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Ab naam mohabbat ke, ilzaam to aaya hai,
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2nd August 2008, 11:06 AM
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zamane se darna kaya tujhe naseeb banaya hai" -sunita virender  .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए... 
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2nd August 2008, 12:19 PM
ASHK AANKHON MERI DEKH KAR KHUDKO TADAPAATI KYUN HO,
DIL BHAR AATA HAI TO MUJHKO RULAATI KYUN HO, JINDGI BHAR K LIYE TU TU MUJHE MIL NA SAKOGI, TO FIR DOOR JA KAR PAAS BULAATI KYUN HO.... NOT FULLY MINE..... |
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2nd August 2008, 12:22 PM
Hum Jaise Barbaad Dilo Ka Jeena Kya Or Marna Kya,
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2nd August 2008, 02:43 PM
"tujhe paane ke liye khuda se takrauNgi,
mohabat ki hai akhri dum tak nibhauNgi" -sunita virender .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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2nd August 2008, 03:07 PM
Sookh Jaatay hai lab, lafz miltay nahi
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"mohabat kabhi kisi ko seekhai nahi jati, yeh aag khud lag jati hai lagai nahi jati" -sunita virender .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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2nd August 2008, 05:49 PM
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hai koi chahne wala mera bhi duniya mein.... |
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2nd August 2008, 07:02 PM
Naam tera rehta hai har pal inn labo par Pehra tera hi hai mere khwaabo par Quote:
 Mohabbat ke baad mohabbat mumkin hai faraz. Magar toot ke chahna sirf ek baar hota hai Goodbye SDC Diya |
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2nd August 2008, 07:05 PM
Unki ek yaad bechain kar jaati hai Har cheez mein unki soorat nazar aati hai Aisa haal kiya unhone hamara Ke neend aati hai toh aankh bura maan jati hai .NM Quote:
Mohabbat ke baad mohabbat mumkin hai faraz. Magar toot ke chahna sirf ek baar hota hai Goodbye SDC Diya |
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2nd August 2008, 07:15 PM
Shukraguzar hoon tera mein, intezar jo tune ab tak hai kiya Pyar mila itna tujhse, saara zamana humne bhula hi "DIYA".......NM Quote:
Mohabbat ke baad mohabbat mumkin hai faraz. Magar toot ke chahna sirf ek baar hota hai Goodbye SDC Diya |
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3rd August 2008, 06:03 PM
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jab apna saya tumhara saath chor de umid rakhna mere saath ki ......Ek Diya jalake Mohabbat ke baad mohabbat mumkin hai faraz. Magar toot ke chahna sirf ek baar hota hai Goodbye SDC Diya |
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just a reaction ..technical..Zainy -
3rd August 2008, 06:29 PM
Bayan-e-ishk hota ishk-e-bayan...jis ne bhi likha hai..GALAT hai..
