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हम "ग़ज़ल" की "धुन" और "हवाओं" की "खुशबू" कí
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हम "ग़ज़ल" की "धुन" और "हवाओं" की "खुशबू" कí - 28th December 2008, 01:33 PM

हम "ग़ज़ल" की "धुन" और "हवाओं" की "खुशबू" को महसूस कर जाया करते हैं.......

कुछ रिश्ते होते हैं "हवाओं" की तरह,
बनके "खुशबू" ज़िन्दगी मैं घुल जाया करते हैं,

कुछ शख्स होते हैं "धुन" की तरह,
बनके "ग़ज़ल" ज़िन्दगी सुरमई कर जाया करते हैं,

जाने क्यूँ जब भी ज़िक्र होता है नाम का आपके,
हम "ग़ज़ल" की "धुन" और "हवाओं" की "खुशबू" को महसूस कर जाया करते हैं.......
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Uski Shaqsiyat ko karke buland hum khudko mitate rahe,
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gazal kuch aisi hoti hain
jo do dilo ko chhu jaati hain,
kabhi dhak dhak to kabhi khamoshi ban ehsaaso mein ghul jaati hain
kabhi unka to kabhi hamara bina kuch kahe aankhon se dil ki baat bayaan kar jaati hain
hey kya bura likha hain just try kiya hain
waise mere saare poem apne aap romantic ho jaate hain
mujhe sad sa likhna nahin aata
ek baar zaroor try karungi
waise tumhari gazal kaafi achhi hain
mr nalinji
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kuch lafz mahobat ke - 31st January 2009, 07:08 PM

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हम "ग़ज़ल" की "धुन" और "हवाओं" की "खुशबू" को महसूस कर जाया करते हैं.......

कुछ रिश्ते होते हैं "हवाओं" की तरह,
बनके "खुशबू" ज़िन्दगी मैं घुल जाया करते हैं,

कुछ शख्स होते हैं "धुन" की तरह,
बनके "ग़ज़ल" ज़िन्दगी सुरमई कर जाया करते हैं,

जाने क्यूँ जब भी ज़िक्र होता है नाम का आपके,
हम "ग़ज़ल" की "धुन" और "हवाओं" की "खुशबू" को महसूस कर जाया करते हैं.......
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aap ki rachan , nazar nawaz huwi . khushi huwi ke ghazal ke liye aap ke jazbaat janoon ki had se bhi ziyadah paar hote mahsoos ho rahe hain , aor dar asal ghzal apne mahboob se guftagu karne ka hi naam hai , aor jab yeh muraad poori hoti mahsoss hoti hai tou sher dhalte hain , tab hi shayed koi shair kahtea hai,

mere samne ik mujassam ghazal hai
ghazal dekh kar main ghazal kah raha hoon ..


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keya baat hai - 31st January 2009, 07:10 PM

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gazal kuch aisi hoti hain
jo do dilo ko chhu jaati hain,
kabhi dhak dhak to kabhi khamoshi ban ehsaaso mein ghul jaati hain
kabhi unka to kabhi hamara bina kuch kahe aankhon se dil ki baat bayaan kar jaati hain
hey kya bura likha hain just try kiya hain
waise mere saare poem apne aap romantic ho jaate hain
mujhe sad sa likhna nahin aata
ek baar zaroor try karungi
waise tumhari gazal kaafi achhi hain
mr nalinji
tc
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aap likhiye tou sahi , ham bhi pad>hein keya hai woh?

intezaar hai aap ki ghazal ka .


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dilshaad ji, bahut accha laga. apke samay ke liye behad shukriyaa



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Uski Har "Uff" pe hum apni jaan lutate rahe,
Uski Shaqsiyat ko karke buland hum khudko mitate rahe,
Raahe-e-mohobbat me hamne kuch yun paya sila wafa ka,
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हम "ग़ज़ल" की "धुन" और "हवाओं" की "खुशबू" को महसूस कर जाया करते हैं.......

कुछ रिश्ते होते हैं "हवाओं" की तरह,
बनके "खुशबू" ज़िन्दगी मैं घुल जाया करते हैं,

कुछ शख्स होते हैं "धुन" की तरह,
बनके "ग़ज़ल" ज़िन्दगी सुरमई कर जाया करते हैं,

जाने क्यूँ जब भी ज़िक्र होता है नाम का आपके,
हम "ग़ज़ल" की "धुन" और "हवाओं" की "खुशबू" को महसूस कर जाया करते हैं.......
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Nalin ji ! aapki ye Ghazal ek khaas rishte ka bahut khubsurti se ehsaas karati lagti hai...acha laga padhkar...aise hi likhte rahiyega......

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naresh ji behad shukriya, is shayari ko padne ke liye........... bas apki tareef milti rahi toh yunhi likhta rahunga.................... bahut bahut shukriya....
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Nalin ji ! aapki ye Ghazal ek khaas rishte ka bahut khubsurti se ehsaas karati lagti hai...acha laga padhkar...aise hi likhte rahiyega......

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Uski Har "Uff" pe hum apni jaan lutate rahe,
Uski Shaqsiyat ko karke buland hum khudko mitate rahe,
Raahe-e-mohobbat me hamne kuch yun paya sila wafa ka,
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sanjeev ji, tareef ke liye bahut bahut shukriya..................
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Uski Har "Uff" pe hum apni jaan lutate rahe,
Uski Shaqsiyat ko karke buland hum khudko mitate rahe,
Raahe-e-mohobbat me hamne kuch yun paya sila wafa ka,
woh dete rahe zakhm pe zakhm aur ham muskurate rahe




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toh apko yaad aa gayi muskaan ji.................. waise ap ho kahan ajakal, SDC pe bhi nahi aati ho???? Naaraz ho kya hamse???
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gazal kuch aisi hoti hain
jo do dilo ko chhu jaati hain,
kabhi dhak dhak to kabhi khamoshi ban ehsaaso mein ghul jaati hain
kabhi unka to kabhi hamara bina kuch kahe aankhon se dil ki baat bayaan kar jaati hain
hey kya bura likha hain just try kiya hain
waise mere saare poem apne aap romantic ho jaate hain
mujhe sad sa likhna nahin aata
ek baar zaroor try karungi
waise tumhari gazal kaafi achhi hain
mr nalinji
tc
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Uski Har "Uff" pe hum apni jaan lutate rahe,
Uski Shaqsiyat ko karke buland hum khudko mitate rahe,
Raahe-e-mohobbat me hamne kuch yun paya sila wafa ka,
woh dete rahe zakhm pe zakhm aur ham muskurate rahe




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23rd May 2009, 04:19 AM

कुछ रिश्ते होते हैं "हवाओं" की तरह,
बनके "खुशबू" ज़िन्दगी मैं घुल जाया करते हैं,


kuchh riste aise hai jinhe sirf mehsush kiya jata hai
Dil se dil ka rista hai vo

bahot achha likha hai aapne
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bahut sahi kaha apne diya jee.................., wakai kuch rishte hote hai aise jinhe sirf mehsus kiya jaat hai........................
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kuchh riste aise hai jinhe sirf mehsush kiya jata hai
Dil se dil ka rista hai vo

bahot achha likha hai aapne
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Uski Har "Uff" pe hum apni jaan lutate rahe,
Uski Shaqsiyat ko karke buland hum khudko mitate rahe,
Raahe-e-mohobbat me hamne kuch yun paya sila wafa ka,
woh dete rahe zakhm pe zakhm aur ham muskurate rahe




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