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Jab Sari Duniya Soti Hai Hum Chand Se bateiN Karte HaiN .. -
15th August 2003, 09:13 PM
DostoN Aksar Chand Jaisi ChizeiN Sirf Dekhne ke liye hoti haiN Dil lagane ke liye nahi ..
Jab Sari Duniya Soti Hai Hum Chand Se bateiN Karte HaiN
Ek khwaB haiN Jo In aankhoN me Har Roz Sajaya karte HaiN
Vo Raat Kabhi to aayegi Jab Chand Hume Mil Jayega
Uss Raat Ko aksar Soch ke Hum Har Raat Guzara karte HaiN
Ye Chand Kabhi Chup Jata hai Badal me Rooth ke Humse Jo
Hum AasooN Bhar kar aankhoN me Ro Ro ke pukara karte HaiN
Ek Roz Kabhi To aayega Jab Humse Nahi Roothega Ye
Ye Soch ke Ab Iss Chand ko Hum har Roz manaya karte HaiN
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waah -
15th August 2003, 10:19 PM
kshitiz dost,
bahot hasin...........
waise bhi chaand khud hi apne aap maie itna hasin hai k oose jab kavita par paya jaaye tab kavita ki roshni ki baat hi kuchh aur ho jaati hai....
Jab Sari Duniya Soti Hai Hum Chand Se bateiN Karte HaiN
Ek khwaB haiN Jo In aankhoN me Har Roz Sajaya karte HaiN
Vo Raat Kabhi to aayegi Jab Chand Hume Mil Jayega
Uss Raat Ko aksar Soch ke Hum Har Raat Guzara karte HaiN
Ye Chand Kabhi Chup Jata hai Badal me Rooth ke Humse Jo
Hum AasooN Bhar kar aankhoN me Ro Ro ke pukara karte HaiN
Ek Roz Kabhi To aayega Jab Humse Nahi Roothega Ye
Ye Soch ke Ab Iss Chand ko Hum har Roz manaya karte HaiN
yah soch ke ab chand ko roj manaya karte hai.... waahhhhhh
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hi -
15th August 2003, 11:07 PM
Ek Roz Kabhi To aayega Jab Humse Nahi Roothega Ye
Ye Soch ke Ab Iss Chand ko Hum har Roz manaya karte HaiN
wah kya khoob likha hai.....bahut hi achha..........
inka to har andaaz naya hota hai.........
jis per hum jaison ka dil fidaa hota hai.......
.chaa jaati hai ajeeb si kasish dil mein...........
jab pesh -e khidmat kshitiz ka kalaam hota hai
daad ke saath.....
aapki dost..
pari
Chadha hai aaj bhi uska Rang, jisne kabhi Ranga hi nahi :-)
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Hi -
15th August 2003, 11:23 PM
Khitiz ji, bahaut dino baad hamari mulkaat hui, sahi mai aapne bahaut khoob likah hai, aise hi likhte rahiye. Sabse badhiya lines yh lagi.
Jab Sari Duniya Soti Hai Hum Chand Se bateiN Karte HaiN
Ek khwaB haiN Jo In aankhoN me Har Roz Sajaya karte HaiN
Bahaut khoob uhin sapne sajate rahiye.
Luv
Rimjhim
"It takes a minute to have a crush on someone, an hour to like someone, a day to love someone, but it takes a lifetime to forget someone..."
Isn't that true??? ;-)
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hi -
16th August 2003, 11:19 AM
hi Khitiz ji
Jab Sari Duniya Soti Hai Hum Chand Se bateiN Karte HaiN
Ek khwaB haiN Jo In aankhoN me Har Roz Sajaya karte HaiN
apne chand ke liye jo baatein kahi hai bhut hi khoobsurt lafjoin ka istemaal kiya hai apne .