Bayan-e-ishk yaani..ishk ka bayaan...aur ishk-e-bayan ka matlab hua Bayan ka ishk.. Sochiye!auron se,jinhe sachmuch urdu shayri ka theek se pata ho..Baaqi phir.. Agar meri bina maangi salah se aap badzan(naraz) hain,to Sorry. magar aakhir mein aap ko aur clear karne ke liye main,aap ka thoda dhyaan,neeche ki lines par chaahoonga.. ye hain aap ki bheji lines: Sookh Jaatay hai lab, lafz miltay nahi Hoota nahi humse ishk-e-bayaan Unhay kaise bataa doon dil ki lagi… Kayse sikhaaoon aankhoo ki zubaan aur ye thodi her pher ke saath nayi lines..(just to convey the point clearly) Sookh jate hain lab,honth hilte nahin ishk ka humse hota nahi hai bayaan kiase dil ki lagi un ke aage kahen kaise aankhon ko apni banaayen zuban. Prashant vasl Quote:
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3rd August 2008, 06:33 PM
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3rd August 2008, 06:46 PM
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thanks a lot prashant ji....bura manne ka to koi sawaal hi payda nahi hota....ham to yahan kuch seekhne ke liye hi aaye hai...hame khushi hain ke apne hamein hamari ghalti samjhayi....lekin yeh sher hamara nahin hai...shayed jisne bhi likha hai..."zubaan"word se rhyme karne ke liye ishk-e-bayaan likha hoga....ya phir wo "ishk ka bayaan" ...likhna chahta tha ho.....hamse ghalti ye hogayi hamne theek se is baat par ghaor nahi kiya...aage se dhyan rakhenge... thanks once again zainy |
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3rd August 2008, 11:25 PM
Thanks Zainy
I am glad that i could be of some help.. keep it up.achchi shayri likhne waalon se zyada wo log achche hote hain jo achcha sher sanajhte hain..achcha padhiye aur phir khud ba khud aap achcha likhne bhi lag sakti hain.. all the best. prsashant vasl |
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3rd August 2008, 11:37 PM
AAYE THE TO LOGON NE SEENE SE LAGAAYA THA
MEHFIL SE UTHE HAIN TO HAR AANKH PARAI HAI. by: PRASHANT VASL |
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4th August 2008, 01:56 PM
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tu bewafa hai ya yeh sarri mahfil harjai hai" -sunita virender .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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4th August 2008, 02:29 PM
jinke yaad main hum raat bhar so na paye wohi poochte hain tum kaal sapno main kyun nehin aaye .......? Mohabbat ke baad mohabbat mumkin hai faraz. Magar toot ke chahna sirf ek baar hota hai Goodbye SDC Diya |
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4th August 2008, 03:16 PM
khud kaise ye faisla karoon..kyon ki:
CHAHTA HAI AADMI,HAR EK KO PEHCHAN-NA KIS QADAR DUSHWAAR HAI APNI HAQEEQAT JAN-NA. by PRASHANT VASL |
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bholi si surat wale vaise to bahut phirte haiN" -NM .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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4th August 2008, 06:29 PM
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Milta rahe jahan ko ujala diya jale Dil ki hai aarzoo ke hamesha diya jale.......... |
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4th August 2008, 07:46 PM
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kabhi tum bhi humse youn milakaro itezar ki Diya ab hum jalaye rakhe hain Mohabbat ke baad mohabbat mumkin hai faraz. Magar toot ke chahna sirf ek baar hota hai Goodbye SDC Diya |
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4th August 2008, 09:23 PM
Na jhilmila teri ankhieN keh mer na jaaoN
Nigah-e-Qatil ka waar sehan ker na paaoN Tere Jaado-e-husn ne behkaya hai iskader darrta hoN keh badnaam tujhe ker na jaaoN kya baat hai mujeeb bhai aaj gaur kiya to tum ko bhi khoob paya sirf hamaari taareef karte raho itna accha likhte ho aur kya chahiye zara hamaare liye na sahi lekin likho dost |
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5th August 2008, 02:04 AM
Meri Gali wichon ek nawab langda
kar k kala naqab langda Ya fair sano O waikhda nai Ya sajno Pee k Sharb langda. |
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5th August 2008, 12:47 PM
Kahi.n savera hoga to kahi.n shaam hogi,
Meri har khushi tere naam hogi. Ek baar ae dost kuch maang ke to dekh, honto pe hansi aur ye zindagi tere naam hogi....! |
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5th August 2008, 04:48 PM
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"Chandni raat mein jab tumhe dekha tha, saba bhi tab kuch sargoshi kar rahi thi, woh 2-2 channd dekh kar pashemaaN thi, mujhe bhi laga asmaan ka chaand dokha tha" -sunita virender .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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5th August 2008, 05:04 PM
ye ishk mhumein aaj kis mukaam par laya hai...
