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mujhe acha laga - 14th January 2006, 09:01 PM

dosto yeh kalam mujhpe aur hamare kai saathiyo par hai jo apne pyar ko bhula nahi paye aur unki yaadein kis tarah aakar mann ko behlati hai yeh batana chahta hu pasand aaye to bata dena aur na pasand aaye to maaf kar dena......

Door reh kar bhi tujh se juda ho kar bhi
tujh se mohabbat karna mujhe acha laga

Itne faslay mein bhi hain teri qurbat ke mazay
tujh se milna,tujh ko chahna mujhe acha laga

Silsalay teri yaadun ke phailay hain har taraf
teri chah,teri raah mein bhatakna mujhe acha laga

Raakh urrne lagi hai mann mein jalti bujhti yaadon ki
shaam dhalay teri yaad ke deep jalana mujhe acha laga

Kaise kahun tere bin dahsti hai mujh ko tanhaii
teri ulfat,teri furqat mein raat-jaga karna mujhe acha laga

Woh aanch thi hawa mein ke kali tak bhi sulagg gaii
aise mein tera ghatta ban ke barasna mujhe acha laga

Faslay mitt na paaein ge in dooriun ke kabhi
tasawar mein tera aa ke dil ko behlana mujhe acha laga

Cheen li neend jab aa ke teray khayalon ne
teri tasweer pe chupke se honthon ko rakhna mujhe acha laga.


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Re: mujhe acha laga - 15th January 2006, 08:55 AM

kya kahun mehul bhaut hi achha likha hai ,

Cheen li neend jab aa ke teray khayalon ne
teri tasweer pe chupke se honthon ko rakhna mujhe acha laga.

whwww in flow and ek ek sabad sundar.
pyare bhiyaa aise hi lkhte raho

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dosto yeh kalam mujhpe aur hamare kai saathiyo par hai jo apne pyar ko bhula nahi paye aur unki yaadein kis tarah aakar mann ko behlati hai yeh batana chahta hu pasand aaye to bata dena aur na pasand aaye to maaf kar dena......

Door reh kar bhi tujh se juda ho kar bhi
tujh se mohabbat karna mujhe acha laga

Itne faslay mein bhi hain teri qurbat ke mazay
tujh se milna,tujh ko chahna mujhe acha laga

Silsalay teri yaadun ke phailay hain har taraf
teri chah,teri raah mein bhatakna mujhe acha laga

Raakh urrne lagi hai mann mein jalti bujhti yaadon ki
shaam dhalay teri yaad ke deep jalana mujhe acha laga

Kaise kahun tere bin dahsti hai mujh ko tanhaii
teri ulfat,teri furqat mein raat-jaga karna mujhe acha laga

Woh aanch thi hawa mein ke kali tak bhi sulagg gaii
aise mein tera ghatta ban ke barasna mujhe acha laga

Faslay mitt na paaein ge in dooriun ke kabhi
tasawar mein tera aa ke dil ko behlana mujhe acha laga

Cheen li neend jab aa ke teray khayalon ne
teri tasweer pe chupke se honthon ko rakhna mujhe acha laga.


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Re: Re: mujhe acha laga - 16th January 2006, 08:50 AM

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kya kahun mehul bhaut hi achha likha hai ,

Cheen li neend jab aa ke teray khayalon ne
teri tasweer pe chupke se honthon ko rakhna mujhe acha laga.

whwww in flow and ek ek sabad sundar.
pyare bhiyaa aise hi lkhte raho

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thnks dd hume bhi achha likhna padega aapse muqabla jo kar raha hu aur jeetne ki koshish kar raha hu


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16th January 2006, 10:05 AM

Dear Mehul bhai,

Dard hai mujhe bhi itna jitna apne likha hai
padh kar aisi ghazal kasam se accha laga


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16th January 2006, 01:22 PM

Door reh kar bhi tujh se juda ho kar bhi
tujh se mohabbat karna mujhe acha laga

Itne faslay mein bhi hain teri qurbat ke mazay
tujh se milna,tujh ko chahna mujhe acha laga

Waaaaahhh...khoobsurat bayaani hai..!


Silsalay teri yaadun ke phailay hain har taraf
teri chah,teri raah mein bhatakna mujhe acha laga

Raakh urrne lagi hai mann mein jalti bujhti yaadon ki
shaam dhalay teri yaad ke deep jalana mujhe acha laga

Kya baat hai...!


