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tere pyar nay rulaia humay rona na aata thaa,....... - 23rd June 2006, 06:22 PM
ek gilla ussay jiskay seenay main dil nahi........


tere pyar nay rulaia humay rona na aata thaa,
girkay humnay jana humay sambhlna na aata thaa....

tere pyar kay sahary banaia thaa aashia maine,
mujhay koi aashiana banana na aata thaa......

maloom hota jo anjaam-e-mohabat to na kartay,
tunay sikhaia humko dil lagana na aata thaa.......

tu bata kaya kami rahi meri mohabat main,
kaya mujhay wada karkay bhulana na aata thaa.....

zamanay nay khub lagaia mere zakhmo pay namak,
mujhay zakham khakay chhupana na aata thaa.....

mere dard ka afsana ik mazak ban kay reh gaya,
haal-e-dil apna mujhay sunana na aata thaa......

is liye tanhai or andhray main jee raha hoon,
mujhay koi naya chiraag jalana na aata thaa.....

sapno kay saath bikhar gaya'veer' ka wajood bhee,
toofano say humay khud ko bachana na aata thaa.......


appkay jabaab ka muntzir.........appka raj.........


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23rd June 2006, 10:22 PM
aisa lagta hai aapko padh kar ki kitna kuuch aap likhna chahte ho ...aur kaafi zyada gehra aur accha likhte ho aap,likhte rehiyega...

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hi - 25th June 2006, 03:37 AM
hi veer

Excellent bahote khoob. lagta hia hamare dost ke andare bahote gahrai hia. jahase itne gahre share ate hai keep it up. and keep your pain away from you.

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27th June 2006, 03:32 PM
really nice!

but i think u sud replace yourself in shayri e dard for this. wat do you say?

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ur right - 27th June 2006, 04:15 PM
app theek kehtay ho.....appko meri poetry achi lagi so thx again......

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shukria - 30th June 2006, 03:35 PM
shukria ruchika ji jo appko yeh gazal achi laggi........raj....

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shukria - 30th June 2006, 03:36 PM
muskaan ji app ko raj ki gazal achi lagi so raj tahay dil say appka shukar guzaar hai.......

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shukria - 30th June 2006, 03:37 PM
tabbsaum ji mere paas alfaaz nahi hai jo app mere reply pay i.....or meri gazal ko apni nazron say guzara app ka bhut bhut shukria............raj...........

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frnd 4ever - 2nd July 2006, 02:18 PM
hi raj,m sultana,,aap ne hamari shayri pasand ki thi,but u kw aapki shayri hmmmmm wooooooow...itna achha laikhte hain aap really impressive,,,ALLAH AAPKO AUR TARRAKKI DE,AAMIN,

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3rd July 2006, 03:41 PM
tu bata kaya kami rahi meri mohabat main,
kaya mujhay wada karkay bhulana na aata thaa.....

zamanay nay khub lagaia mere zakhmo pay namak,
mujhay zakham khakay chhupana na aata thaa.....

is liye tanhai or andhray main jee raha hoon,
mujhay koi naya chiraag jalana na aata thaa.....


Hello Raj

bahut khoob. yeh chand shayer to dil ko chu gaye.
yu likhtey raho, aur sab ki mubarakbaad sametey raho.

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shukria - 6th July 2006, 11:00 AM
sunita ji app nay raj ko sacchi shayar bana diya.....maine to soacha thaa ki do chaar gustakhiya karounga or laut jaounga kiyoki meri shairy main dam to hai nahi ....lakin app nay raj ko shayar bana diya .......raj tahay dil say appka shukarguzaar hai.........raj..........

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shukria - 14th July 2006, 11:19 AM
sultana ji app meri post par i or mere qalaam ko pasand kiya mere qalaam ki keemat barahi meri hosla afzai ki so raj tahe dil say appka shukarguzaar hai......raj.......

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Hmmmmm - 15th July 2006, 01:00 AM
Veer ji, Aap itna achha itna gehra likhte hain k dil ke taar jhanjhanaa jate hain aur dil sochne par majboor ho jata hai ......aapke kalaam main itna dard hota hai k main bht emotional ho jati hoon aur lagta hai kisi din aansoo bhi nikal aayenge.Sach....
Aap aise hi likhiye zaroor likhiye lekin please Be Happy.
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Aapki Dost.....