roye jab bewafai mein to labon par usi ka naam aaya hai.... |
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5th August 2008, 05:07 PM
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uth uth ke tera naam pukarte rahe raat bhar" -sunita virender .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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5th August 2008, 05:14 PM
[quote=tishna;299318]Na jhilmila teri ankhieN keh mer na jaaoN
Nigah-e-Qatil ka waar sehan ker na paaoN Tere Jaado-e-husn ne behkaya hai iskader darrta hoN keh badnaam tujhe ker na jaaoN Betab tamannao ki kasak rahne do, manzil KO pane ki talab rahne do, aap bhale hi raho dur nazro se, par band palko me apni jhalak rahne Do... Mohabbat ke baad mohabbat mumkin hai faraz. Magar toot ke chahna sirf ek baar hota hai Goodbye SDC Diya |
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THODI WAFA BHI KARNI THI AGAR HUMEIN DIL SE MOHABBAT KI HOTI... DETE KOI BHI SAJA HUMEIN MANJOOR THI USKE BAAD, AGAR HUMNE APSE KABHI KOI SHIKAYAT BHI KI HOTI.... FIR YAAD AAYI AAJ WO BEWAFA SANAM..................... |
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5th August 2008, 05:18 PM
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hello ...nice 2 meet u dear |
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khud ko unke pyar main faana kar chuki hun ab to udhar ki jindegi main jee rahi hun Mohabbat ke baad mohabbat mumkin hai faraz. Magar toot ke chahna sirf ek baar hota hai Goodbye SDC Diya |
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5th August 2008, 05:23 PM
jo keh na sake wo fasana yaad aata hai guzra hua dilkash jamana yaad aata hai jab husn se ishq takraya tha kabhi ghayal hua tha ek parwana yaad aata hai dil se mohabbat ke tufaan uthe the jab aankhon ka sapne sajana yaad aata hai kasturi jaise din mehakte the mere raaton ka gungunana yaad aata hai aankhon ka mil kar jhuk jana nahin bhula hothon ka thar_tharana yaad aata hai mera usko kankhiyon se dekhna baar baar aur uska wo muskurana yaad aata hai raaton ko tanha yaad mein kisiki... dhuan udata ek deewana yaad aata hai |
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5th August 2008, 05:25 PM
chupaye dil me gamo ka jahan baithe hai
hum teri yaad me bas bejawan baithe hai ye baat aur hai ki hum manjil tak na pahuch sake magar hum saare kante bhare rahon ko chan baithe hai aur gardish me takdir hame kya satayegi luta ke ishq me naamonisan baithe hai ek lafjon mohabbat hi dil ka dushman hai jise sariyat maan baithe hai. |
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5th August 2008, 05:27 PM
Ehsaason ke samandar mein
Dard ki lehron par Aansoo behne lagte hein teri yaad mein To dil poochta hai mujh se ZINDAGI TU KOUN HAI Jab dil ko tod kar,mujh ko thukra kar Dilbar is dil ko hazaar zakhm deta hai To dil poochta hai mujh se ZINDAGI TU KOUN HAI Tarasti aankhon ko Bechain dil ko Jab wo tadpa jaata hai Mohabbat ka jab koi anjaam nahi milta h Bhavna: Tarasti aankhon ko Bechain dil ko Jab wo tadpa jaata hai Mohabbat ka jab koi anjaam nahi milta hai To dil poochta hai mujh se ^ZINDAGI TU KOUN HAI Hum ne to jaana tha zindagi khoobsurat hai,zindagi ek suhaana sapna, zindagi mohabbat ka doosra naam hai Jab ki haqeeqat mein sirf gham milta hai To dil poochta hai mujh se ZINDAGI TU KOUN HAI Zindagi kyon aati ho tum Har baar koi naya naam liye Har baar chali aati ho tum ghamon ka saagar liye Jaana hai kahan tujhe Ab tu bata zindagi tu koun hai |
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5th August 2008, 05:28 PM
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Kabhi jo apne berukhi se hame ghayal karte the! Aaj apne chahat bhare nazro se dil me dastak diye ja rahe hai.. Mohabbat ke baad mohabbat mumkin hai faraz. Magar toot ke chahna sirf ek baar hota hai Goodbye SDC Diya |
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