bhut khoob
yuhi chand se baatein kar aap chaand ko paa le inhi ummedoin ke saath
sakhi
byeeeeeeee
कुछ ऐसे पल जिनको संजोना है ,
शब्दों में पिरोना है , जिससे वो हमारी यादों में महकते रहे
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b ahot khub -
16th August 2003, 12:01 PM
Ye Chand Kabhi Chup Jata hai Badal me Rooth ke Humse Jo
Hum AasooN Bhar kar aankhoN me Ro Ro ke pukara karte HaiN
wah bahot khub likha hai
Chand se ji bhar ke bateen karo sunta hai tumhara dil
man ko ajeeb sa sukun milta hai hasta hogo tumhara dil
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16th August 2003, 01:48 PM
Dear Kshitiz, Wah. Aapka yeh shayri dil ko choo gayi hein.
Keya kehdiya aapne. Bohot khub, waise Pyaar agar ho toh yehi toh hota hein. Unko toh hum aise hi pukarte hein, hein na?
Beautiful. Mafhi chahungi ke mein pehle nehi reply kiya.
Thanks. Take care. God bless.
Shimul.
Mujhe teri mohabbat ka sahara milgaya hota,
agar tofha nehi ati kinara mil gaya hota
Mujhe teri mohabbat ka sahara mil gaya hota!!
Sahi kaha?
*Aapni Parwaaz-e-Takhayyull Hain Zamane Se Juda
Jiss Jagah Koyi Na Pahuncha Wahaan Tak Pahunche
Main Samajhta Huun Harr Dil Mein Khuda Rehta Hain
Mera Paigam Mohabbat Hain Jaahan Tak Pahunche**
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Re: Jab Sari Duniya Soti Hai Hum Chand Se bateiN Karte HaiN .. -
16th August 2003, 01:52 PM
Jab Sari Duniya Soti Hai Hum Chand Se bateiN Karte HaiN
Ek khwaB haiN Jo In aankhoN me Har Roz Sajaya karte HaiN
hi kshitiz
bahot pyare khayalat hai...chaand jaise hi nirmal aur paakiza.aise hi likhte rahiye...hamari shubhkamnaye sadev aap ke saath hai....mashoor shaayar Indeevar ki chand line yaad aa gayi...
chaand milta nahin sabko sansaar mein
hai diya hi bahot roshni ke liye....
-Manoj Kureel
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16th August 2003, 02:40 PM
Manoj Jee, waise yeh toh ab gazal yea gana bole ban chuke hein.
Pehla line yeh hein, Chorde sari duniya kisike liye,
yeh munasifh nehi aadmi ke liye.................
Yeh gana zaroor suniyega. Mujhe toh bohot achha lagta hein.
Waqt jiyada nehi tha mere paas nehi toh mein aur bhi likhti.
Thanks. Take care. God bless.
Shimul.
*Aapni Parwaaz-e-Takhayyull Hain Zamane Se Juda
Jiss Jagah Koyi Na Pahuncha Wahaan Tak Pahunche
Main Samajhta Huun Harr Dil Mein Khuda Rehta Hain
Mera Paigam Mohabbat Hain Jaahan Tak Pahunche**
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Hi -
16th August 2003, 06:30 PM
Khitiz ....waah har bar ki tarah..ek aur lajwaaB kalaam...bhai ap itana achha kese likhte hoo....sach mai bohot khubsurt zehaniyat ke malik hai ap..!!!!!bass yu hii hamesha likhte raho aur hum jese dostoN ke karib rahoo....tafir ke sath chalta hu...
yaar ap ne chaand ke bare mai ap ray sahi kayam kii hai....woh sirf durr se dekhne ki chiz hotii hai...
kabhi ek sher likha thaa hume chaand ke mutalikh joo aaj ap ko sunate hai...
Chaand ko jab bhii chhuNa chaha
Hotii hai mere DIL jalaN kyoN.......
Jindagi se to khair shikvaa tha,
muddato mout ne bhi tarsaaya hame..
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16th August 2003, 09:00 PM
wah........!!!!!!!!!!!
bahut khoob likha hai. bahut hi khoob likha hai.