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16th July 2006, 12:59 PM
sabne to kafi tarife kar di hai...!!
par humari daad kubul kijiye...
really nice...
just feel like reading it over and over..!!

p.s. i had stopped comin to da site...and now i come here just to read ur shayris..very touchy..!!
   
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hi raj ji - 17th July 2006, 08:34 AM
waah..........................................
maloom hota jo anjaam-e-mohabat to na kartay,
tunay sikhaia humko dil lagana na aata thaa.......

tu bata kaya kami rahi meri mohabat main,
kaya mujhay wada karkay bhulana na aata thaa.....

zamanay nay khub lagaia mere zakhmo pay namak,
mujhay zakham khakay chhupana na aata thaa.....

mere dard ka afsana ik mazak ban kay reh gaya,
haal-e-dil apna mujhay sunana na aata thaa......

is liye tanhai or andhray main jee raha hoon,
mujhay koi naya chiraag jalana na aata thaa.....

sapno kay saath bikhar gaya'veer' ka wajood bhee,
toofano say humay khud ko bachana na aata thaa.......




raj ji app to hame samjate the ki dard mai naa doobo aur app khud hi..................
pata nahi kya baat hoti hai app ki shayri mai ki dil mai teeron ki tarah uttarti jati hai .hamare dard-e-dil ko ek sakoon saa mil jata hai kyunki hame kahan aisi shayri atti hai .jo dil mai mehsoos hum karte hai app usko shabdo ka libaas pehna kar kalam sai uttar dete hai.aisi khoobi hum mai kahan hai issi liye to app ki hi nazmo sai hum apne dil ko karaar dete hai .mai pehli baar iss site par to aise hi shayri padne ke liye aai thi par jabh app ko pehli baar padda to majbooran hamko bhi iss par logon karna pada app ko saraahne ke liye.par jaise jaise hum app ko padte hai aisa lagta hai jaise mujhe shabdo ki kami ho .kyunki shabd hi nahi milte jiss sai app ke dil ki jubaan ko saraaha jaa sake iss liye darte hai ki kahi koi gustakhi na ho jaye kyunki agar sagar ki tareef mai sirf ye bol do ki isme kitna pani hai to uski gehraiyon ki aur gahraiyon mai shipe anmol ratno ki to toheen hi ho jati hai na .issi ummed sai rozz aa jati hoon ki shayed app ne kisi aur dard ko sheeshe mai uttara ho.


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shukria - 19th July 2006, 01:31 PM
kirti ji app nay to bhut lamba chaura likh diya meri tareef main magar main shayad itni tareef ka haqdaar nahi hoon bass dil ke dard ko lafzon main byaa karne ki koshish karta hoon......phir bhee appko meri gazal pasand i main tahe dil say appka shukar guzaar hoon.......raj.........

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hi - 5th August 2006, 01:18 PM
tulsika ji app meri gazlon ko aksar parhti ho....or meri post par bhee zaroor aati ho.....appka tahe dil se shukria......umeed karta hoon aage bhee app yu he meri hosla afzai karti rahogi......raj.....

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tere pyar nay rulaia humay rona na aata thaa,....... - 6th August 2006, 04:39 PM
veer ji aaj aapki post par ye gazar read ki
bahot achhi lagi
aapko itne pyare dard-bhare shabd aur khayal kaha se ate hai
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hi - 9th August 2006, 01:03 PM
veer ji aaj aapki post par ye gazar read ki
bahot achhi lagi
aapko itne pyare dard-bhare shabd aur khayal kaha se ate hai
bahot achha likhte hai aap
aapki dost
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pooja app ko meri gazal pasand i main tahe dil se appka shukar guzaar hoon....umeed karta hoon app yu he mujhe hamesha parti rahogi.....main koshish karounga ki or acha likhu........raj.........

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hi - 17th August 2006, 10:39 AM
really nice!

but i think u sud replace yourself in shayri e dard for this. wat do you say?

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sanam app pehle to mujhe maaf kar de bhut der baad appke reply ka jawaab de raha hoon.....appko meri gazal pasand i main appka shukria aada karta hoon umeed karta hoon yu app mujhe parti rahogi......raj.......

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