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Love Ho gaya hoon main dildaar kitna... - 27th March 2010, 07:13 PM

Dard ki is mahfile me shareeq hue hazraat ko shaad ka aadaab,
Aaj humne ye post isliye ki hai ki hamara ek dost aisa bhi hai jise is banzar zameen me shabnam ki boonden nazar aati hain... use lagta hai ki aaj bhi fazaon me wo rangat hai jo mujhe benoor nazar aati hai... bas yoon samajh lijiye ki usi tamanna ko poori karne ki koshish kar raha hoon.. ummeed karta hoon koshish pasand aaeygi .. aap sabhi ke hausla-afzaai ka muntazir..


Lekin ye bhi sach hai ki is kalaam pe bhi naam hai usi shakhs ka jo anjaanon ki tarah hi sahi magar is dil me aaj bhi maujood hai...
wo kahte hain na..
Humse bardasht na hui teri rafaqat aye jaana... chal aa zara tujhse dushmani kar ke bhi dekh lete hain.



Jaane kyon ho jata hai gairon pe bhi kabhi aitbaar itna.
Na maut aati hai na wo aati hai, karen bhi to intzaar kitna.

Maine to uski raahon me phool kya khud ko bhi bicha daala,
Kyon kar mera chalna bhi us shakhs ne kar dala dushwar itna.

Suna tha humne kabhi, sharaab haraam hai duniya me ya rab,
Kyon fir har shaam, gunaahon me doob jata hai mahkhwar itna.

Shahar me aam tha kabhi,wo shakhs hai kaliyon se naazuk ,
Aaj maiyat pe bhi khamosh hai, wo ho gaya hai bezaar itna.

Meri khushiyan to teri wafadar thi.N jana, sath tere ho chaleen,
Aaj gham bhi na rakhe saath, ho gaya hoon main dildaar kitna.

Wo kahte hain aksar, tu ishq me likhta nahi kabhi aye 'shaad',
Ragbat ho chali hai gham se, ki ho gaya hai ab ye shumaar itna.


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wahhhhhhhhhhh kahu ya uffffffff... ek ek lafz sidha dil me utar gaya... dard ki aisi tees uthi hai ke mere roungte khade ho gaye... kis sher ki taarif karu kyon ki har sher dil ko chhu gaya.. ehsaas dil-fareb rahe... is dilkash pesh-kash pe dil se daad hazir hai... yuhi apna dard bayaan karte rahiye aur khud ke aur hamare dard ko raahat dete rahiye.... khush rahiye.....

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27th March 2010, 07:44 PM
Dard me doobi is Ghazal ke liye...........dad kabool kare Sameer saheb. Is ghazal me rab se kiya gaya ek sawaal pasand aaya........

Jhoot kehdu yeh meri fitrat me nahi shamil

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28th March 2010, 08:45 AM
Maine to uski raahon me phool kya khud ko bhi bicha daala,
Kyon kar mera chalna bhi us shakhs ne kar dala dushwar itna.

Suna tha humne kabhi, sharaab haraam hai duniya me ya rab,
Kyon fir har shaam, gunaahon me doob jata hai mahkhwar itna.

Nice one......Shaad Bhai......aapki dard me dubi tehreer mujhe bahut pasand aai ......yunhi likhte rahen....khush rahen....

tahe dil se daad hazir hai....qubuul ki karen.....

apna khayal rakhen...
duaaon ke saath....





YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN
Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ...

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Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ...

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28th March 2010, 09:53 AM
Jaane kyon ho jata hai gairon pe bhi kabhi aitbaar itna.
Na maut aati hai na wo aati hai, karen bhi to intzaar kitna.


Bohat khoob Sameer saheb, ..matla mujhe behad pasand aaya......



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28th March 2010, 10:19 AM
Humse bardasht na hui teri rafaqat aye jaana... chal aa zara tujhse dushmani kar ke bhi dekh lete hain.

Meharbaani aapki jo jannat dikha gaye.....

Bahut khoob......

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wahhhhhhhhhhh kahu ya uffffffff... ek ek lafz sidha dil me utar gaya... dard ki aisi tees uthi hai ke mere roungte khade ho gaye... kis sher ki taarif karu kyon ki har sher dil ko chhu gaya.. ehsaas dil-fareb rahe... is dilkash pesh-kash pe dil se daad hazir hai... yuhi apna dard bayaan karte rahiye aur khud ke aur hamare dard ko raahat dete rahiye.... khush rahiye.....
kuch na kaho lamha kuch na kaho.. kuch kah dogi to dard kam ho jaaega seene se,.. maine to inhe dil me chupa ke raakha hai sambhal kar.. kyonki jab tak ye dard rahega us beraham ki yaaden mujhe fir tadpa jaaengi aur yahi tadap mujhe fir se bechain kar jaaengi.. bas aur chahiye hi kya hame.... khair rahi kalam ki baat aapko pasand aaya hamara likha hamari khushnaseebi hai.. aati raahiegaa aur hamari mahfil ki raunak baadhati rahiega...
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Dard me doobi is Ghazal ke liye...........dad kabool kare Sameer saheb. Is ghazal me rab se kiya gaya ek sawaal pasand aaya........

