Maa Pyari Maa

KHUSHBOO™ · **Maa Pyari Maa -** 13th March 2004, 08:12 PM

MOOt KI AGhOSh mAIn JAb THuK KAY sOoJAti hAi mAan
TAb kAhin JAKar THOra SukOon PAti hAi MAAN
FIkar mAIn BAChon KI KUch is TARhan GhuL Jati HAi MAan
NOjAwan HoTay hoY BOdhI Nazar ATi HAi MAan
ROh KAY RIShTon KI Yeah GAhrAi To dekHiAy
Chot lAGti HAii HUMaraY or CHiLAti HAi mAan
Jab PAreshANi mAIn Ghir JATay hAin HUm pArDes mAin
ANsOOn KO pooCHnay KHuwABon MAin AJAti HAI MAan
AIsa LAGTa hAi JAisay AGAy FIrdOUs MAin
BHeeNCh pAr BAhoon MAin seeNAy say LIPTati HAi mAan

saimrulzzz · **hmm -** 13th March 2004, 08:24 PM

salam khushboo ji wow apne to bahit hi acha likha hai is ka reply hai mere paas 1 ghazal ki surat main acha lage to reply zaror kerye ga waise main yeh pehle post kerchuka tha lekin apke post per dubara reply karaha hoonhmm

