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kaagaz aur kalam....!!!! - 1st March 2011, 12:09 AM




kalam ki zuban
kaagaz ka saath
hai ab jeevan ka saar
dilo mein udaan
ne chah hai na raah
na haar ka gum
na khushi ka armaan
kalam ki zuban
kaagaz ka saath
hatho ki kismat
sihayi ki rangat
shabdo ki banavat
jinki mujhse hai dastak
daastan hai suhani
na raja na raani
bus ek simti hui kahaani
jo hai mere kalam ki zubaani.....
   
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1st March 2011, 12:59 AM

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kalam ki zuban
kaagaz ka saath
hai ab jeevan ka saar
dilo mein udaan
ne chah hai na raah
na haar ka gum
na khushi ka armaan
kalam ki zuban
kaagaz ka saath
hatho ki kismat
sihayi ki rangat
shabdo ki banavat
jinki mujhse hai dastak
daastan hai suhani
na raja na raani
bus ek simti hui kahaani
jo hai mere kalam ki zubaani.....
Interesting, very interesting, my dear...!

Keep it up



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Haqeekat meri jaaN liye jaa rahi hai

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kalam ki zuban
kaagaz ka saath
hai ab jeevan ka saar
dilo mein udaan
ne chah hai na raah
na haar ka gum
na khushi ka armaan
kalam ki zuban
kaagaz ka saath
hatho ki kismat
sihayi ki rangat
shabdo ki banavat
jinki mujhse hai dastak
daastan hai suhani
na raja na raani
bus ek simti hui kahaani
jo hai mere kalam ki zubaani.....
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ur welcome ...........

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kalam ki zuban
kaagaz ka saath
hai ab jeevan ka saar
dilo mein udaan
ne chah hai na raah
na haar ka gum
na khushi ka armaan
kalam ki zuban
kaagaz ka saath
hatho ki kismat
sihayi ki rangat
shabdo ki banavat
jinki mujhse hai dastak
daastan hai suhani
na raja na raani
bus ek simti hui kahaani
jo hai mere kalam ki zubaani.....

ji bhaut sunder.................



Radhika

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Jo Humpe Guzari Guzarey Chale Gaye

Woh Aayega Ek Din Milne Humse
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Aapki is koshish ko padhkar aapke andar chupe hue shaayar ki jhalak hame nazar aa rahi hai... Allah ne chaha to bahot aage tak jaaoge.. welcome to SDC family... likhte rahiye and always keep smiling......


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khayaal to bahut hi ahcha hai, par thodi pehash me kami hai, par aage v yunhi likhti rahiye....



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thank u so much for your liking this piece of my shayari....
I will try to come up to your expectations....
regards
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