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hamari gazlon me bhi ab vo aane lage.
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Love hamari gazlon me bhi ab vo aane lage. - 16th October 2016, 04:48 PM

Jawan kya hue jara Vo muh firane lage
rukhsaar pe Vo hizab ka pehra bithane lage.

Jhalak ki khwais liye phirte hai galiyon me.
khidki par bhi apni Vo ab parda lagane lage.

Na samje hamari najron ka takaaja kuch aur tha.
hamko bhi ab vo naajo adaa dikhlaane lage.

haya ka aana to laajim tha shabab der mein
apni kamsin jawaani pe ab vo ithlane lage.

diwaano ko sataana to husn ki aadat sahi
hamko bhi ab vo be vajah sataane lage.

gali choraahon par jo fikre kaste rahe.
unko hi ab vo ja shokhiyaan dikhane lage.

rusk kare mehtaab bhi husne jamaal ka.
ab vo kaha julfo ki ghataa bikhraane lage.

ye must najron ka jaam ab na pilaao aise.
K hos aane me bhi ab zamaane lagen.

ajab maikashi sawaar hai sahar me SHAKIR.
hamaari gazlon me bhi ab vo aane lage.
   
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Jawan kya hue jara Vo muh firane lage
rukhsaar pe Vo hizab ka pehra bithane lage.

Jhalak ki khwais liye phirte hai galiyon me.
khidki par bhi apni Vo ab parda lagane lage.

Na samje hamari najron ka takaaja kuch aur tha.
hamko bhi ab vo naajo adaa dikhlaane lage.

ye must najron ka jaam ab na pilaao aise.
K hos aane me bhi ab zamaane lagen.

ajab maikashi sawaar hai sahar me SHAKIR.
hamaari gazlon me bhi ab vo aane lage.



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