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Meenu Di K Liye - 14th October 2004, 12:54 PM

dosto jab se pata chala meenu di ki tabiyat theek nahi...to mujhe bahut chinta ho rahi thi..aur dil kiya unko apna ye sandesh pahuncha du...aur unke swasthey k liye prarthna karu...meri dua hai bhagwaan se ki vo menu di ko jaldi se theek kare...

kyu itni kasak hai seene mai..
jo dil ruk-ruk jaata hai..
kyu dard bhara hai is dil mai..
jo tadfa tadfa jaata hai...

kaise ud kar aa jaau main
chiriya k pankh laga lu main
dekhu tumko aur dhyan karu..
saare dukh apni jholi bharu..

tum jaldi se utth jaao na..
baaho me meri sama jaao na..
meri neend ur gayi dekho to..
ab pyar se dil ko samjhao na..

na ye dard barega fir reh-reh kar..
na machla karega tab reh-reh kar..
aa jaao na ab mujh tak tum..
dua karu theek ho jaao tum..

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14th October 2004, 01:49 PM

Hi Behna,

Bohot hi pyaara laga aapka yeh dedication. Meenu di ke saath is purey parivaar ki duaie humeshaa saath hai.


Meenu Di,

Please jaldi se thik ho jao aur hum sab ke dilo ki yeh kasak mita jao. Hum sab aap ke liye dua kar rahey hai.


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14th October 2004, 01:56 PM

udas ji

aapka bohat bohat shukriya ... jo aapne hum tak unki tabiyat ka hal pahunchaya .... warna hum to dua dene se bhi mehroom reh jate ... waise aapne unke liye jo likha accha laga ... umeed hai unhe bhi pasand aayega ,....

aur meena ji aap

kya bat hai hume bina bataye apni tabiyat kharab kiye baithi hai arre hum log kuch hai ki nahi... chaliye jaldi se theek ho ke aa jaiye hum sabke beech phir se apna maun batne ... aapko nahi maloom wo kitna jaroori hai humare liye ... baccho ka dil nahi todte jaldi se aa jao ... dil se pukar rahe hai ,, nahi to hum aa jayenge aapke pas ... accha apna khayal bohat acche se rakkhiyega di... umeed karounga ki aap jaldi theek ho jayengi ... dua apke sath humesha ....

aapka apna

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14th October 2004, 07:26 PM

Sonu di..

Aapne bahut hi achi rachna likhi... bahut hi pyari..


Meena di..

Aapko kya ho gaya.. shayad tabhi aap mujhe kuch dino se nahi mile... jaldi theek ho jaao dii... aapse baat kiye bina din poora nahi hota... apna khayaal rakho...

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shubhkaamnaaaeiN - 15th October 2004, 01:30 PM

Udas aapki rachna bahut achchhi hai apnepan se bhari....or aapki shubhkaamnaeiN bhi ham dostoN ke saath untak pahuNch hi chuki hoNgi....

Girte haiN sey sawaar hi maidaan-e-jung me...


suna hi hoga aapne...

or hamaari ye jo sawaar haiN na Meena ji...inki chinta mat kijiye...phir dubaara ghode me baithkar aati hi hoNgi kisi bhi pal....

ShubhkaamnaayeiN ...bahut keemti tohfa hai so ...dete rahiye har ek ko.

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hi - 15th October 2004, 04:38 PM

Sunita ji,


sabse pahale aapk shukriyah...
aapne emotional words diye hain..
bahut achchha laga...

main kai dino baad aaya hoon to main meena ji ko hi
dekh raha tha...per unki koi rachana nahi dikhi..
aur phir aapki rachana se mujhe pata chala ki unki tabiyat kheraab hai.

eswer se binati hai ki unhe jald se jald thik kere

meena ji,

aap to dusero ko hashati hai.. bimar ko thik ker deti hain
aur khud hi bimar bani hai...nahi jaldi se thik ho ker aaiye..

shubhkamnao sahit,

Akant...


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16th October 2004, 04:51 PM

hii .........
bahut accha likha hain apne meenudike liye................
fikar na kare woh jaldi theek ho jayegi...........

di.. get well soon..

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17th October 2004, 10:32 AM

sunita or mere pariwaar ke sadasya, mere dost,
maie thhik hu. meri fikar tumhe or yaha poore pariwaar ko ho jaaye yah swabhavik hai...
par ... fir bhi kahti hu thhik hu or jaldi hi wapas aaungi.

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17th October 2004, 12:03 PM

kyu itni kasak hai seene mai..
jo dil ruk-ruk jaata hai..
kyu dard bhara hai is dil mai..
jo tadfa tadfa jaata hai...

kaise ud kar aa jaau main
chiriya k pankh laga lu main
dekhu tumko aur dhyan karu..
saare dukh apni jholi bharu..

tum jaldi se utth jaao na..
baaho me meri sama jaao na..
meri neend ur gayi dekho to..
ab pyar se dil ko samjhao na..

na ye dard barega fir reh-reh kar..
na machla karega tab reh-reh kar..
aa jaao na ab mujh tak tum..
dua karu theek ho jaao tum..


Dear Udas,
Bahut sundar likha hai aapne...If somebody prays with so much love and concern, then how can Meena di be sick for long.. Woh jaldi se theek ho jayengi.. I am sure.....


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Lagta hai is baar "Pulkit", kismat teri bhi rang laayii hai
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