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Kis kadar insaan ka imaan dooba hai - 11th January 2013, 06:16 PM

Kis kadar insaan ka imaan dooba hai
Apne aham ke liye doosre ka sir kaata hai

Ye kaisi duniya hai jahan vahshat hi vahshat hai
Aadmiyat ka aks aadmi ne hi jhuthlaaya hai

Jaanwar bhi ladta hai to roti ke tukde ke liye
Insaan zameen ke tukde ke lie bana darinda hai

Kya milega mazhab ke naam pe nafrat baantke
Khuda kabhi na dahshatgardon ka hua hai

Main jab kisi roz koi saaz chhedne ka sonchta hun
Usi roz dil ne deewaaron par dard paaya hai

Bahra ho chuka hai aadmi ya kaan dhank liye hain
Siwa matlabparasti ke zubaa par kuch nahi aata hai

Ho sakta hai tere chahne se aman na aaye ‘Kaash’
Par duaaen nek rakhne me aakhir kya jaata hai





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11th January 2013, 06:48 PM

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13th January 2013, 10:25 AM

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Originally Posted by @kaash View Post
Kis kadar insaan ka imaan dooba hai
Apne aham ke liye doosre ka sir kaata hai

Ye kaisi duniya hai jahan vahshat hi vahshat hai
Aadmiyat ka aks aadmi ne hi jhuthlaaya hai

Jaanwar bhi ladta hai to roti ke tukde ke liye
Insaan zameen ke tukde ke lie bana darinda hai

Kya milega mazhab ke naam pe nafrat baantke
Khuda kabhi na dahshatgardon ka hua hai

Main jab kisi roz koi saaz chhedne ka sonchta hun
Usi roz dil ne deewaaron par dard paaya hai

Bahra ho chuka hai aadmi ya kaan dhank liye hain
Siwa matlabparasti ke zubaa par kuch nahi aata hai

Ho sakta hai tere chahne se aman na aaye ‘Kaash’
Par duaaen nek rakhne me aakhir kya jaata hai



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14th January 2013, 10:57 PM

Quote:
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Kis kadar insaan ka imaan dooba hai
Apne aham ke liye doosre ka sir kaata hai

Ye kaisi duniya hai jahan vahshat hi vahshat hai
Aadmiyat ka aks aadmi ne hi jhuthlaaya hai

Jaanwar bhi ladta hai to roti ke tukde ke liye
Insaan zameen ke tukde ke lie bana darinda hai

Kya milega mazhab ke naam pe nafrat baantke
Khuda kabhi na dahshatgardon ka hua hai

Main jab kisi roz koi saaz chhedne ka sonchta hun
Usi roz dil ne deewaaron par dard paaya hai

Bahra ho chuka hai aadmi ya kaan dhank liye hain
Siwa matlabparasti ke zubaa par kuch nahi aata hai

Ho sakta hai tere chahne se aman na aaye ‘Kaash’
Par duaaen nek rakhne me aakhir kya jaata hai

kya kah sakti hoon aap ke jazbe ko

sar kata sakte hain leykin sar jhuka sakte nahin

excellent work

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