"chaand ko to guroor hai ki uske paas noor hai
hum kis par guroor karen humara chand hi humse door hai"
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16th August 2003, 11:05 PM
Dear Avi Jee, fikar na kare. Aapka chand bhi Allah Karega ke aapke paas hi honge. Mein toh duwa kar rahi hu na ab toh dekhna ke bohot jaldee woh aapke paas hogi.
Waise ek baat hein, mein sochti hu ke aap larke log thorisi na samajh ho. Yea toh bewafa ka naam dene meh aap logoko waqt nehi lagta hein aur duriya bhi bardasht nehi karpate hein.
Uski bhi toh kuch sochiyega, kyu?
Thanks. Take care. God bless.
Shimul.
Yeh Pyaar woh Pyaar hein jise jo Ruh meh basne wale hote hein!!
*Aapni Parwaaz-e-Takhayyull Hain Zamane Se Juda
Jiss Jagah Koyi Na Pahuncha Wahaan Tak Pahunche
Main Samajhta Huun Harr Dil Mein Khuda Rehta Hain
Mera Paigam Mohabbat Hain Jaahan Tak Pahunche**
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Bahut achhe -
18th August 2003, 12:16 PM
Kshitiz ji aapki ye post pasand aai, socha kuchh reply karooN, so pesh kar raha hooN-(umeed hai bura nahi maaneiNge)
Kabhi Chaand ka dard bhi samjho
Kuchh uski mushkileiN bhi pehchaano,
Mohobbat or sirf paane ki khwahisheiN?
Ey Dil Diye jaane ke hunar ko bhi Jano.
Chaand
Sachh bolne ka hausla to, hum bhi rakhte haiN lekin
Anjaam sochkar, aksar khaamosh hi reh jaate haiN.
- Chaand
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18th August 2003, 04:32 PM
Meena Ji ..
Chand To Tareef ke kabil Hai Hi .. Isme koi shaQ nahi Hai Bas chand Alfaaz nikal aaaye Humare Zehan ss Tareef me ..
Shukriya farmana Chahta HuN Aapke keemti WaQt ke liye
Pari JI ..
Tareef AdayGi ke ye Andaaz Bhi Bahut khoob Hai ..
Aapke in keemti alfaazoN ka Eihsan Mand Ho Gaye Hum ..
Apna khyaal Rakhiye .. Aur
Likhti Rahiye YooN Hi ..
Rimjhim Ji ..
Mulakat Jiyada To nahi haaN kuch Der baad Zuror ho rahi hai .. Aap kaisi haiN .. Aapko Isse padh kar achha laga Jaan kar hume bhi bahut achha laga
tareef ke liye bahut bahut shukriya
Sakhi JI ..
Aapki Dua ke liye Bahut shukrGuzar huN
Aapne bhi Jo chand nihayti khoobsurat alfaaz Istemal kiye haiN Shukriya ada karna chahunga
Isi tarah se likhte rahiye
Apna khyal rakhiye
Meeta Ji ..
Shukriya Tareef ke liye ..
Aapne apna waQt nikala shukriya kabul farmaiye . .
Shimul Ji sahi pahchana aapne ..
UNhe bhi hum aise hi pukarte haiN Aapki nigah bahut gahri hai ..
Pahle bhi kah chuka huN muafi jaise lafz zuban pe naa laya ki jiye
Iss Zahmat ki vazah kya ho sakti hai
Apna khyal rakhiye ..
Manoj Ji ..
aapki tareef ka bahut bahut shukriya ..
Bahut khobsurat ashaar farmaya aapne abhi .. Aapne waQt nikala Humare Liye ..
Shukriya kabul farmaiye ..
Sanju Bhai
Hum to yooN hi kareeb rahenge Bas aap sath me rahiye ..
bahut sahi kaha Sanju Bhai ..
Chaand ko jab bhii chhuNa chaha
Hotii hai mere DIL jalaN kyoN
Bahut achhe
Likhte Rahiye Bhai
Apna khyaal rakhiye
allahabadrptds Ji ..
