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5th July 2005, 11:57 PM
Na samajh pae kuch HUM tumhe....
na samajh pae kuch TUM hume............ kuch duriyaa aa gae thi humme... na kam kae pae hum jise..... Saath tera jarur chuta, par bandhi hai tujhse kuch yaade..... teri khamoshi jo itna kahti hai.....dur tumse hum kaise bhaage?? Maana bhul hui humse....par hriday main swaarth kabhi na tha... ab bhi khara hu teri hi chaukhat pe....kuch armma jo dil me jaage... fir bhi kat jaegi ye jindagi...bus ek afsoos sadaa rahega... 'JO DENA CHAHE WO KABHI DE NA PAE....... ....... JO DE GAE WO KABHI DENA NA CHAHE'!! |
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6th July 2005, 02:04 AM
Nice one!
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8th July 2005, 12:29 PM
Hello Musafirji,
Bahut Achha likha hai.... Na samajh pae kuch HUM tumhe.... na samajh pae kuch TUM hume............ kuch duriyaa aa gae thi humme... na kam kar paye hum jise..... in above 4 lines, Aisa laga padh ke ki har dil ki haqikat bayyan ki hai.......... Saath tera jarur chuta, par bandhi hai tujhse kuch yaade..... teri khamoshi jo itna kahti hai.....dur tumse hum kaise bhaage?? Yeh lines to bahut hi pyari hai dil ko chu gayi.... Aapki yeh Shayri/Kavita padh ke kuch arz karne ko man karta hai.. 'Palkon Mein Qaid Kuch Sapne Hai, Kuch Begane Kuch Apne Hai, Na Jane kya kashish hai in Khayalon Mein, Aap humse Dur hoke Bhi, Kitne Apne Hai...' Sweety...  hazaaroN KHwahishaiN 'eisee ke har KHwahish pe dam nikle bohot nikle mere armaaN lekin fir bhee kam nikle.... |
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