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Ae beraham kuch to kar ehsaas - 23rd March 2009, 04:46 PM

tez hawa hai chand udaas
ae bereham kuch to ker ehsaas

teri berukhiyan
laboon ki surkhiyan
aankhoon ka kajal
zulfoon ka badal
yaad aa rahi hai teri aawaz
ae bereham kuch to ker ehsaas

woh bahoon ke jhoole
woh nigahaien chaar hona
woh ek hi baat par
tera bar bar rona
tang ker rahi hai deed ki piyas
ae bereham kuch to ker ehsaas

tera rootth jana
mera tujhe manaana
tujhe choomna kabhi
aur kabhi gud-gudana
tadpaane lagi beetey lamhon ki aas
ae bereham kuch to ker ehsaas

sansoon ki garmyan
honton ke darmyan
sulagte huye badan
jismon ki narmya.n
jala rahe hain tere qatlana andaaz
ae bereham kuch to ker ehsaas ……!!!!


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sansoon ki garmyan
honton ke darmyan
sulagte huye badan
jismon ki narmya.n
jala rahe hain tere qatlana andaaz

ae bereham kuch to ker ehsaas ……!!!!

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Damnit .....Tu kuch tou kar ehsaaas.....

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Abey isiliye to details mein nai gaya.................


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Ab is me us bereham ki kya galti hai.......

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teri berukhiyan
laboon ki surkhiyan
aankhoon ka kajal
zulfoon ka badal
yaad aa rahi hai teri aawaz
ae bereham kuch to ker ehsaas
to yaad mat karo neend ki goli khakar sojao........

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woh bahoon ke jhoole
woh nigahaien chaar hona
woh ek hi baat par
tera bar bar rona
tang ker rahi hai deed ki piyas
ae bereham kuch to ker ehsaas
Us berehem ki photo nhi hai tumhare paas...........

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tera rootth jana
mera tujhe manaana
tujhe choomna kabhi
aur kabhi gud-gudana
tadpaane lagi beetey lamhon ki aas
ae bereham kuch to ker ehsaas
Lagta hai jaagti aanko se sapne dekh rahe ho............

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sansoon ki garmyan
honton ke darmyan
sulagte huye badan
jismon ki narmya.n
jala rahe hain tere qatlana andaaz

ae bereham kuch to ker ehsaas ……!!!!
Oooohhhhh.......no comments ye to kuch aur ehsaasaat hain

   
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tez hawa hai chand udaas

ae bereham kuch to ker ehsaas

teri berukhiyan
laboon ki surkhiyan
aankhoon ka kajal
zulfoon ka badal
yaad aa rahi hai teri aawaz
ae bereham kuch to ker ehsaas

woh bahoon ke jhoole
woh nigahaien chaar hona
woh ek hi baat par
tera bar bar rona
tang ker rahi hai deed ki piyas
ae bereham kuch to ker ehsaas

tera rootth jana
mera tujhe manaana
tujhe choomna kabhi
aur kabhi gud-gudana
tadpaane lagi beetey lamhon ki aas
ae bereham kuch to ker ehsaas

sansoon ki garmyan
honton ke darmyan
sulagte huye badan
jismon ki narmya.n
jala rahe hain tere qatlana andaaz

ae bereham kuch to ker ehsaas ……!!!!


wooow.....shaan..tum aisa bhi likhte ho?...padhkar achcha laga....great job....keep writing...


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shan jee
kisne jurm kiya aap per ............kisko rahem nahin aaya .....uff yeh bedardi zamana ...............

ehesaas achha hai
likhte rahiye
khus rahiye

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wooow.....shaan..tum aisa bhi likhte ho?...padhkar achcha laga....great job....keep writing...
wat do u mean by aisa bhi.............. lolz

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tez hawa hai chand udaas

ae bereham kuch to ker ehsaas

teri berukhiyan
laboon ki surkhiyan
aankhoon ka kajal
zulfoon ka badal
yaad aa rahi hai teri aawaz
ae bereham kuch to ker ehsaas

woh bahoon ke jhoole
woh nigahaien chaar hona
woh ek hi baat par
tera bar bar rona
tang ker rahi hai deed ki piyas
ae bereham kuch to ker ehsaas

tera rootth jana
mera tujhe manaana
tujhe choomna kabhi
aur kabhi gud-gudana
tadpaane lagi beetey lamhon ki aas
ae bereham kuch to ker ehsaas

sansoon ki garmyan
honton ke darmyan
sulagte huye badan
jismon ki narmya.n
jala rahe hain tere qatlana andaaz

ae bereham kuch to ker ehsaas ……!!!!

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awsome - 31st March 2009, 12:32 AM

haaye, ab kya kahun apki is gazhal ke baare me, mere pass shabd hi nahi hai, behad khubsurat likha hai apne, bahut simple words hai par bahut effective bhi........................keep up the good work.............

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tez hawa hai chand udaas
ae bereham kuch to ker ehsaas

teri berukhiyan
laboon ki surkhiyan
aankhoon ka kajal
zulfoon ka badal
yaad aa rahi hai teri aawaz
ae bereham kuch to ker ehsaas

woh bahoon ke jhoole
woh nigahaien chaar hona
woh ek hi baat par
tera bar bar rona
tang ker rahi hai deed ki piyas
ae bereham kuch to ker ehsaas

tera rootth jana
mera tujhe manaana
tujhe choomna kabhi
aur kabhi gud-gudana
tadpaane lagi beetey lamhon ki aas
ae bereham kuch to ker ehsaas

sansoon ki garmyan
honton ke darmyan
sulagte huye badan
jismon ki narmya.n
jala rahe hain tere qatlana andaaz
ae bereham kuch to ker ehsaas ……!!!!



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