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meri betiyaan -
10th May 2006, 08:52 PM
mat samjho betiyon ko bojh.......
yeh toh aangan main chehakatee si sonchariya hain..... ghar ki diwaron aur makaan ke terrace per, mehaktee si phulwariyaan hain........ gilahari si fudaktee .......... yeh jhilmilatee si phooljhariyaan har pal chehaktee . record si bajtee hain....... apni chulbuli baaton se ghar ko jeevan deti hain.... inse toh ghar ka har kona bhara-bhara sa lagta hai.. yeh na ho toh ghar ka angana suna-suna sa lagata hai..... meri mehaktee yeh phoolwariyan ... apne bade kaamo se hamara maan badayengee. yeh toh hai ghar ka gehana , ........ apni abha se yeh sitraoon ko bhi chhoo aayengi.... nahi hai yah bojh ham par ......... apne sundar kaamo se yeh...... suraj ke kirano si duniya main chhaa jayengi........... |
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10th May 2006, 09:03 PM
bahut kamal kee baat kahee betiton ke liye tum ne tum jantee ho hamaree shubhkamana ke bina bhee sab shubh hga tab bhee dheron shubhkamanyen dete hain inhe in ka jeewan poore samaj kee vichardhara badal de bahut sundar rachana hai
Anil kho gaye hain woh log ab un kee justzoo hai |
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11th May 2006, 08:27 AM
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11th May 2006, 03:08 PM
achha likha hai ranjana
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Re: meri betiyaan -
12th May 2006, 02:18 PM
"mat samjho betiyon ko bojh.......
yeh toh aangan main chehakatee si sonchariya hain..... ghar ki diwaron aur makaan ke terrace per, mehaktee si phulwariyaan hain........" Very nice.....bohat sahi kaha hai MAa wo phoolwariyaan hi hai "gilahari si fudaktee .......... yeh jhilmilatee si phooljhariyaan har pal chehaktee . record si bajtee hain....... apni chulbuli baaton se ghar ko jeevan deti hain.... inse toh ghar ka har kona bhara-bhara sa lagta hai.. yeh na ho toh ghar ka angana suna-suna sa lagata hai....." Maa aapne apne hi jazbaato ko yaha sabado mein dhala hai bohat acha laga shayad meri dono pyaari sis aesi hi hogi.....arey pehle bhanji thi ab sis ban gati  "meri mehaktee yeh phoolwariyan ... apne bade kaamo se hamara maan badayengee. yeh toh hai ghar ka gehana , ........ apni abha se yeh sitraoon ko bhi chhoo aayengi.... nahi hai yah bojh ham par ......... apne sundar kaamo se yeh...... suraj ke kirano si duniya main chhaa jayengi........... " Maan zaroor badhayegi Maa par jo gayi hai  Aapko padhkar dil ko acha laga..........shukriyah apka Beta Diggaj Quote:
kabhi humne yu khud ko harata naa dekha Kaise Samjhau Dil-e-hasarat-nasiib Ko Apne K Sab Kuch Milta Nahi Chah Lene Se Ish Zamane Mein..... "Diggaj" |
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12th May 2006, 06:08 PM
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shukriya ANIL JI....................betiyaan bahut payari hoti hai. pure ghar ke roonak inhi se hoti hai...........jis ghar mein beti nahi woh ghar registaan ke saaman hai............shukriya aapne isko pada aur pasand kiya.......... thanks ranju |
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12th May 2006, 06:10 PM
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12th May 2006, 06:13 PM
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tumne isko itne pyar se pada aur paand kiya accha laga ...........with lots of love ranju |
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13th May 2006, 10:52 AM
good one Ranju,
nanha fool se aageka verson dene ke liye,bilkul sahi likha he,jis ghar me betiya nahi vo ghar chahe kitna hi khubsurat ho aabad ho par jese chandra me bhi ek dag he vesa vo ghar hota he. gilahari si fudaktee .......... yeh jhilmilatee si phooljhariyaan har pal chehaktee . record si bajtee hain....... apni chulbuli baaton se ghar ko jeevan deti hain.... inse toh ghar ka har kona bhara-bhara sa lagta hai.. yeh na ho toh ghar ka angana suna-suna sa lagata hai..... with best wishes and love ilesh shah |
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21st May 2006, 09:54 AM
GUD JOB RANJU
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22nd May 2006, 04:05 PM
Bahut Khub Likha hai apne......keep it up..
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13th June 2006, 01:37 PM
yakinan ye aapke liye aashcharya-janak hoga,but sasbse pehle aapko pada aur phir kisi ko padne ko dil hi nahi hua..............sach mai.dil ke kisi kone main apne haalaton ke jaisi lagti eis rachna ne kai ghaawo par marham lagaya to kabhi dil ko chu liya.....................................ofcourse u r the best..................n badi khushnaseeb hain wo jinki aap jaisi maa hain. ...................................
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1st July 2006, 10:42 AM
bahut hi achha likha hai
~*~ EK SHAYAR Anjaan~*~ 
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Re: meri betiyaan -
21st July 2006, 12:40 PM
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sach mai betiya bahut pyari hoti hai. .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए... 
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