Kafi achha sher yaad dilaya aapne Mujhe ye kafi pasand hai ..
tareef ke liye bahut bahut shukriya ..
Aji Chaand Sahab
Bura kyoN manenge Aap kaisi bateiN bateiN kar rahe haiN balki khushi hogi ki aapne yahaN tavajjo di .. Aakhir ye post bhi to aapke naam se milti julti hai ..
Kabhi Chaand ka dard bhi samjho
Kuchh uski mushkileiN bhi pehchaano,
Mohobbat or sirf paane ki khwahisheiN?
Ey Dil Diye jaane ke hunar ko bhi Jano.
Chaand
Bahut khoob farmaya aapne .. MAIN KUCH URZ KARU
Mohabbat Thi kisi Se To DarD Se Dosti kar Li
Mila Na Chand To pyale Se Dosti kar Li
Laga Vo Har Sitara Jo Chand Ke Kareeb
To uss Sitare Se Dosti kar Li
Tareef farmane ka behad shukrGuzar huN
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18th August 2003, 09:30 PM
Dear Kshitiz, wah keya baat kaha hein aapne. Bohot khub.
Ha jee yeh "nazare" dilki nazar hi hein jo paas hein, baas aur keya.
Aap keise hein? Thikh toh hein ke nehi? Aaj kaal kafhi masrufh lagte hein. Chale jab waqt mile toh likhna. Thanks.
Aapna khayal rakhiyega. God bless.
Shimul.
*Aapni Parwaaz-e-Takhayyull Hain Zamane Se Juda
Jiss Jagah Koyi Na Pahuncha Wahaan Tak Pahunche
Main Samajhta Huun Harr Dil Mein Khuda Rehta Hain
Mera Paigam Mohabbat Hain Jaahan Tak Pahunche**
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19th August 2003, 10:12 AM
hi shimul ji
shukriya ki aap ko bhi yeh gaana bahot pasand hai...purane hindi ganon ki baat hi kuch aur hai....meine pehle hi mention kar diya tha ki yeh mashoor shayar Indeevar ke alfaaz hai...film ka naam hai Sraswatichandra.
-manoj
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19th August 2003, 01:57 PM
Manoj Jee, how are you? I hope you are well.
Mein thikh hu aur mujhe yeh gana achha lagta hein ish liye toh pata chalgaya, hein na?
Aapko meine kuch aise toh nehi keha! Aap mere baate samajhte nehi shayed. Well what to do. Thanks for reply.
Take care. God bless.
Shimul.
*Aapni Parwaaz-e-Takhayyull Hain Zamane Se Juda
Jiss Jagah Koyi Na Pahuncha Wahaan Tak Pahunche
Main Samajhta Huun Harr Dil Mein Khuda Rehta Hain
Mera Paigam Mohabbat Hain Jaahan Tak Pahunche**
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chand -
19th August 2003, 06:53 PM
chand say baat karna khataray ki ghanthi hai meray bhai
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20th August 2003, 05:57 PM
bahot achha lika hai
cool man
aaise hi likte raho
aap ka dost
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22nd August 2003, 05:01 PM
Shimul ji ..
masrufiyat to hai hi .. khair iss masrufiyat me bhi waQt nikal hi lete haiN .. khair aap bataiye kaisi haiN ..
Anshaman Ji ..
Khatra To har jagah hai aur kahiN nahi hai .. Ya kah sakte haiN ki khatra Vo Hai Jo sirf aur sirf Humare Dil ko mahsoos hota hai .. kabhi kuch kho jane ka khatra kabhi kisi se door ho jane ka khatra kabhi kisi ki narazgi ka khatra ..
HaQikat ye hai ki Jo hona hota hai usse koi rok nahi sakta hum chaheiN lakh khatro se bacha bacha kar chaleiN khud ko ..
Aapka javab padh kar bahut achha laga
Apna khyal rakhiye ..
Aap Ka Dost ..
Ji TAreef ke liye bahut bahut shukriya ..
Koshish karta rahunga
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