Dil Ki Jang

[Musafeer]

Zindagi humse tez bhagri hai, lagraha hai ke hum har rehein hain...

"Dil Ki Jang"

Aaj zindagi ki jang hum hargey hain,
Zinda hai jism magar andar se margey hain,

Is mehfil meh hum unka haat khogey hain,
Dhund dhund key hum ab pagal hogey hain,

Unki badan ki khushbho kelye tarasgey hain,
Hume ghum-e-dunya meh akela chorgey hain,

Apna rasta humare raste se morgey hain,
Ankh mein ansuoo hum akele hogey hein,

Aaj zindagi ki jang hum hargey hain,
Zinda hai jism magar andar se margey hai.

[Shimul]

Written really well. Waise, Pyaar rahta hein zinda sada atma hein yeh maarti nehi aur daarti toh sunle sanam Pyaar tujh se mein karti nehi haan, judai se daarta hein dil.......ek gane ki bol thi. Pyaar sachha ho toh kabhi "andar se maar nehi sakte". I hope you understood how I ment. Daad kabool kijiyega. Likhte rahiyega. Take care. God bless you.

Keep smilling.......

[Musafeer]

Thank you Shimul Jee, I understand where you are comming from, in my essence though I felt, when I wrote this, that when a person has lost the reason for living then what keeps them going and what keeps their inside drive alive... there is no reason to go on other then the memories that one has, so the body lives on to retain those memories but the "inside" dies because they lost their reason for living... I hope that better explains where that came from ... Anyways I always love feedback and I hope that you continue to give me feedback... thanks again... do let me know if you want me to further explain what I mean...
Take care

Musafeer

[Shimul]

Koi explanation ki zaroorat nehi hein, mein samajhsakti hu. My pleasure. I will try my best. Thank you for your reply. I liked that. Likhte rahiyega. God bless you.

Keep smilling.......