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Mohobbat meri Jaan Ho tum -
13th March 2009, 05:34 PM
Doston Yeh mera pehla post hai Ummid karta huon aapko pasand ayenga
agar pasand na aaye bhi to pls mujhe suggest kijiye may Improve karne ki koshish karunga.
Khilte gulab ki tarha masoom ho tum
Taza fiza ki mehkti khushboo ho tum
Mehkti rahna mere dil e baghban me
Dil ko de thandak woh sukun ho tum
Badlte hua waqt ke sath badal na jana tum
Rooth gaya kabhi may to khafa na hona tum
Hokar juda tumse shayad mar hi jaunga may
Meri wafaoke pare kabi bewafa na hona tum
Ye jism to mitti hai mitti me mil jayenga ek din
Zinda rahunga may Mohobbat meri jaan ho tum
Teri beloze mohobbat ka mara hun, hai Kwahish
Mar jaun agar may to khakh bhi na dalna tum..
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13th March 2009, 05:50 PM
you are mind blowing...............hats off to you
Save me from the safety of my SILENCE
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13th March 2009, 06:09 PM
Aapki yeh lines pasand aayeen....
" Khilte gulab ki tarha masoom ho tum / Taaza fiza ki mehkti khushboo ho tum / Mehkti rehna mere dil-e-baghbaan mein / Dil ko de thandak woh sukoon ho tum "
likhtey rahiyega
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14th March 2009, 03:33 PM
Thanks very much doston, Izzat afzai ka bahot bahot shukriya,
Hasinao ne kai jalwe bekhare the fizao me
phirbi hum jaise kamzarf aye apki nigaho me
Shukara hai taarif to ki kisi hum raah ne
Kitne hi hum safar **** gaye hame raho me
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14th March 2009, 09:29 PM
Achchhe khyaal hai, Sahaab keep it up
With wishes
Rashid
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Originally Posted by kwahish
Doston Yeh mera pehla post hai Ummid karta huon aapko pasand ayenga
agar pasand na aaye bhi to pls mujhe suggest kijiye may Improve karne ki koshish karunga.
Khilte gulab ki tarha masoom ho tum
Taza fiza ki mehkti khushboo ho tum
Mehkti rahna mere dil e baghban me
Dil ko de thandak woh sukun ho tum
Badlte hua waqt ke sath badal na jana tum
Rooth gaya kabhi may to khafa na hona tum
Hokar juda tumse shayad mar hi jaunga may
Meri wafaoke pare kabi bewafa na hona tum
Ye jism to mitti hai mitti me mil jayenga ek din
Zinda rahunga may Mohobbat meri jaan ho tum
Teri beloze mohobbat ka mara hun, hai Kwahish
Mar jaun agar may to khakh bhi na dalna tum..
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Tu AndheroN -ujaaloN me mila kar mujhko
Zindagi ab to sawaloN me mila kar mujhko
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16th March 2009, 10:43 AM
khoobsurat ehsaas hain....yuhi likhte rahiye...
zainy
Zainy
PalkoN ki baand ko tod ke daaman pe aa gira
Ek aaNsu mere zabt ki tauheen kar gaya...
Nm
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16th March 2009, 02:07 PM
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khoobsurat ehsaas hain....yuhi likhte rahiye...
zainy
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16th March 2009, 04:47 PM
Kwahish ji, bahot achi peshkash, likhte rahe nikhar ate rahenga teke care, bye
koi pyaar chahe to koi jahan chahe,
koi doulat chahe to koi shaan chahe,
hum to jindagi ke sataye huwe hai,
‘Eliyas’ to khudase do gaaz zameen aur kafan chahe
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18th March 2009, 01:48 PM
Shukriya dost Koshish karunga behtrin peshkash ki, gar aapka yunhi sath raha.
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18th March 2009, 03:36 PM
Khilte gulab ki tarha masoom ho tum
Taza fiza ki mehkti khushboo ho tum
Mehkti rahna mere dil e baghban me
Dil ko de thandak woh sukun ho tum
Badlte hua waqt ke sath badal na jana tum
Rooth gaya kabhi may to khafa na hona tum
Hokar juda tumse shayad mar hi jaunga may
Meri wafaoke pare kabi bewafa na hona tum
Ye jism to mitti hai mitti me mil jayenga ek din
Zinda rahunga may Mohobbat meri jaan ho tum
Teri beloze mohobbat ka mara hun, hai Kwahish
Mar jaun agar may to khakh bhi na dalna tum..
tooooooooooooo much gooooooooooooood, heart thundaring
Anil Arora
Naulekahe par tere khoon ki boond hai,
Motiyo ki jagah par jada kaun hai,
Jiski khatir daga chandini se kare,
Puch suraj ki woh dilruba kaun hai?
