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wo dil ban ke dil mein dhadakne lage hai -
7th June 2004, 12:33 PM
mohabbat ke baadal barasne lage hai
wo dil ban ke dil mein dhadakne lage hai yeh kis ne apna keh kar mujhe chu liya mere raat aur din mehakne lage hai wo masoom soorat basi hi dil mein jab se nigahon mein jugnoo chamakne kage hai ek khumar sa rehta hai har dam dil par kadam zindagi ke behakne lage hai kisi ki salamati ki khatir "kureel" dua ko mere haath uthne lage hai -Manoj Kureel karte hai jo "kureel" se gila karte rahein. |
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7th June 2004, 04:09 PM
hello manoj ji
apne kitni khoobsoorti se apni baat kisi ki chahat ke liye bayan ker di!!!!!!!!!shayad apki chhahat ka ye pehla aagaz hai,,jaroor us tak pahuchega ye paigam!!!!! bauht pyari,,rachna swati |
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Re: wo dil ban ke dil mein dhadakne lage hai -
7th June 2004, 05:28 PM
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 (gana tou aur bhi yaad aa gaayi hai lekin aaj jiyada nahin, ok? Just kidding. Ek gana aur jo kuch youn hai...Na jaane keya hua jo tune chhooliya*khila gulab ki tarha mera badan*nikhar nikhar gaayi sawar sawar gaayi, bana ke aaiina tujhe aye Jaan-e-Mann, na jaane keya hua jo tune chhooliya.......Lata Jee. Dilse daad kubool kijiyega aur sath sath ek dost hone ke naate kuch phool bhi...aap ab baas youn hi likhte rahiyega, ok? Khush rahiye yeh Duwa hai aur hamesha rahegi. Take care. God bless you. Keep smilling....... Jiss Jagah Koyi Na Pahuncha Wahaan Tak Pahunche Main Samajhta Huun Harr Dil Mein Khuda Rehta Hain Mera Paigam Mohabbat Hain Jaahan Tak Pahunche** *~~~Ahsan Sherazi Jee~~~** *Pure Love** |
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7th June 2004, 05:52 PM
manoj ji,
bohot hee umda likha hai aapne!samajh mein nahin aaraha ki kin pankhtiyon ki tareef karun !poori rachna hee qabil-e-tareef hai!yunhi likhte rahiyega heena |
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7th June 2004, 08:45 PM
Dear manojbhai,
bahoot khoobsurat....aap ne bahoot time ke baad ishq pe...likha hai......keep it up.....legend manoj bhai.  pappu. |
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Manoj Ji -
8th June 2004, 05:16 AM
Manoj Ji,
Namastai.kaisai hain?Aasha hai achhai hongai.Aapnai bohot achha likha hai.Thoda hatt kai from your style but very nice.Aasha hai yun hi likhtai rahengai. Khayal rakhain, Kavita Toota hua dil aur hoton pai hassi. ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ Pyaar wo nahi tha jo kisi nai kiya Pyaar woh hai jo koi nibha raha hai. ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ Maana ki woh log badnaseeb hotai hai Jinhai pyaar milta to hai par woh usai paichaan nahi paatai par woh log aur bhi badnaseeb hotai hai jinhai pyaar milta hai,woh usai paichaaan bhi jaatai hai par paa nahi saktai. ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ Its better to have loved and lost then to have ever loved before so what if the heart breaks at least you will know LOVE. |
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8th June 2004, 10:48 AM
mohabbat ke baadal barasne lage hai
wo dil ban ke dil mein dhadakne lage hai yeh kis ne apna keh kar mujhe chu liya mere raat aur din mehakne lage hai wo masoom soorat basi hi dil mein jab se nigahon mein jugnoo chamakne kage hai ek khumar sa rehta hai har dam dil par kadam zindagi ke behakne lage hai kisi ki salamati ki khatir "kureel" dua ko mere haath uthne lage hai Manoj Bhai, Dil se nikali Waah kabool farmayein. Kuch tilismayi ehsaas mehsoos kara diye apne. Padh kar sukoon mila ki apka yeh bhi ek andaaz hai, bahut khuub... nacheez zindagii aise jiyo tum dushmano.n ko rashk ho maut ho aisii ke duniyaa der tak maatam kare --Nawaz Deobandi |
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9th June 2004, 12:01 PM
swati ji
dil ki gehraiyon se aapka shukriya aap ne mujhe samjha ,padha aur mere jazbaaton ki kadar ki....ji,, aap ne sahi kaha,,,chahat ka pehla aagaz hai yeh....aap ki hauslaaafzai ka dil ki gehraiyon sede shukriya....apna khayal rakhiye aur sada khush rahiye.... -manoj karte hai jo "kureel" se gila karte rahein. |
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Re: Re: wo dil ban ke dil mein dhadakne lage hai -
9th June 2004, 12:03 PM
shimul ji
itne dinon baad aap ko yahan dekh kar bahoot acha laga.....umeed karta hoon aap khairiyat se hongi.....aap ne to sach bahoot jayada hi tareef kar di hamari..aur nagmon ke gulon se waar diya hamein...dil ki gehraiyon se aapka shukriya.///take care -Manoj karte hai jo "kureel" se gila karte rahein. |
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9th June 2004, 12:04 PM
heena ji
aapko bahoot arse baad dekha ,,,behad acha laga....dil ki gehraiyon se aap ka shukriya...apna khayal rakhiyega -Manoj karte hai jo "kureel" se gila karte rahein. |
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hi -
9th June 2004, 12:21 PM
hello manoj ji....i just dont have the words to express my opinion about such a nice and beautiful poem of urs...ur compositions r always very nice and heart warming....this one is also very beautiful....bye 4 now....take care!
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9th June 2004, 12:55 PM
Brother that is another ourstanding poem that you have written, I am very impressed by your thoughts and poems. Look forward to reading your next poem.
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