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Love Mohobbat meri Jaan Ho tum - 13th March 2009, 05:34 PM

Doston Yeh mera pehla post hai Ummid karta huon aapko pasand ayenga
agar pasand na aaye bhi to pls mujhe suggest kijiye may Improve karne ki koshish karunga.

Khilte gulab ki tarha masoom ho tum
Taza fiza ki mehkti khushboo ho tum
Mehkti rahna mere dil e baghban me
Dil ko de thandak woh sukun ho tum


Badlte hua waqt ke sath badal na jana tum
Rooth gaya kabhi may to khafa na hona tum
Hokar juda tumse shayad mar hi jaunga may
Meri wafaoke pare kabi bewafa na hona tum


Ye jism to mitti hai mitti me mil jayenga ek din
Zinda rahunga may Mohobbat meri jaan ho tum
Teri beloze mohobbat ka mara hun, hai Kwahish
Mar jaun agar may to khakh bhi na dalna tum..

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13th March 2009, 06:09 PM

Aapki yeh lines pasand aayeen....

" Khilte gulab ki tarha masoom ho tum / Taaza fiza ki mehkti khushboo ho tum / Mehkti rehna mere dil-e-baghbaan mein / Dil ko de thandak woh sukoon ho tum "

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Thanks very much doston, Izzat afzai ka bahot bahot shukriya,

Hasinao ne kai jalwe bekhare the fizao me
phirbi hum jaise kamzarf aye apki nigaho me
Shukara hai taarif to ki kisi hum raah ne
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Achchhe khyaal hai, Sahaab keep it up

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Doston Yeh mera pehla post hai Ummid karta huon aapko pasand ayenga
agar pasand na aaye bhi to pls mujhe suggest kijiye may Improve karne ki koshish karunga.

Khilte gulab ki tarha masoom ho tum
Taza fiza ki mehkti khushboo ho tum
Mehkti rahna mere dil e baghban me
Dil ko de thandak woh sukun ho tum


Badlte hua waqt ke sath badal na jana tum
Rooth gaya kabhi may to khafa na hona tum
Hokar juda tumse shayad mar hi jaunga may
Meri wafaoke pare kabi bewafa na hona tum


Ye jism to mitti hai mitti me mil jayenga ek din
Zinda rahunga may Mohobbat meri jaan ho tum
Teri beloze mohobbat ka mara hun, hai Kwahish
Mar jaun agar may to khakh bhi na dalna tum..

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16th March 2009, 10:43 AM

khoobsurat ehsaas hain....yuhi likhte rahiye...

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khoobsurat ehsaas hain....yuhi likhte rahiye...

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Shukriya dost Koshish karunga behtrin peshkash ki, gar aapka yunhi sath raha.


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Khilte gulab ki tarha masoom ho tum
Taza fiza ki mehkti khushboo ho tum

Mehkti rahna mere dil e baghban me
Dil ko de thandak woh sukun ho tum


Badlte hua waqt ke sath badal na jana tum
Rooth gaya kabhi may to khafa na hona tum
Hokar juda tumse shayad mar hi jaunga may
Meri wafaoke pare kabi bewafa na hona tum


Ye jism to mitti hai mitti me mil jayenga ek din
Zinda rahunga may Mohobbat meri jaan ho tum
Teri beloze mohobbat ka mara hun, hai Kwahish
Mar jaun agar may to khakh bhi na dalna tum..

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Thumbs up Bahut khoob......! - 18th March 2009, 05:12 PM

ahsaas behad umda haiN..............hume accha laga aapke ahsaaso.n se ru-b-ru hona....umeed hai aapko padne ka mokka milta rahega....!

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ahsaas behad umda haiN..............hume accha laga aapke ahsaaso.n se ru-b-ru hona....umeed hai aapko padne ka mokka milta rahega....!

kush rahiye...likhtey rahiye
Shukiya tarifon ke phool bandhne ka aur hounsla afzai ka, Aapka sath yunhi bana raha to aur bhi achchi shayari post karta rahunga, wel mera naya post Pyar ki khushboo hai jo maine kal post kiya hai. Shayri-e-Ishq Pyar ki Khushboo
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GA SAKUN NAGMA WO SAAJ KAHAN SE LAOUN...
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YU TO CHAND KI TARIF KARNA ASAN HAI
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GA SAKUN NAGMA WO SAAJ KAHAN SE LAOUN...
SUNA SAKUN KUCH AAPKO WO ANDAJ KAHAN SE LAOUN
YU TO CHAND KI TARIF KARNA ASAN HAI
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Doston Yeh mera pehla post hai Ummid karta huon aapko pasand ayenga
agar pasand na aaye bhi to pls mujhe suggest kijiye may Improve karne ki koshish karunga.

Khilte gulab ki tarha masoom ho tum
Taza fiza ki mehkti khushboo ho tum
Mehkti rahna mere dil e baghban me
Dil ko de thandak woh sukun ho tum


Badlte hua waqt ke sath badal na jana tum
Rooth gaya kabhi may to khafa na hona tum
Hokar juda tumse shayad mar hi jaunga may
Meri wafaoke pare kabi bewafa na hona tum


Ye jism to mitti hai mitti me mil jayenga ek din
Zinda rahunga may Mohobbat meri jaan ho tum
Teri beloze mohobbat ka mara hun, hai Kwahish
Mar jaun agar may to khakh bhi na dalna tum..

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bahot khub sameer ji.............
bade pyaren ehsaas hai. do keep sharing
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5th June 2009, 08:44 AM

sameer jii

kaise hain aap?

aapki phelii .... ghazal ..... bahut aachi lagii ... ehsaas dil fareeb rahe....

likhte rahye....

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sameer jii

kaise hain aap?

aapki phelii .... ghazal ..... bahut aachi lagii ... ehsaas dil fareeb rahe....

likhte rahye....

take care

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Aapne itni purani post nikal dii ke aab kya kahuN
Meri paheli koshish pasand kane aur sarhane ka bahut bahut shukriya...

Bus aap logoN ka sath bana rahe to likhate rahenge..................................

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