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Love Mehsoos karti hoon tujh ko - 31st July 2002, 07:27 PM

Mehsoos karti hoon tujh ko
apne aas paas ki har ek cheez mein

choo leti hoon tumhare haathoan ko
jab paas tum mere aate ho
phir khawab se jaag jaati hoon
jab tujh ko dekh nahi paati hoon

pareshan hoon is dil se
nadan bahut tadpata hai
teri yaadoan se har baar
raat ko jagata hai

dekh nahi sakte kya
tum meri mohabaat ko
khuli hui meri in baahoan ko
kya tum bhar nahi sakte ho .!!!


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Sad Mehsoos - 25th August 2002, 10:06 PM

mehsoon karne wali kahti hai
hum hai uske ass paas hi kahi

choo lene ko kisi ke dil ko
paas hona nahi jaruri
khawab mai hi sahi
hame apna to manti ho

pareshan na ho apne dil par
nadan hi hai ki tadpata hai
tumhari yaadoan ne to hame
din mai bhi rulaya hai

dekh kar hi ji ha....
tumhe apna jana tha
khuli hui un baahoan ki
maryada ko bhi nibha tha .!!!


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26th August 2002, 05:04 PM

wow!!!

Talking eyes...you have presented another great ghazal aur aaaj dobaara dil ko khush kiya hain. Bohoth pasand aaya...dil ki baaton ko aise pesh kiya hain ke aap ke har jazbaat, ahesaas aur dard ko humne samjha hain.

Aap ke ghazal mein meri dil ki baatein bhi hain...aap bhi shayad wohi mehsoos karti ho jo main mehsoos karti hoon.

Bohoth hi acha likha hain...likhte rehiyega


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26th April 2004, 06:32 PM

Mehsoos karti hoon tujh ko
apne aas paas ki har ek cheez mein

My Dear Shalu, I got your pm...dilse shukriya...I am fine, don't worry. Tum keise ho? Msn par aati nahin ho aaj kal, keya baat hai? Haan, yeh bhi hai ke main bhi jiyada nahin online hoti hun. But do give me miss call so I can be online, number save kiya hua hai ke nahin? I hope you still have my number. Bohot khub likha hai tumne...yunhi hota hai shayad....... Yunhi likhte rehna. Haan, ek gana yunhi yaad aa gaaya hai: Tera sath hai kitna Pyaara hum lagta hai Jeevan sara tere Pyaar ki lagan mein humein aana padega Duniya mein dubara.......Tahe dilse shukriya kabool karon...khush rahon yeh Duwa hamesha rahegi. Tou ab main chalun? Take care. God bless you.

Keep smilling.......


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Love hello - 26th April 2004, 07:37 PM

Dearest shimul,,,,,

Tum bhi naa......kitni purani cheeze dhuund laati ho .....Mein to bhhul bhi gai thi ..ki aese koi jazbaat le kar bhi meine koi nazm likhi thi ...... khud aaj apni hi nazm padh kar lag raha tha ..ki kya yeh meine hi likhi hai ..... Hmmmmm tum samajh rahi hogi ....hai naa.... haan ..bahut arsa hua .. kuch aesa nahi likha .... to padh kar bhi ajeeb lagta hai ...per shukriya tumhara jo tum ne ...phir se is nazm ko taza kar diya .

aur haan ..agar tum theek ho to ..mere se jaida khushi kisi ko nahi hogi ....per .tum jis din sach mein khush ho jaogi dil se .... aur tumhe woh sab mil jayega jo tum chahti ho .. ..to apne aap mere bageeche ke phuul khil jayenge ... ...

khuda se duaa hai .... tumhe woh dil ka karar de

shukriya bahut

Shalu.... !!


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26th April 2004, 07:46 PM

Dear Shalu, Itni Duwaye na diya karon mujhe, aur bhi bohot hai jinko bohot jiyada zaroorat hai Duwaon ki, ek jeise humara Deewana Jee hai...aur bhi bohot hai...actually sabke liye Duwa kiya karon tou mujhe bohot jiyada khushi hogi, sach...please come online, msn par...ok? Take care. God bless you.


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bahot ache - 26th April 2004, 08:19 PM

Dear shalini ji
jab wo kekh pate to ye shayri na hoti
ye tadpan na hoti
keep it up.


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27th April 2004, 04:12 PM

Mehsoos karti hoon tujh ko
apne aas paas ki har ek cheez mein

aap ka ahsaa bhut pyaara laga saalu ji.
aaj kai mahino baad aapka ye p[ost pada aacha laga.
yuhi likhte raahiye
sakhiiiiiiiii


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Hi !! - 29th April 2004, 07:33 AM

Hi dost ,

Bahot bahot khub likha hay tumne.....Pyaar ka ye rang bhi bahot khub hay.. .

Likhte rahna dost .

Bhagwan tumko khush rakhe...bahot sukhi rakhe.

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heloo - 29th April 2004, 08:01 AM

Shimul ... meeta ji .... sakhi ... aur palash

aap sab ka shukrruiya ... mere is post ko sarahane ke liye . aasha karti hu aap ki taareef aese hi milti rahegi aage bhi .

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