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18th March 2009, 05:12 PM
ahsaas behad umda haiN..............hume accha laga aapke ahsaaso.n se ru-b-ru hona....umeed hai aapko padne ka mokka milta rahega....!
kush rahiye...likhtey rahiye
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यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया
....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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19th March 2009, 04:28 PM
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ahsaas behad umda haiN..............hume accha laga aapke ahsaaso.n se ru-b-ru hona....umeed hai aapko padne ka mokka milta rahega....!
kush rahiye...likhtey rahiye
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Shukiya tarifon ke phool bandhne ka aur hounsla afzai ka, Aapka sath yunhi bana raha to aur bhi achchi shayari post karta rahunga, wel mera naya post Pyar ki khushboo hai jo maine kal post kiya hai. Shayri-e-Ishq Pyar ki Khushboo
Apke reply ka arzumand Kwahish
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20th March 2009, 05:43 PM
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20th March 2009, 06:01 PM
GA SAKUN NAGMA WO SAAJ KAHAN SE LAOUN...
SUNA SAKUN KUCH AAPKO WO ANDAJ KAHAN SE LAOUN
YU TO CHAND KI TARIF KARNA ASAN HAI
KAR SAKU TARIF AAPKI WO ALFAAJ KAHAN SE LAOUN
Mat pucho kis kis ne mara laat mere janaje par...............
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22nd March 2009, 03:15 PM
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GA SAKUN NAGMA WO SAAJ KAHAN SE LAOUN...
SUNA SAKUN KUCH AAPKO WO ANDAJ KAHAN SE LAOUN
YU TO CHAND KI TARIF KARNA ASAN HAI
KAR SAKU TARIF AAPKI WO ALFAAJ KAHAN SE LAOUN
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28th March 2009, 03:57 PM
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Doston Yeh mera pehla post hai Ummid karta huon aapko pasand ayenga
agar pasand na aaye bhi to pls mujhe suggest kijiye may Improve karne ki koshish karunga.
Khilte gulab ki tarha masoom ho tum
Taza fiza ki mehkti khushboo ho tum
Mehkti rahna mere dil e baghban me
Dil ko de thandak woh sukun ho tum
Badlte hua waqt ke sath badal na jana tum
Rooth gaya kabhi may to khafa na hona tum
Hokar juda tumse shayad mar hi jaunga may
Meri wafaoke pare kabi bewafa na hona tum
Ye jism to mitti hai mitti me mil jayenga ek din
Zinda rahunga may Mohobbat meri jaan ho tum
Teri beloze mohobbat ka mara hun, hai Kwahish
Mar jaun agar may to khakh bhi na dalna tum..
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bahot khub sameer ji.............
bade pyaren ehsaas hai. do keep sharing
Regards
Praneeta
_______________________________________________ PRANEETA
Kaash k khamoshi bhi ek zabaaN hoti
Main dekta rehta unhe aur haal-e-dil bayaaN hota
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29th March 2009, 04:22 PM
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bahot khub sameer ji.............
bade pyaren ehsaas hai. do keep sharing
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5th June 2009, 08:44 AM
sameer jii
kaise hain aap?
aapki phelii .... ghazal ..... bahut aachi lagii ... ehsaas dil fareeb rahe....
likhte rahye....
take care
mandeep
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5th June 2009, 10:13 PM
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sameer jii
kaise hain aap?
aapki phelii .... ghazal ..... bahut aachi lagii ... ehsaas dil fareeb rahe....
likhte rahye....
take care
mandeep
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Shukriyaa Mandeep Jii.....
Jii bus aap logoN ki duaen hai.....
Aapne itni purani post nikal dii ke aab kya kahuN
Meri paheli koshish pasand kane aur sarhane ka bahut bahut shukriya...
Bus aap logoN ka sath bana rahe to likhate rahenge..................................
Aap bhi khush rahiye....
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5th June 2009, 11:16 PM
sameer ji
acha likha hai..yuhi likhte rahiye
कुछ ऐसे पल जिनको संजोना है ,
शब्दों में पिरोना है , जिससे वो हमारी यादों में महकते रहे
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