Kaise kahun tere bin dahsti hai mujh ko tanhaii
teri ulfat,teri furqat mein raat-jaga karna mujhe acha laga

Woh aanch thi hawa mein ke kali tak bhi sulagg gaii
aise mein tera ghatta ban ke barasna mujhe acha laga

Waaaaaaaahhhh...tooo good an expression..!


Faslay mitt na paaein ge in dooriun ke kabhi
tasawar mein tera aa ke dil ko behlana mujhe acha laga

Cheen li neend jab aa ke teray khayalon ne
teri tasweer pe chupke se honthon ko rakhna mujhe acha laga.

beautifulll...!

Mehul,

Haev u written this? I never thot u cud write this beautiful... Thsi one is just fabulous... har sher har alfaaz khoobsurat hai....Bahut hi accha flow bhi hai... Sach me yeh bahut khoobsurat hai...mer daad kubool akrna dil se...!

U can write really very well...Aise hi likhte raho...Do TC...!


Kab sochaa thha milegaa humsafar "Shweta" jaisaa
Lagta hai is baar "Pulkit", kismat teri bhi rang laayii hai

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17th January 2006, 08:44 AM

mahakti hai unki fizain is dil ke gulshan mein aaz bhi
is gulshan ko bagh bagh kar ke jana accha laga

dil ki fizaon mein masti looti humne bhi
is dil ke darwaze ko tod kar jana accha laga

is dil ke samunder me gahrai itni hai
ki tera naha ke jana accha laga


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18th January 2006, 03:16 PM

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Dear Mehul bhai,

Dard hai mujhe bhi itna jitna apne likha hai
padh kar aisi ghazal kasam se accha laga
thnx for liking


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18th January 2006, 03:18 PM

Quote:
Originally posted by Pulkit_gupta
Door reh kar bhi tujh se juda ho kar bhi
tujh se mohabbat karna mujhe acha laga

Itne faslay mein bhi hain teri qurbat ke mazay
tujh se milna,tujh ko chahna mujhe acha laga

Waaaaahhh...khoobsurat bayaani hai..!


Silsalay teri yaadun ke phailay hain har taraf
teri chah,teri raah mein bhatakna mujhe acha laga

Raakh urrne lagi hai mann mein jalti bujhti yaadon ki
shaam dhalay teri yaad ke deep jalana mujhe acha laga

Kya baat hai...!


Kaise kahun tere bin dahsti hai mujh ko tanhaii
teri ulfat,teri furqat mein raat-jaga karna mujhe acha laga

Woh aanch thi hawa mein ke kali tak bhi sulagg gaii
aise mein tera ghatta ban ke barasna mujhe acha laga

Waaaaaaaahhhh...tooo good an expression..!


Faslay mitt na paaein ge in dooriun ke kabhi
tasawar mein tera aa ke dil ko behlana mujhe acha laga

Cheen li neend jab aa ke teray khayalon ne
teri tasweer pe chupke se honthon ko rakhna mujhe acha laga.

beautifulll...!

Mehul,

Haev u written this? I never thot u cud write this beautiful... Thsi one is just fabulous... har sher har alfaaz khoobsurat hai....Bahut hi accha flow bhi hai... Sach me yeh bahut khoobsurat hai...mer daad kubool akrna dil se...!

U can write really very well...Aise hi likhte raho...Do TC...!
kya bhai sach main yeh kavita meri hi hai aur aapko pasand aayi dil ko khush kar diya


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18th January 2006, 03:20 PM

Quote:
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mahakti hai unki fizain is dil ke gulshan mein aaz bhi
is gulshan ko bagh bagh kar ke jana accha laga

dil ki fizaon mein masti looti humne bhi
is dil ke darwaze ko tod kar jana accha laga

is dil ke samunder me gahrai itni hai
ki tera naha ke jana accha laga


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good 1 neal


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18th January 2006, 04:18 PM

dard hota hai aaj bhi mujhe itna
lakin aapka good 1 kahna accha laga



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18th January 2006, 07:32 PM

Mehul,

I can just tell you one thing about what you have written, I hope you understand what i mean... "Mujhe Accha Laga"


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Destiny is what you make off,
Be the creator of your destiny,
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19th January 2006, 08:54 AM

Dear Balaji

I am not telling to you and I just not replied to ur shyari understand.
I replied to only Mehul bhai For his Good 1 .
from another time just understand the replies and than reply to anybody

Bye and Take care


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Mehul,

I can just tell you one thing about what you have written, I hope you understand what i mean... "Mujhe Accha Laga"

thnx balaji for coming and liking it.............................


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aur neal bhai aur balajui bhai main kya chal raha hai


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