-guzaar huu.n. aap ko Ghazal bhaayee, khush qismati hai merii.. waise aap kahaa.n ghuum ho nazar hii nahii.n aa rahii ho.. sab khairiyat to hai na?  apna khayaal rakkho.. Mayank |
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bahottttt hi umdaa.... kis sher ki taarif karun maiN..ek muqammal ghazal pesh karne pe dil se daad deta hun.. yeh kuch sher bahot hi zyada dil ko chu gaye: ham zamee.n kii Khaak tum nuur-e-falak to kshitiz par ,chal ke ham mil jaaye.n kyaa! zindagii ke pech-o-kham me.n pha.ns gaye kyaa kare.n! ab roye.n kyaa! muskaaye.n kyaa! ab kahaa.n :Ghaafil: woh shauq-e-shaairee! aap hee farmaaiye, farmaaye.n kyaa? yeh padhkar aisa laga jaise mano maiN shunya hun...phir se sarjan karna hai... khush rahiye..god bless u aapka dost, Pradhyuman gore ghareeban hai ye 'bismil', kyun tu naashaad nazar aata hai? musht-e-khaak hai basi yahan, bata kahan fuwaad nazar aata hai? -------------------------------------------------- |
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1st August 2009, 08:12 PM
Mayank jee,
Kiase hain aap? wah wah suban allah ... ghazal ki tareef ke liye shabad kahan se laaye Har sher dil ko chu gaya hain ... dua karti hu aur ghazal\s nazar karte rahenge .... take care mandeep Quote:
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kaisi hai.n aap? aap ko Ghazal pasand aayee, jaan kar behad khushi huii..... aur rahi baat shayri-e ishq me.n rehne kii to kyaa keejiye, shaayad isay dard ka ghar zyaadah pasand hai.. isiliye, yahii.n zyaadah rahta hai.. aap ke daad ke liye tah-e-dil se shukriyah! aur der se jawaab dene ke liye mazrat bhee -mayank |
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10th August 2009, 07:58 PM
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daad hazir hei inke hazur, bauhat hee alaa'a andaz e bayaan eik do arz karte chalein gu ke hum tou tifl e maktab hein phir bhi aap se asaatza ko mehaz eik khayal se aagaah karte jayen socha...... NAAR ki jagha agar AATISH lafz kar diiya jaye tou dekhiye ga ...NAAR akcar jahanum aur NAARI jahanumiyon ke liye istimaal kiya jata hai aur is mein vo nazakat nahi apa rahee hei dosree baat ZAMEEN KI KHAAK kee bajaiyae a gar GARD E RAAH kar diya jaye yunhee baat zehan mein ayee umeed hei ye jasarat garaan na guzre gee tabiyat pe eik umda kalam ke hazur Maham ki daad haazir hei Qabul kijiye kisii jazbe ka ab mumkin nahi bedaar ho jana _____________________________________ eik lamha e visaal tha vaapis na aaska vo waqt ki micaal tha vaapis na aasaka mujh ko mere vajud se jo kar gaya judaa kaisa vo baakamal tha vaapis na asaka |
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11th August 2009, 09:11 PM
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kunaal bhaii, Ghazal aap ko achchhi lagii jaan kar behad khushii huiii... aap ki pasandagii khaas maaene rakhti hai mere liye.. aur rahii baat kad u.nchaakar lene ki to bhaii, log kahte hai.n ki 18-20 saal ki umr hone ke baad insaan ki kad baDhti nahii.n hai, utni hi rehti hai... khair, mazaaq ki baat ek taraf, aap ko yahaa.n dekh kar achcha laga.. ummeed hai ki aap ki taraf se bhi kuchh naya paDhne ko milegaa... -mayank |
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11th August 2009, 09:15 PM
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zainy saahiba aadaab arz hai Ghazal ki pasandagii ek liye aap ka tah-e-dil se shukr-guzaar huu.n.. aur aap ne jis andaaz se taareef kee hai, is se meri kaafi hausiala afzaaii huii hai.. english translation ko pasand karne ke liye bhi aap ka shukriya adaa karta huu.n.. english translation me.n hamaari ek dost ne hamaari kaafi madad ki hai, aap usay zaruur jaanti ho.ngii... aap ki daad qubool hai.. yuu.n hi aati rahe.n Mayank |
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11th August 2009, 09:20 PM
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aadaab arz hai.. Ghazal ki pasaandagii ke liye aap ka tah-e-dil se shukr-guzaar huu.n... aap ne Ghazal passand farmaaya yeh mere liye behad khushii kii baat hai.. aapne jin ashaaro.n ko chuna hai, woh ashaar mujhe bhii behad pasand hai.. maqte me.n aap ko andaaz kuchh mirza Ghaalib jaisa lagaa.. yeh to mere liye behad hausila aur izzat afzaaii kii baat hai.. kyun ki, woh sher-o-shayri ke khuda hai.n aur unhe paDhkar bohat kuchh seekhaa hai ham ne.. aur hamaari Ghazal par un ke andaaz nazar aana intahaaii masarrat ki baat hai,... Ghazal ki pasandagii ke liye ek baar phir se shukriya.... yuu.n hii aate rahe.n Mayank |
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11th August 2009, 09:23 PM
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sunita jee namaskaar aap ko yeh chhoTi si koshish pasand aayee jaan kar khushii huii... aur aap ne jin lafzo.n se Ghazal ki taareef kii hai, is ne mujeh la-jawaab kar ke rakh diya hai.. mai.n aap ka tah-e-dil se shukr-guzaar huu.n.. yuu.n hi bazm me.n aati rahe.n Mayank |
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11th August 2009, 09:25 PM
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Dhaval bhaii, jai shree krishna... aap hamesha waqt nikaal kar hame paDh hi lete ho, aur hausila afzaii bhii karte ho, yeh hamaare liye behad khushii ki baat hai.. aap ka tah-e-dil se shukriya, is chhoTi sii koshish ko pasand karne ke liye... ummeed hai ki aage bhi aap se daad milti rahegii... mayank |
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11th August 2009, 09:33 PM
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book publish..hahahaha abhi yahaa.n likh raha huu.n bohat hai.. abhee to yahaa.n ke dosto.n ko hii bore kar raha huu.n, book publish karuu.nga to loh lahii.n apne baal na no.nch le.n.. khair, mazaaq ki baat alag rahii... Ghazal ki pasandagii ke liye, aap ka shukr-guzaar huu.n.. bazm me.n aate rahe.n -Mayank |
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11th August 2009, 09:35 PM
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kaise ho aap? ummeed hai ki khairiyat se ho.nge.. aap ne Gahzal pasand farmaaya yeh mere liye behad khushi kii baat hai.. aap ki husn-e-nazar hai jo Ghazal aap ko, is qadar bhaiii hai.. aap ka tah-e-dil se shukriyah! mayank |
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11th August 2009, 09:40 PM
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as usual, aap hame paDhti hi ho to Ghazal ki pasandagii ke liye, as usual mai.n aap ka shukr-guzaar huu.n.. ummeed karta huu.n ki aap as usual hamaari hausila afzaaii karti rahe.ngii.. jin 3 sher ko aap ne khaas taur par pasand kiya us ke liye as usual mai.n aap ka alag se shukr-guzaar huu.n  Mayank |
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