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yun hi bas... - 13th January 2006, 01:21 AM

yeh jo dil ki dhadkhan hai
tere naam ki sargam hai..

janam janam ka saath hai ye
atoot ab apna bandhan hai

Hawas ki isme bhookh nahin
aatmaon ka ye sangam hai

patjhar si thi ram-kahani
rimjhim rimjhim sawan hai

'parwane' ka jeewan hai
ghayal dil ka marham hai
   
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Re: yun hi bas... - 13th January 2006, 09:17 AM

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Originally posted by ghayalparwana
yeh jo dil ki dhadkhan hai
tere naam ki sargam hai..

janam janam ka saath hai ye
atoot ab apna bandhan hai

Hawas ki isme bhookh nahin
aatmaon ka ye sangam hai

patjhar si thi ram-kahani
rimjhim rimjhim sawan hai

'parwane' ka jeewan hai
ghayal dil ka marham hai

yun hi bas

mere varinder,

aaj ki meri khushi shabdo mai bayaan karu to kaise?
shayed fir kaabhi kuch kah paau taarif mai... abhi to khushi batorne ka maan hai..

tumhari meena
   
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Re: yun hi bas... - 13th January 2006, 09:30 AM

Hawas ki isme bhookh nahin
aatmaon ka ye sangam hai

patjhar si thi ram-kahani
rimjhim rimjhim sawan hai

'parwane' ka jeewan hai
ghayal dil ka marham hai

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13th January 2006, 01:33 PM

patjhar si thi ram-kahani
rimjhim rimjhim sawan hai

Varinder Ji,
Saral shabdon mein itni badi baat keh jana mushkil hai... par aapke liye nahin
Yun hi likhte rahiye!


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Re: yun hi bas... - 22nd January 2006, 03:46 PM

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Originally posted by ghayalparwana
yeh jo dil ki dhadkhan hai
tere naam ki sargam hai..

janam janam ka saath hai ye
atoot ab apna bandhan hai

Hawas ki isme bhookh nahin
aatmaon ka ye sangam hai

patjhar si thi ram-kahani
rimjhim rimjhim sawan hai

'parwane' ka jeewan hai
ghayal dil ka marham hai

mere varinder,

yun hi bas.....
itni saral bhasha ... saral shabd ... k sahare pyaar ko vyakt karna ...
aisa lagta hai jaise kisi dulhan ne sringaar mai kya kiya tha to sirf mushkura di thi... aur soondarta oobhar aayi thi ...
yun hi bas... likhte rahna

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22nd January 2006, 06:31 PM

mere azeez varinder....kaise hain aap????
aapko itne dino baad padhke dil ko bahaut sukoon mila hai aaj....
aapko padhne ki khwaish bahaut hoti thi...aaj padh liya toh jaise chain mil gaya...aapka kalaam accha laga mujhe...yuhin aate rahiyega aage bhi...umeed hai aap mehfil ko apne kalaamon se roshan karte rahenge.apna khyaal rahiyega....


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