Jab Tu Peda Howa Kitna Majbour Tha
Yeh Jahan Teri Socho Se Bhi Dour Tha

Hath Paon Bhi Tab Tere Apne Na Thay
Teri Ankhon Main Duniya K Sapne Na Thay

Tujh Ko Ata Sirf Rona Hi Tha
Doodh Pi K Kaam Tera Sona He Tha

Tujh Ko Chalna Sikhaya Tha Maan Ne Teri
Tujh Ko Dil Main Basaya Tha Maan Ne Teri

Maan Ke Saye Main Parwan Charne Laga
Waqt Ke Sath Qad Tera Barne Laga

Ahista Ahista Tu Kariyal Jawan Ho Gaya
Tujh Pe Sara Jahan Meharban Ho Gaya

Zor Bazoo Pe Tu Baat Karne Laga
Khood He Sajne Laga Khud He Sanwarne Laga

Aik Din Ek Larki Tujhe Bha Gaye
Ban Ke Dulhan Woh Tere Ghar Agayi

Apne Farz Se Tu Dour Hone Laga
Beej Nafrat Ka Khud He Tu Bone Laga

Phir Tu Maan Baap Ko Bhi Bhulane Laga
Teer Baton K Phir Tu Chalane Laga

Baat Be Baat Unn Se Tu Larne Laga
Qayda Ik Naya Tu Phir Parne Laga

Yaad Kar Tujh Se Maan Ne Kaha Ik Din
Abb Humara Guzara Nahi Tere Bin

Sunn Ke Yeh Baat Tu Tesh Main Agiya
Tera Gussa Teri Aqal Ko Kha Giya

Josh Main Aake Tu Ne Yeh Maan Se Kaha
Main Tha Khamosh Sub Dekhta He Raha

Aaj Kehta Hoon Peecha Mera Chor Do
Jo Hai Rishta Mera Tum Se Woh Tor Do

Jao Ja Ke Kahin Kaam Dhanda Karo
Log Marte Hain Tum Bhi Kahin Ja Maro

Beth Kar Ahain Bharti Thi Maan Raat Bhar
Inki Ahon Ka Tujh Par Howa Na Asar

Aik Din Baap tera Chala Roth Kar
Kese Bikhri Thi Phir Teri Maan Tout Kar

Phir Woh Bhi Bass kal Ko Bulati Rahi
Zindagi Isko Har Roz Satati Rahi

Aik Din Mout Ko Bhi Taras Agaya
Iska Rona Bhi Taqdeer Ko Bha Gaya

Ashk Ankhon Main Thay Woh Rawana Howi
Mout Ki Aik Hichki Bahana Howi

Ik Sukoon Us k Chehre Pe Chane Laga
Phir Tu Mayyat Ko Uski Sajane Laga

Muddatain Ho Gayi Aaj Budda Hai Tu
Touti Khatiya Pe Para Bora Hai Tu

Tere Bache Bhi Abb Tujh Se Darte Nahi
Nafrate Hain, Muhabbat Woh Karte Nahi

Dard Main Tu Pukare Ke O MERI MAAN
TERE DAM SE ROSHAN THAY DONO JAHAN

Waqt Chalta Rahta Hai Waqt Rukta Nahi
Tout Jata Hai Woh Jo Ke Jhukta Nahi

Bann Ke Ibrat Ka Tu Abb Nishan Reh Gaya
Dhond Zor Tera Kahan Reh Gaya

Tu EHKAM-E-RABBI Bhulata Raha
APNE MAAN BAAP KO TU SATATA RAHA

Kaat Le Tu Wohi Tu Ne Boya Tha Jo
Tujh Ko Kese Mile Tu Ne Khoya Tha Jo

Yaad Kar K Gaya Dor Tu Rone Laga
Kal Jo Tu Ne Kiya Aaj Phir Hone Laga

Mout Mange Tujhe Mout Aati Nahi
Maan Ki Surat Nigahon Se Jati Nahi

Tu Jo Khanse Tu Aulad Dante Tujhe
Tu Hai Nasoor Sukh Kon Bante Tujhe

Mout Ayegi Tujh Ko Magar Waqt Par
Bann Hi Jaye Gi Qabar Teri Waqt Par

QADAR MAAN BAAP KI AGAR KOI JAAN LE
APNI JANNAT KO DUNIYA MAIN PEHCHAN LE

Aur Leta Rahe Woh Baro Ki Dua
Osi K Dono Jahan, Uska Ka Haami KHUDA

Yaad Rakhna Tu SAIM Ki Is Baat Ko
Bhool Na Jana REHMAT KI BARSAT Ko

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hmmm hope u like it

KHUSHBOO™ · **hi saim -** 13th March 2004, 08:32 PM

saim jee app nay to kamal hi kar diya bht hi achi gazal hai really bht achi i cant tell u in words ki yi gazal kitni achi hai mujhe paar kar bht acha laga i must say thanxx that u post it again for me really thanx alot take care

ALLAH HAFFIZ

saimrulzzz · **hmmmm ;) -** 13th March 2004, 08:43 PM

thanx

KHUSHBOO™ · **hmmmmm -** 13th March 2004, 08:44 PM

ur welcome

farhan shaikh · 13th March 2004, 08:54 PM

salam 2 all
nice khush keep it up.
saim ney bataya abt u k kisi ney bhut acha likha hai to meiney kaha parhlo
really nice
thankx saim 4 teling me
keep it up kush

Allah hafiz
wats ur real name ?
Allah hafiz
Farhan Shaikh

KHUSHBOO™ · **hi farhan -** 13th March 2004, 08:57 PM

walakum asalam farhan how r u? hope for fine thanx for liking this poetry n thanx for reply mera real name KHUSHBOO hi hai

ALLLAH HAFFIZ Take care

sabeen · **wow -** 14th March 2004, 01:37 AM

salam khushboo ji kaisi hain app bahut acha likha hai app ne sahi kaha AIsa LAGTa hAi JAisay AGAy FIrdOUs MAin
BHeeNCh pAr BAhoon MAin seeNAy say LIPTati HAi mAan
bahut hi khubsurat andaz main likha hai app ne i dont have words likhte rahiye ga isi tarhan

salam saim sahab app ne to khushboo ji ki ghazal main jo apna jawab ghazal k roop main dya hai us ka bhi jawab nahi ab sochti hoon sab app ko reply karain ya khushboo ji koo waise dono ne bahut hi acha likha hai maa k bare main koi shak nahi dono k words dil ko chuu se gaye

waise app dono k jawab main mujhe bhi 1 sher yaad araha hai anjam movie ka door gagan 1 tara mujh ko lagta pyara mujh ko mera pyara dede maa mujhe woh tara dede heheheheh acha hai na anyway app dono ne bahut acha likha hai likhte rahiye ga or khayal rakhiye ga apna app sab khudahafiz

KHUSHBOO™ · 14th March 2004, 08:37 AM

ws sabeen jee how r u? hope for fine?

thanx for the reply app nay bi sahi likha hai lol take care ALLAH HAFFIZ