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tutta dil mera aur phir isey phir jod na saki, - 13th September 2004, 03:31 AM

tutta dil mera aur phir isey phir jod na saki,
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dekhti rahi us gali ke kone tak usko,
sochti rahi kya le gaya ,aur kya de gaya vo mujhko,

Chod diya usney haath aur me chod hi na saki,
Jeena to ek taraf tha yaaro me thi ki maar bhi na saki,

aati rahi uski yaadain jaise jaise beete din,
Raato ko na soyi me, jaagi taaro'n ko gin,

Khud se tanha rehne lagi, duniya wale dur ki baat thi,
thi bahut kader uski, bas me vo dewani thi,




Priya


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13th September 2004, 06:59 PM

aur phir isey phir jod na saki,
usney to mod liya muh apna par me mod na saki

dekhti rahi us gali ke kone tak usko,
sochti rahi kya le gaya ,aur kya de gaya vo mujhko,

Chod diya usney haath aur me chod hi na saki,
Jeena to ek taraf tha yaaro me thi ki maar bhi na saki,

aati rahi uski yaadain jaise jaise beete din,
Raato ko na soyi me, jaagi taaro'n ko gin,

Khud se tanha rehne lagi, duniya wale dur ki baat thi,
thi bahut kader uski, bas me vo dewani thi,


Priya Ji..

Pahla sher hi bahot dilkash aur umda likhaa hai… Nazar ko wahiiN rok deti hai…. Padhte padhte bahoot door tak khayaal chala gaya thaa.. apne dil ke ehsaasoN ko.. bahoot hi khoobsoorati ke saath yahaaN pesh liya hai…. Bahoot aasaan alfazoN mai aapne dil ke dard ke saath…. tareef qabul karo.... meri taraf se.. Bahoot saari..

Dil chiz hi aisa hai ki ek baar toot jaaye tou kabhi dubaara nahi jud sakta.. Bikul ek aaiene ki tarah.. aur agar jud bhi jaaye tou bhi dil mai daraar tou rah hi jaata hai… Bas pyaar mai aisa bhi hota hai.. koyi samajh jaata hai.. Koyi nahi samjhta.. aur jo samajhta hai.. gham, Tanhayi, yaadeN.. uss ke hisse mai aa jaate haiN.. KyuN ki jo pyaar karta hai wo iss ke gham se anjaan hota hai.. aur na usay saahil milta hai na manzil… fir bhi kadam badhaataa chala jaata hai. Par kisi ek baat ko lekar zindagi gujaar dena… shaayad achchaa nahi.. Kuch jyada kah gaya hooN tou ek anjaana dost samjh kar muskura dijiyegaa..

Take care..

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13th September 2004, 11:20 PM

Pyari Priya..

Bahut hi achi nazm likhhi hai tumne... Der baad aati ho, par jab bhi aati ho ek bahut hi khoobsoorat rachna ke saath aati ho..

Yeh bhi unhi mein se ek hai.

Tumhara dard na kam hua hai, aur shayad ab kabhi kam bhi na hoga.. isliye ab is baare mein kuch na kahungi.. bas itna hi.. tum housla mat haaro.. zindagi bahut lambi hai.. bahut rang hai.. ek na ek rang tumhe bhi kabhi mil jayega..

Khush raha karo!!

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14th September 2004, 10:27 AM

aadab priya ji

bohat hi umda line likhi hai aapne...
bas yahi kehna chahunga ki dard ka
aaina jaise toot gaya ho
tareef kabool kare

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14th September 2004, 02:27 PM

Priya....

her shabd dil ko chhoota hai...kise chhor du aur kise bata du...bahut bahut bahut hi khoob bariya likha hai...

tareef kabool kare...

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ASHK AANKHO ME CHHUPA KER GAM PE MUSKURA LETI HOO
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hi - 14th September 2004, 03:24 PM

Priya ji

bahut khub likha hai aapne..
kafi arshe baad aapko padh raha hoon..
likha kijiye..


Akant...


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14th September 2004, 08:03 PM

Priya SaHiBa...

KaiSi Hai AaP .. BaHuT Hi KhooBSuRaT NaZm PesH Kari Hai ... Har LafZ Ek DusRe Se KucH KaH RaHe Hai ...

Chod diya usney haath aur me chod hi na saki,
Jeena to ek taraf tha yaaro me thi ki maar bhi na saki,

aati rahi uski yaadain jaise jaise beete din,
Raato ko na soyi me, jaagi taaro'n ko gin

Ek AlaG Hi TaaR Se LikHa Hai AaP Ne ...

TaReeF QaBooL KaRe

AaP Ka DosT


ChalTa Hoon.....

AaP Ka DosT
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12th February 2005, 12:51 AM

dear myanak ji aapne sahi kaha dil tut jaaye jo jodna namunkin sa lagta hai koyi pyar me hasil kar leta hai aur koyi samajh hi nahi paata dil ki jasbaaton ko, ur words are healing and greta..thanks a lot for shairng them with me
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dear Pree_ zindagi me bahut rang hai aapne theek kaha....dard kum hoga ya nahii., dard par chod rahi hu, thanks for coming here it means a lot.
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dear raj ji thanks for appreciating my some words
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dear udas ji , thanks so much for liking these words,,!
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dear akant ji, sjukriya ada karna chahti hu aapke, thanks a lot.
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dear amritji aapne pasand kiya aur kya chahiye hame thanks so much dear aate rehna aur sehrate rehna as it means the workld........


Luv ya all Priya


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12th February 2005, 12:57 AM

Hi Priya,

Khayal achein hain...simple and nice...

Judai ka dard hota to hai hi...kyon??

Raat ko aasman mein chand ko dekha
Na jaane aaj kyon laga usse dekh
tha woh bhi mujhe dekh raha
Ya phir bus tha woh khayal uska
Jo tha mere dil ko sata raha

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hi - 12th February 2005, 01:00 AM

hello rohin dard hota to hai hi, par zindagi agar rukti to baat hi kya thi.. shayad acha hai rukti nahi varna kya haalhota hamara lolz..we are stong and thats whats important..

Raat ko aasman mein chand ko dekha
Na jaane aaj kyon laga usse dekh
tha woh bhi mujhe dekh raha
Ya phir bus tha woh khayal uska
Jo tha mere dil ko sata raha

----> ache khayal hai..i liked them simple yet meaningful..i feel this also sometimes....when lukin at the chand.

Me us nu chaand de bahana wekha, ki pata oh v usnu takdi howegi jind meriye

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12th February 2005, 02:25 AM

Wah, Priya ji...
kya gehrai hai tumhari baaton me.. Bahut hi acccha likha hai...
Dil diya tumne par wo de na saka...
Nafrat ki unhone humse, par hum ye na kar sake!

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.. - 12th February 2005, 11:19 PM

Hi Priya.

har shakh pe fal aaye, aaye yeh zaroori nahin,
har shakhs waydaa nibhae, yeh zaroori nahin,
kucch laashein nangi bhi reh jaati hain ae dost,
har laash ko kafan mil jaaye yeh zaroori nahin.

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इस भरे शहर में हम Dard-e-Sush, जो न पाया उसे भी खोते हैं!

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13th February 2005, 12:16 AM

hi priyaji

bahut khoob
main kafi time baad yahan aayi hoon
aur aate hi aapki rachna padi
behad hi khoobsuarti se likha hai aapne

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