janab sajid saahab ko shaad ka aadaab... dard me doobte tairte logon ki mahfil me agar thodi si dard ki muddat bdh jaae to maza hi alag hai... khair wo sawaal to har aashiq ko hota hai rab se.. allahjane iska jawab kab milega..
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Maine to uski raahon me phool kya khud ko bhi bicha daala,
Kyon kar mera chalna bhi us shakhs ne kar dala dushwar itna.

Suna tha humne kabhi, sharaab haraam hai duniya me ya rab,
Kyon fir har shaam, gunaahon me doob jata hai mahkhwar itna.

Nice one......Shaad Bhai......aapki dard me dubi tehreer mujhe bahut pasand aai ......yunhi likhte rahen....khush rahen....

tahe dil se daad hazir hai....qubuul ki karen.....

apna khayal rakhen...
duaaon ke saath....

janab naresh bhai aapko hamara llikha pasand aaya bas ye samjh lijiye hamara likhna mukammal ho gaya... daad dene ke liye dil ki gahraaiyon se shukriya.... aate rahen
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Jaane kyon ho jata hai gairon pe bhi kabhi aitbaar itna.
Na maut aati hai na wo aati hai, karen bhi to intzaar kitna.


Bohat khoob Sameer saheb, ..matla mujhe behad pasand aaya......
Dear zainy..
ummeed karta hoon khush hongi.. aaj aapko jo yahan paaya to tabiyat mukammal ho gai.. yoon laga ki likhna asardaar hua.. aapko matla tareef ke kabil laga yahi hamari khushnaseebi hai.. aapki keemti raaayon ka muntazir
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Humse bardasht na hui teri rafaqat aye jaana... chal aa zara tujhse dushmani kar ke bhi dekh lete hain.

Meharbaani aapki jo jannat dikha gaye.....

Bahut khoob......
Janab amit saahab aapki tareef ke andaaz ne kaayal kar diya.. aap sabhi doston ka sath hi to hai jisne aaj bhi hame yahan se jod ke rakha hi,.. aate rahiega.


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Shehar me aam tha kabhi,wo shakhs hai kaliyon se naazuk ,
Aaj maiyat pe bhi khamosh hai, wo ho gaya hai bezaar itna.


Shaad saheb bahut badhiya likha hai aapne...aNdar tak utar gaya aapka yeh kalaam....ehsaas itne umda lage ki padhte-padhte maiN khud bahut pichhe chala gaya tha...quoted sheyr is exceptionally beautiful....
daad haazir hai janaab, qubuul kijiyega...

aapka dost,
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Shaad saheb bahut badhiya likha hai aapne...aNdar tak utar gaya aapka yeh kalaam....ehsaas itne umda lage ki padhte-padhte maiN khud bahut pichhe chala gaya tha...quoted sheyr is exceptionally beautiful....
daad haazir hai janaab, qubuul kijiyega...

aapka dost,
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pasand karne ke liye behad shukriya vikram bhai... aapko acha laga yahi badi baat hai... sath dete rahen bhai..
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sameer jee aadaab,
kai dino ke baad mahfil mein wapas aayi hun ...
aate hi aapki yeh ghazal per nazar padi .........jane kyun aapki har ghazal mujhe apna sa lagta hai jaise ki mere soch ko kisine zubaN de diya ......

ghazal sidha dil mein utar gayi
yeh sher mujhe bahut khas laga

Maine to uski raahon me phool kya khud ko bhi bicha daala,
Kyon kar mera chalna bhi us shakhs ne kar dala dushwar itna.

apna khayal rakhiyega
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sameer jee aadaab,
kai dino ke baad mahfil mein wapas aayi hun ...
aate hi aapki yeh ghazal per nazar padi .........jane kyun aapki har ghazal mujhe apna sa lagta hai jaise ki mere soch ko kisine zubaN de diya ......

ghazal sidha dil mein utar gayi
yeh sher mujhe bahut khas laga

Maine to uski raahon me phool kya khud ko bhi bicha daala,
Kyon kar mera chalna bhi us shakhs ne kar dala dushwar itna.

apna khayal rakhiyega
khus rahiyega

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pyari diya aadaab..
aap aaye hamari bazm me aur hame pasand kiya isliye aapke tahedil se shukrguzaar hain.. aapko padhkar bas main itna kahna chahunga ki

GHAZAL TO WAHI HAI JO DIL SE NIKLE AUR DIL TAK JAAE...

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